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David Silver


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Welcome to Equestria. We just need you to answer some questions about how and why you've visited before you can proceed. This should only take a moment.

Done entirely on a whim. As I do each chapter, if your choice doesn't exist yet, comment with the number, and I'll get to writing that choice up for the readers who come behind you (and you too obviously!)

This will go until I go crazy, at which point I will declare such has happened, and all future paths will lead to endings, but I promise, I swear, that no branch will be left entirely unresolved.

Chapters (36)
Comments ( 152 )

I think you need to connect this one to chapter 8. I'm not sure if you're aware or not. But if you are, well then. :derpytongue2:

:pinkiehappy:

Derpy's sooooo cute!

(Choice 2, chapter 6. )

Should be interesting once every option is finished.

I came by choice, dadgummit!

I snoop through her desk for loot!

Was I just disintegrated? Damn.

No! My Ashes!

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You tried. If you got here, surely this is the path to another place and time.

This is a really cool story dude!

:twilightsmile: (Chapter 9, choice 1). Platonic. I love ponies but I don't love them that much.

P.S "insrtucted"

Chapter 9, choice 2: Well, if put it that way...

"Transportation"... yeah, right...

Chrome chamber? The Andromeda Strain? :rainbowderp:

"Place all your weapons there, or have no weapons to place."

Okie dokie.

(Chapter 10, Choice 1)

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Fixed, but also option added!

Well...maybe Libidinous, if she's up for it. She's nice, and if she wants something long or quick, I'm down for um....for either. Yeh

I'd like to move proper. It'd be nice to get out of her way. From what I can see, there are a lot of people waiting in line and I'd rather let her get on with her day.

:pinkiehappy: Door Time!

Even if I become a copy of Derpy Hooves, it'll be fine. :)

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I must have gotten it while you were reading, but the option's ready!

Shouldn't the "have no weapons to place" be a separate choice? After all, the reaction to someone who arrives with no weapons should be different from the reaction to someone who arrives with several weapon.

Chapter 10, choice 3.

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Apologies, but I only want to write so many chappies. :D If I do every logical outcome, I could be here forever.

UUF... Nope 4 leged suck

Wow......RIP....

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You are eagerly sniffing out ends, I see.

Yes it's my thing too hunt the bits that are more appealing.

Nice job! Kinda wished that I wasn’t hit by that truck though… . I wanted to go out on my own terms! But that’s life XD

1- you are from south america.
2- you are from Europe.

Soo... i chose 1 :rainbowlaugh:

I go for number 2 here.

Ha! I almost thought you were gonna pull a Sinbad reference on me...

(Chapter 12, Option 2)

"Welcome to Equestria! A place so kind that despite having working portals to other dimensions we just murder everyone who doesn't want to stay! Aren't we great?"

This sucks. Why can't I go as a human? Frickin' racist ponies, man.

Looks like you got takers for 1 and 2, so im gonna go out for a subversive option here.

"Tell her about a world where love and kindness reigns. You were exiled for your acts of malice."

Why do I get this feeling that Pinkie Pie is off to the side playing chess with the being Oveseeing this area?:pinkiehappy:

I wonder if "lost on the way to disney world" is on the list yet

I would go with the unarmed choice, just a tourist.

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:twilightsheepish:

Being an alien on a planet of herbivores comes with it's whole set of issues. Plus what if you contract a disease that they don't know about and end up becoming patient zero in an outbreak. And while fish may help you, I don't think the ponies know enough about human nutrition requirements to help you survive as a pescatarian. Especially because you'll need a lot of iron in your diet. Not to mention calcium and removing all the hay from foods.

It's generally for the best.

Though there is something really funny about becoming a chestnut pony with a chocolate mane. Kinda reminds me of a horse toy my favorite librarian had. Though maybe the mane on the horse toy was white; it's been I wanna say over a decade since I've seen her.

No clue at all here.

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To go to a whole, separate, reality, is death for the you that is here. In theory, the you that is there is doing fine. Portals are specific and horrible things with a boat of their own issues.

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You're both asking for options that aren't here. If I finish all the branches to completion and am up for it, I may consider a few branches people asked for that aren't already there. Super appreciate you both reading and commenting either way! ❤️💖

No idea is not a link

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on a planet of herbivores

Griffons, hippogriffs, dragons and most of Klugetown would like to have a word with you. Ponies go fishing and have carnivorous pets like Opalescence, too.

Plus what if you contract a disease that they don't know about and end up becoming patient zero in an outbreak.

If they can change someone's entire body to something completely different, then curing diseases is a breeze for them.

Especially because you'll need a lot of iron in your diet. Not to mention calcium and removing all the hay from foods.

Student six are doing just fine.

It's generally for the best.

It's for the worse unless you're a self-hating misanthrope.

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Doesn't change the fact that murdering people is incredibly OOC for ponies. Also hypocritical, the guy who tried to gun them down got sentenced immediately but it's okay when they do it?

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