Surrender

MMeltdown
Equestria Girls
Romance
Comedy
Porn
Flash Sentry and Sunset Shimmer sneak into the walk-in cooler to chill out... but end up getting even hotter.
Sex
Profanity
Lyra
Bon-Bon
Sunset Shimmer
Flash Sentry
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Unshackled_Unbroken

Unshackled_Unbroken #1 · Jan 19th, 2020 · 1 · ·

SuperSaiyanDiclonius

SuperSaiyanDiclonius #2 · Jan 19th, 2020 · 3 · ·

A decent read as far as clop fics go. Well done.

Comickook

Comickook #3 · Jan 20th, 2020 · 3 · ·

Actually a pretty good one-shot clop fic. Steamy and sweet at the same time, and it helps that Flash and Sunset are one of my favorite ships in this franchise.

PhycoKrusk

PhycoKrusk #4 · Jan 20th, 2020 · 1 · ·

You know, I hadn't really put a lot of thought into it until just now, but there's something about this pair that is very compelling.

Darkstarling

Darkstarling #5 · Jan 20th, 2020 · 1 · ·

I actually like Flash and Sunset. Not as much as Twi or Rarity, but surprisingly high in my ship ratings. My main complaint is that it skipped right over the buildup, which is the fun bit for a surrender type thing.

onekface

onekface #6 · Jan 20th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Steamy... very steamy...
But I do admit that it jumped the gun rather quickly. It would benefit with more build up.
Regardless it was very... very steamy...

laofuzi

laofuzi #7 · Jan 20th, 2020 · 5 · ·

What happens when the irresistible force meets the immovable object?

It shatters and crumbles, before being atomized. Easiest physics question ever.

It wasn’t love, at least not in the romantic sense.

But it was something . That was for damn sure.

Platonic love??

For Sunset, she’d simply remind the conversation starter about how different she’d been back then, literally obsessed with seizing power and creating an army to conquer her home dimension.

Don't forget splitting friendships with fake text messages and badly photoshopped images

Flash entered the apartment and looked around. It wasn’t the first time he’d been here, but it had been quite a while. He spied the tank that held Sunset’s lizard and gave the creature a little wave.

It didn’t wave back. Because it was a lizard.

Plus he was jealous of any new guest that steered attention away from Sunset

Lightning flashed. Thunder rolled.

Then Sentry flashed! And Sunset rolled in!

Again Sunset found herself pushed hard against the wall. She gasped and moaned as she felt his hardness against her stomach, and she rolled her hips against him, her body telegraphing exactly what it wanted.

Wait, she humps in Morse code?!! Does that mean she ceases sex by stroking with cock with her hands/pussy with an SOS signal??

Flash’s lips left hers and found first the orange swell of a breast, then the pointed darker orange of a nipple. He attacked it, biting it harder than he’d meant, but her hiss signaled her approval.

Hmmmmm, pomelos...
(Seriously though, I would've went with yellow breasts with brown nipples instead)

For an instant, the rational parts of their minds returned. Were they really doing this? Were they really slipping so easily back into the past? Had all those years of willful denial, of careful dancing, really been for nothing?

More importantly, is Ray the lizard even okay with this??!!

The need, the heat , from earlier returned with a vengeance and soon they were fucking each other properly, their bellies slapping lewdly against each other with every matched thrust. The storm raged around them, almost matching the fury of their passion. They barely noticed when the lights flickered and died after another bolt of lightning, plunging the room into darkness. They were their own world, a ball of molten heat in the vacuum of night. The only things that existed were their panted moans, the heavy scent of sex, and the assuredness that they were there together.

C'mon guys!! You can be as loud as you want to! The thunder will cover the noise!

The storm was beginning to fade, and they looked at one another in the flickering candle light. Each searched the face of the other for a sign of regret, a moment of hesitation. A line had been crossed, they both knew that, but could this particular line be un crossed?

Once you hit the sack, you can never go back!

More importantly, did they even want to uncross it?

Depends if Sunset is willing to abort

What happens when the irresistible force meets the immovable object?

Simple.

They surrender.

And then everything goes to s&&t when they realize the aftermath of a friends-for-benefit relationship

Jade Ring

Jade Ring #8 · Jan 20th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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My goal with this story was to capture the heat of a single moment in time, with the story's pace as frantic and furious as the coupling therein. This goes along with the lack of dialogue, as words simply would have gotten in the way.

vren55

vren55 #9 · Jan 21st, 2020 · 2 · ·

That was short, sweet but it did the trick!

bcmorgan96

bcmorgan96 #10 · Jan 23rd, 2020 · 2 · ·

Finally! Another decent Sunset and Flash Mature Romance story!

Scholarly-Cimmerian

Scholarly-Cimmerian #11 · Apr 17th, 2020 · 1 · ·

This was good steamy fun. I always enjoy the idea of Flash and Sunset getting back together again, and this was certainly one way of them going about it!

It's short and to the point, but I do like the added touch that they do realize that there will be repercussions from this; ghosts of the past that they'll have to deal with, their friends talking or joking, all that stuff. Still, I really like the simplicity of it all at the very end - whatever may come next, in the moment they are together and happy. Perfect.

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #12 · May 20th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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------ Review ------

Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-It didn’t wave back. Because it was a lizard. -- Very cute.
-This story really rushes through taking the clothes off, which would normally be an issue. But in this story, it works perfectly, showing their frantic passion.
-The orgasm, though, was a bit rushed, and with less justification. The initial insertion also slipped by almost unnoticed.
-Excellent work on the pacing and making it work with the tone of the story.
-Good job letting them relax a little after the deed, giving a much-needed cooldown and rest.

------ Scores ------

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 87/100
Allure: 94/100
Enticement: 85/100
Immersion: 97/100
Prose Quality: 92/100
Total Score: 455/500
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FireworksPOP

FireworksPOP #13 · Mar 12th, 2021 · 1 · ·

This was very...unique. But still good, I have Flash and Sunset at the top of my list of shipping's, right behind there’s Fluttershy and Sandalwood and equestrian Flash and princess Twilight.

darkstone57

darkstone57 #14 · Aug 6th, 2022 · · ·

Good stuff. Good stuff, indeed.

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