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This story is a sequel to Flutter and Emerald


It's only been a few weeks since the Peace family moved to the Green Hill Club, but things have hardly settled down. New friends look set to join the club, and old enemies are out for revenge.

Co-written by https://www.fimfiction.net/user/266833/Khialat

Cover art by https://www.fimfiction.net/user/266833/Khialat

Chapters (16)
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Nice to see the finished chapter :twilightsmile: Just a couple of mistakes that I made at one point:

Just like Fuchsia had been when she first set foot in it, Sugarcoat, Sunny, and Fleur were very much impressed by the Globes' garden. They marveled at the variety of plants, and Sugarcoat sat down by the pond and dipped her feet in the water.

"This is amazing," Fleur sighed. "It's like being in some kind of fantasy jungle."

"Four Eves in a little Eden, eh?" quipped Sugarcoat. "Too bad our only Adam has his own upstairs."

Flutter decided to start a special girls' chat. "So, are any of you girls interested in anyone?" she asked teasingly.

Something about the Shadowbolts, if this takes place in the NLAC canon this contradicts their representation in NLAC Has to Deal with WHAT?!

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NLAC Has To Deal With What is no longer canon according to Blake Skies

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Then the events that spark my Sunset and Sci Twi story aren't canon and my has no reason to exist now.:rainbowderp:

Apparently it's not spelled Fleur de Lis, the French way.

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no, the official name is Fleur Dis Lee

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well, maybe use this time to rewrite it?

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Nah, I've haad no motivation to actually finish the story, let alone re-write.

Glad not all of Crystal Prep or Candle didn't just go nudist. Kinda loses it's touch when everyone around just becomes part of nudism.

Like the Flutterdash pairing. But there is one issue, Spike was with Twilight during her first outing at the NLAC so this shouldn't be a surprise to him.

Interesting developments in the continuation.

A new character appears!

Hope it goes well in the coming chapters.

When is the next chapter?

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when I have a solid idea

Nice to see the full thing up at last :twilightsmile: Just a couple of corrections that I should have made, though:

"as she now stood entirely naked and not trying to cover anything."

"keen to avoid putting up with either Pinkie's assistance or more of Aria's panicking."

"Rosie could not help but smirk and raise an eyebrow."

I am really liking this sequel so much. I can’t wait to read more, especially Flutter and Emerald’s parts.

Great chapter! Also I didn’t expect Flutter to kiss Sour and have her join their relationship.

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It gets a little more complicated later on

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Emerald develops a crush on the new male student

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Oh wow! I’ll admit I did not see that coming.

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but next one is going to be mishaps with the invisibility ray

Thank you for posting the next chapter. It was fun.

Another thing that needs correcting, sorry!
"That's all that I needed to know," Sunset smiled before taking her leave.

I didn’t know Emerald loving him back would convince him to do nudism. Also really good chapter. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

I may be reading it wrong, but it looks like Viridian took off his shirt and pants twice. Before he kissed Emerald, and then again after recovering from fainting.

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he was wearing his trunks underneath

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It looks like he took off his shirt twice.
Before he kisses Emerald

"I warned you," Sour shrugged as he removed his shirt and pants, revealing he was wearing trunks underneath.

And after he passes out and regains consciousness

Viridian nodded as Emerald helped pull his shirt off.

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Just one correction to make - when I wrote it, my spell-checker turned Sonata's "realsies" into "realises" - could you change that?

When you say the Mayor's been blackmailed, you mean someone's on to her being a nudist?

When is the next one coming out?

Great choice putting in that Lake Lachrymose restaurant from Netflix A series of unfortunate events

I bet Chalk will be super happy to live with Flutter and her family.

Yep. A job well done for both of us on this one :ajsmug:

Best chapter yet!!!!!

This was a really great chapter. And now we found out the real culprit who was blackmailing the mayor. Curse you Spoiled Rich!

So is Diamond Tiara eventually a nudist now?

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Never thought I’d see that happen. But that’s a good thing, not just because they found out who was blackmailing the mayor, but also because Diamond got her best friend back. Can’t wait to read more keep up the good work! 👍🏻

Is there gonna be one more chapter after this?

there's going to be several chapters dealing with the new Canterlot

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Several? I’m actually really surprised and excited about that. I can’t wait to see how the new Canterlot is going to be like. Keep up the good work!

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