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Enclave2277
"Did you try setting it to Wumbo?"
Enclave2277
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I prefer FlashLight, but this wasn't that bad. Here, have an upvote!
This is a nifty idea.
A novel pairing. Well done all around!
Good story, good writing.
not a bad ship id say
Unusual paring, and well done to boot.
Nice work.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Also who did that cover art?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Flash x Gilda. That's one i never thought of before but i like it
That was a sweet story.
Not bad... not bad at all...
Wouldn't mind seeing a sequel. Maybe back at school and they try streaking? Anyways have an up vote
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I edited it a bit, but that's the original.
Thumbs up my friend and just enough read to finish breakfast......
....................ughh.... pls tell me its not weird to read this with breakfast in the morning.
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♫ My motto's always been 'when it's right, it's right'
Why wait until the middle of a cold dark night?
When everything's a little clearer in the light of day
And we know the night is always gonna be there any way ♫
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I'd say that this is another pornographic story of a couple that's having sex within seconds of one asking the other out, but the reason behind this one actually makes it almost seem like a way that it could realistically happen. As for the selection of characters, this one intensely fascinates me. Both characters have been put in situations that would've likely left the two single should they have not met, but their meating and how they met is almost as if some divine force paved the path for these two to be together...
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Enclave2277, you made a beautiful piece of literature! Keep up the good work!
The early part of the story is maybe a bit too wordy and could use some polish, but once Gilda shows up, the story finds its groove. I like your characterization; Flash is a bit of a doofus but gallant and obviously a good guy, while Gilda's a nice mix of tough, touchy and aggressive but with a softer side to her. And their interaction is good: I can believe these are two horny but little uncertain teenagers going at it for the first time. All in all, very well done!
Never saw this coming, and it was good.
I read this again and...this is still the best I think the author's made. Its that good.
Wow! Flash Sentry and Gilda. That's a unique couple. I never knew Gilda had a human counterpart. Good work.