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Flutterpriest


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Deep within the Castle of the Two Sisters is a secret room known only to the Princesses. As one attempts to understand these artifacts, their confounding nature only allures Twilight Sparkle deeper within. Will she find wonder? Or will she be victim to a most ancient horror?

It is a fearful thing to fall into the hands of the Living God.


Edited with help by Flammenwerfer, RBDash47

Reading by Sparrow9642

Originally Intended to be a part of a series. The project is indefinitely on hold as of posted and will likely not be created or continued.

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Comments ( 13 )

Well... That was a lot of talking for nothing at the end. I only got Twilight summoned something she shouldn't have, and now Equestria is about to be fucked up in a big way.

All because she couldn't keep her nose out of it.

Originally Intended to be a part of a series. The project is indefinitely on hold as of posted and will likely not be created or continued.

Why is this crossed out?

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Because I want to reserve the right to change my mind in the future if i wanna write a sequel, heh

Hey you finally released it! A shame that--for whatever your reasons--you won't be continuing it (yet). It had me asking a lot of questions in all the best ways.

You've been pretty productive as of late.

Pretty interesting, I liked it.

Oooo, creepy. I like.
Despite the lack of the [comedy] tag, I couldn't help but giggle when I thought she had just accidentally summoned Anon. Then the ring happened...

No! No! No! That is not how you end a story. I have so many questions. Questions that will never be answered. You know who you are your the guy that rips the last couple of pages from a realy good book and then returns it to the library.

Who am I kidding I loved it. I got goosebumps for reading this.

Quick, Twilight! :pinkiegasp:

Get a map of Equestria, find a big active volcano with an imposing name surrounded by a desolate land with an equally imposing name, and go throw the ring into the lava! Only then can it be undone!

Hurry, gather your friends for a perilous quest and go!

Huh. This is certainly an interesting teaser at a series that might never see the light of day. To be sure though, I would certainly read the whole thing if it were finished. :3

Gotta be honest while I know you probably won't finish the story it's a hell of an opener and I honestly hope someday you do Flutterpriest because I'm intrigued

Considering how this story was originally intended to be extended into a series but most likely won't be, I feel like a big part of this story is up to interpretation. What is that ring? What did Twilight do? What was that creature? I really hope to get the answers to these questions soon.

I liked this story, by the way. Got them chills down my spine!

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