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"Did you try setting it to Wumbo?"

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Sounds interesting to read il give this a go sometime when you have more chapters up

>pawg slut gets her cheecks clapped

*kissing my fingers like an eyetalian chef*

I might have to do this later on when I'm not musing over serious business

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I made it myself. Edited a couple of vectors.

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You'll just have to keep reading to find out. :raritywink:

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My interest in reading a romance story leans entirely on the target relationship. If you're not willing to say, that's alright; I can check in later.

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Sorry, I want it to be a surprise and wouldn't want to spoil the story for you.

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I edited a couple vectors from separate sources and put them together. The base for AJ came from Racoon-kun.

Apple Bloom led out a shuddering sigh of relief.

Should that be "let" instead of "led"?

A new naturalist story !!! And it has my favorite pony Applejack in it, Perfect combo here

Applejack furrowed her brow. “Nude modelin’? Uhh… Ah never gave it any thought, ta be honest. Don’t git me wrong; I’m plenty comfortable with mah body. But Ah can’t imagine too many people would want a muscled-up farm gal like me ta pose for ‘em.”

Me watching her walk around the farm from my home using clairvoyance.
https://youtu.be/bcQVrCXuu4k?t=255

Oh boy, another story I'm almost certainly going to try and follow, yet be WAY behind on XD. Legit though, I'm looking forward to seeing how this story stands out from the others :).

Are you going to finish this story

This is a very good story so far :twilightsmile: The topic presented is also very interesting, being a naturist and not opening up to other people because of the fear of being called a pervert. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Very awesome beginning for this story, my friend!

So I've noticed certain re-occuring elements within your naturist stories, such as characters commenting on the subject of public hair or the size of one's penis. On their own, these aren't necessarily bad, but it does feel like you're writing more cookie-cutter naturist stories without much to distinguish them. Your strengths are in writing character depth with an understanding of how naturism expresses that, but premise wise, this doesn't feel all that distinct from your previous Rarity AU story.

Solid C+ for an opening chapter, I just hope it's going somewhere interesting.

Such a great chapter. I really like how Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo have now accepted the naturism of AJ's family.

I thought maybe Scootaloo was going to have an epiphany, but it didn't happen. Oh well, maybe later.

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We didn't think that was realistic.

I liked the inclusion of Zecora in this story.

I'm just going to say it. If Apple Bloom is only 13 here, she shouldn't be nude. She's way underage.

“Not at all, darling! Nothing a simple text message can’t fix. I just want to make sure that you’re comfortable with me sharing your personal phone number. Don’t worry; I shan’t share it with any nefarious characters. NOT that I would associate with such scoundrels in the first place.”

I can see Fluttershy as a Naturlist, And Pinkiepie just lacking inhibitions.

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That kind of thinking is really American. The lack of clothes is not inherently sexual. I would think, if you're this far, that you would have read one of the many mentions in this story of the Apple family disliking how other people don't get that.

You dense, empty tin can.

With every new chapter, I'm loving this story more!

For example I really enjoyed the outing between Rarity and AJ along with how Rares accepted AJ's naturism. I honestly hope that AJ accepts Rarity's proposal of becoming a nude model for Canterlot University.

I also liked how Bloom and Scoots took Sweetie Belle out to the mall for some window shopping, even though they didn't like.

Lastly, I love how the beautiful Zecora is a honorary member of the Apple family and that she has a strong bond with Apple Bloom like in the show. Plus I like how she's a naturist like the rest of the Apple family.

For a woman in her early forties, Zecora looked exceptionally hale for her age.

Now this is the first time I've seen the word "hale" used in describing a person. I'm always fascinated with such rich vocabulary like that, ever since high school.

So this is not EQG-land. OK.

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All characters are fully humanized with human skin tones. With the exception of hair color.

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I was more thinking along the lines of no EQG events in its past. I'd suspected, but this confirmed for sure.

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That was one of the many things Trav and I considered when coming up with the original story concept. EQG or Not, Magic or Not. Ultimately, we wanted this rendition of "Equestria" to be more akin to the real world, rather than add any fantasy elements.

Also, the decision to go mundane human world was meant to differentiate this story from my other naturist-themed stories such as: Camp Naturally, and Clothes Don't Always Make The Woman. Both of those are EQG and have magic/fantasy themes interspersed throughout.

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Absolutely. Just, I was noting that it was finally confirmed in the story just how AU this is: no EQG events at all.

Well, I really like that Haki is willing to start connecting with his aunt now. Plus, I'm officially your first Haki x Applejack shipper for this story!

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There's only occasional swearing. I don't feel like that warrants it's own tag. :unsuresweetie:

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I can see Fluttershy as a Naturlist, And Pinkiepie just lacking inhibitions.

Fluttershy's already a bit of a naturalist. She loves animals. :derpytongue2:

Wow! I honestly think it's so wonderful that Big Mac is going to start rekindling his feelings with Cheerilee! Let's just hope she doesn't mind him being a life long nudist when they start dating.

Also I was initially fearful that Sandalwood presence in AJ's college life would cause a love triangle between them and Haki. But thankfully I don't have to worry now that I know Sandalwood is already in a relationship.

Nice chapter, sets things up nicely. The only bit I'm not sure about is the way Sandalwood speaks. He sounds more like a posh art critic than a dude-bro with a fancy for the arts. If that's what you're going for, more power to you. It's just gonna take a bit of getting used to.

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Yes, that was the intention. I made him a bit more posh than in EQG.

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Call me weird, I can't hear the name Sandalwood without immediately thinking of Daisy Jo from All American Mare.

Beautiful chapter :twilightsmile: It is very nice to see that Big Mac didn't miss the opportunity to ask Cheerilee out.
Let's see how Applejack will do as a model, I truly hope that there won't be any perverts. Oh and one more thing, I think that you have forgotten the quotation marks here:

“That’s so cool, Ms. Cheerliee,” Apple Bloom gushed. Where else have ya been?"

Fig Garden? Is that some off-brand knockoff of Olive Garden?

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