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Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
Dr Sharaz Jek
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Member when fanfic titles were short and subtle?
nice work
10190603
No.
10190603
Somehow I dont think subtlety was high on the author's list of priorities when writing this fic.
Anyway, great fic. Would love to see more with maybe some of the other girls joining the herd.
10190603
No
10190660
Indeed, I rarely do subtle; I'm more into pulpy melodrama myself! Thank you, not sure if I'll sequel this one but I'll keep it in mind!
10191410
You don't need to have a username referencing Doctor Who and tell people you're into pulpy melodrama. The latter fact can pretty easily be inferred from the former.
10191894
Heh, thing is, most people don't get the reference. One person thought it was a Star Wars character.
Hee, this was fun~
10192042
Thank you!
Makes one wonder if estrus-induced herd obedience is a thing brought on through magical mutation in the human world, or if that's a thing in Equestria and Sunset Shimmer forgot to mention? Also, long-term side-effects, of course.
10192272
I'm figuring the latter, although I tried not to make it come off as rapey since I wanted to keep this one pretty lighthearted/silly!
Great story!! I'd love to see a sequel where Twilight upgrades the potion to a futa version and all the girls take it, except Sunset, and proceeds naturally from there.
10193692
Admittedly I'm not a fan of futa, but it's always possible I'll sequel this!
10192290
So, how long do you reckon they'll have being Flash's personal submissive herd imprinted on them? Or is that permanent?
10193855
It wears off after he breeds them, but it's like getting a hit of a drug; they'll all be eager to repeat the high it gave them, possibly invite some friends to try it...
10194055
Sounds suspiciously like a sequel hook.
10194076
Always possible if the inspiration hits me! I try to avoid just repeating myself with similar fics as that tends to bore me, but maybe I'll think up a variation that really gets me excited sometime? Definitely wished I'd added a few more details, like the estrus pills making their girly bits wink...
10193695
Fair. Everyone's got their own preferences.
The story title is exceptionally accurate.
Quite fun clop!
10205520
Thank you! Titles are hard sometimes.
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Giving Flash a horsecock in the EqG universe is interesting and sexy.
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given the reigns-- reins.-
Twilight pursed her lips and narrowed her eyes. “It's working.” He cried out,-- really unclear who's speaking.-
Grunting, his cock twitched and bounced-- his cock just grunted?-Some questionable and over-the-top word choices.
-The domination/ownership thing didn't really seem earned.
-The underwear trophies thing at the end was particularly fratboyish.
-Not really sure why it was necessary to include Wallflower? She doesn't really add anything to the story except to make it more over-the-top.
-Goes into a pretty good level of juicy detail for such a short fic.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 91/100
Allure: 45/100
Enticement: 70/100
Immersion: 80/100
Prose Quality: 80/100
Total Score: 366/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
10671649
Lol.
This is so hot and sexy
11015332
Thank you!