• Member Since 30th Jan, 2013
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Golden Script

"Love is friendship set to music." -Joseph Campbell


Beazley, a young shut-in stallion, goes to a Manehattan club late one night with his friend, Jophiel. Though he was abandoned immediately, his plans of staying at his table all night didn't change much.

Of course, he wasn't accounting for her.

All credit for the inspiration for the story goes to Flogging Molly's Devil's Dance Floor.

Credit for cover goes to Flogging Molly for the theme and Rautakoura's "The Mane 6, Suited and Suave" for the pony.
I, Golden Script, vectored and assembled the two works.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 21 )

Nice story but ... It just can't end there!! :fluttershbad:

We need a sequel right now!!

Though that would definitely be interesting, this was a quick idea that came to mind over the holiday season. I can't guarantee there won't be any sequel, but I'm definitely not going to promise one. :raritywink:

As I said: great story, but I feel the ending is too short.

Also: You're a mean tease, you know that? :D

I'm trying to write short stories based off of songs. This is the first of what I hope are many to come.

And you have no idea how much I've been told that. :trollestia:

I can tell. I write chapters based of songs.

But I've thought about Metallica's - Devil's Dance first when I read the chapter title for the first time.

Oh. Sorry if I disappointed you...

There is nothing to be sorry for. It was the first song that came to my mind (because I can play it on drums) and thats it. :D

Alright. Fair enough.

Anyway, hope you enjoyed this and any other stories I write in the future!

Wow!! That was amazing!!! Loved this!!

Uh... thanks?

(more in the response to your other comment)

7920396 What's so weird about liking your stuff? You did write this, right? I'm not crazy am I? I thought it was well written!

It wasn't a weird ellipses! It was a hesitant ellipses! Like, I wasn't sure how to respond because I was surprised and kinda happy!

7920669 Oh! Well, I did like it! It was short, but creative, and not the ending I was expecting! I loved it!

I don't even remember what I wrote for the ending! :pinkiehappy:


You should read your own stuff then!! :derpytongue2:

But that's so boring! I usually know how it will end! Why read something you know the ending to when you can read something that's so unpredictable?

For me it was unpredictable though!! :twilightsmile:

I hope it was! If my stories were generic, nobody would read them! :rainbowlaugh:


Haha!! :rainbowlaugh: you should be proud then!!

Pride is one of the Seven Deadly Sins! I call him Vainglory! :rainbowlaugh:

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