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applejackofalltrades


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This story is a sequel to To Dust You Shall Return


There is something wrong with Twilight, and the Mane Six have to figure out what before it’s too late.


Here’s my entry to Quills and Sofas Speedwriting’s latest Expanded Universe contest! This is a prequel fic to Silent Whisper’s To Dust You Shall Return, which I highly recommend reading either before or after this story. Probably before, if you want to get the contest experience. Go check it out and give it some love!

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Must have sequel, love it, need explanation XD

11651119
This is a prequel to a friend’s story so technically a sequel does exist! I linked to it in the story description and the note at the end of the story :)

11651152
wait so the elements left the Mane 6 and the element of honesty went Applebloom and became the Element of Decay? im shocked:pinkiegasp:

11651162
believe me, i was shocked too! and especially moreso when i remembered i had to write a prequel to it :P

11651162
That was about my reaction when I read the original as well. :rainbowlaugh:

At once, everypony, excluding Spike, who remained passed out on the floor, stood, slowly rising. Legs shaking, coats prickling, they all turned to Twilight, who stood within a cloud of darkness. “The Elements have betrayed us. Celestia wanted to use us, to weaponize us. But we are free now.

Overall I think you did an excellent job of setting up for the events of the sequel while maintaining the same dark tone and mystery that made it so interesting in the first place! I especially like how you left some ambiguity regarding the events in between the two stories.
Glad you're active, keep up the good work! :yay:

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Haha thank you for the comments, I’m glad you enjoyed it! I was having a hard time trying to figure out how to do the prompt story justice, and honestly I didn’t feel all too confident in the end result at first, but the response from the other contest-goers were similar to what you said here and it made me feel better.

Thank you again! I will try to keep up the good work :P

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