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A virtual cookie for finding the 'hidden mistake'.

I just ate all real ones... Sorry

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(First few grammar and spelling mistakes in first chapter)

He and every other creature on the train where on their way to a very special event hosted by Twilight and the other Princesses

He and every other creature on the train were on their way

Twilight and the Main 6 had gone to Canterlot after a summon and had sent him a letter saying some Cosmic event was happening that was impossible or something, Spike had stopped lost track of the letter before finishing it due to a poorly timed sneeze.

Twilight and the Main 6 had gone to Canterlot after a summons and had sent him a letter saying some cosmic event was happening. That seemed impossible or something, Spike had lost track of the letter before finishing it, due to a poorly timed sneeze.

The Train was full of every creature who could afford a train ticket and the return trip, Spike could see friends, random ponies he knew of, and a few he disliked, The seats where all jammed full, __ some housing up to 6 creatures on them.

The train was full of every creature who could afford a train ticket and the return trip. Spike could see friends, random ponies he knew of, and a few he disliked. The seats were all jammed full, with some housing up to 6 creatures on them.

Sitting next to him on his Right was Gabby, who was reading a book she had brought with her, ___ on her Right was the Window. On Spike's left was Vinyl Scratch, who was jamming out to some tunes, next in the row sat Braeburn, who was striking up a conversation with the Pony next to him, The pony next to him being Limestone Pie, who had been somewhat ignoring him until the realization he was an apple and possible a cousin of his, something he was ecstatic to hear.

Sitting next to him on his right was Gabby, who was reading a book she had brought with her, and on her right was the window. On Spike's left was Vinyl Scratch, who was jamming out to some tunes. Next in the row sat Braeburn, who was striking up a conversation with the pony next to him named Limestone Pie, who had been somewhat ignoring him until the realization he was an apple and possible a cousin of his, which was something he was ecstatic to hear.

(Are you sure you actually edited the first chapter? Because it felt like the same mistakes are still here after your first 'edit')

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Did some work on the first chapter of Midnight Pirates, could you tell me if it's looking good

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I'll go over the chapters and try to fix that

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Like your "Midnight Pirates" story, though you could at least put more effort in fixing your spelling mistakes