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Luna challenges Anon to a battle of the minds. The Battlefield: His Dreams.


Narrated by Wuten the Narrator


This story is contained in my book "Dash Tries to Win Your Heart and Other Short Pony Stories"

If you have interest in purchasing this non-profit book, check out my online store at this link: http://www.lulu.com/shop/search.ep?contributorId=1662371

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I really feel like I should of seen that coming. Anyway, another great story Flutterpriest. I hope to keep seeing stuff like this from you.

I've read quite a few fics with this kind of ending, so I saw it coming.

Congrats on a good fic.

Great story, it was obvious that it was Anon's game,but the way you tell the whole story makes it look real,awesome job,keep it up! :yay:

Good Story hope to see more

Awesome fic is awesome:twilightsmile:

>featured twice in a week
Stop writing good stories and getting featured, nerd.
Good job as always, but watch the unnecessary commas and grammar errors. You're starting to slip.

Pan.
Egg.
Easy.
You smash the egg in the pan, shattering the shell and splattering egg white on the stove.
"Perfect!"

Welp, I think I found out who Anon is...

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Thanks Man. I'll do another quick once over. I thought I cleaned it up pretty well, I guess I missed some.:facehoof:

The greatest illusion is the illusion of control and that's what Anon used.
Gotta say nice fic keep up the good work.

So very Inception. Anon prevents Luna from noticing the subtle hints that she is dreaming.

But then of course, this could all simply be a dream of Anon's, who is in fact still on Earth. :rainbowhuh:

that ending! anon. what a guy.

More please. This was an enjoyable read. Reminds me of Inception.

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a3V #14 · May 19th, 2014 · · 1 ·

If you're going to use cover art, at least say where you got it from.

http://skipsypony.deviantart.com/art/Woona-448032721

Saw it coming, but it was badass regardless :raritywink:

Excellent. I've been diagnosed with Luna-faggotry so I greatly enjoyed this.

She motions you to sit in the chair across from you and instantly something feels wrong. This doesn't seem right. The princess of the night wants to talk to you. One on one. While her sister is away and right after you turned the kitchens into a fiery inferno of eggs and toast.

She must want the D.

This little bit threw me into a giggle fit. I couldn't breath I was laughing so hard! :rainbowlaugh:

One word, amazing.

Now, the waiting game to see how the date comes out... ;D GREAT story by the way. When he was finally actually dying, I thought you were killing him for real. but then the ba-thump.... I thought the next scene was going to be luna waking up and he is throwing a ball at the wall again...

Inception. :pinkiehappy:

From the moment he "conceded defeat" in the first contest, I knew what was going on, I just didn't know exactly how it was going to be revealed.

There wouldn't happen to be any way to convince you to write a sequel would there?
I really wanna see this continued...

4412288 I AGREE WITH THIS GOOD SIR! Also you should probably ask and link the story so Skipsy and give it a looksy... I just had too:trollestia::moustache:free moustache, you might get more when I'm done here.

Nicely done!

WOW, i mean, WOW, seriously, i mean, sure iv'e read other fan fictions, but WOW, i mean, so many tags, like #inception, #unbelievable, #wow, #interesting, #unexpected, #double-dream, #life.

Mad

Brilliant! :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

I am confused here. Exactly who is Anon? (I think I've seen his name before, but not sure....)

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I'm happy you asked, because I'm sure others have wondered too.

Anon, or Anonymous, is a character popularized from /mlp/ for being a male human that was transported to Equestria via [insert plot device here] and shenanigans happen.

The idea behind Anon is to write him in a way where he could be anyone, even you. This concept combined with Second Person format, tries to immerse the reader themselves into the story.

Hopefully that answers your question!

Please do not say something. Please do not say something.

"Oh, sweet. Kick ass sword."

Darn it Anonymous.

Dat Magnum, PI reference!

:twilightsmile:

4414893 Thank you for that. By any chance, is Anon the person with a black shirt with the words "JERK"? Otherwise, I understand what you are saying.
Thanks again!

She motions you to sit in the chair across from you and instantly something feels wrong. This doesn't seem right. The princess of the night wants to talk to you. One on one. While her sister is away and right after you turned the kitchens into a fiery inferno of eggs and toast.
She must want the D.


So much logic!

Also, I saw the interception coming! I shit you not, throughout I was wondering if it never ended and that it was still a dream!

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is Anon the person with a black shirt with the words "JERK"?

No. That would be Dan from Dan vs. with the 'Jerk' shirt.
This is what Anon would look like.

Oh my god he cooks like I do, long story short I'm not allowed to use the stove at my dorm anymore.

4415305 Thank you for clearing any confusion I had. Alright, when time permits, I'll be sure to read your story.

This was actually quite a cool story. :twilightsmile: Awesome job on it~

Out of all the stories I've read on FIM for the time I was here, this is the first one I actually favorited. You wrote a wonderful masterpiece, kudos to you. :twilightsmile:

You should do a sequel or a small series on this one, it would be interesting. :pinkiehappy:

Never seen a single person other than me use the word Dreamscape. Our stories are COMPLETELY different, but I almost used Dreamscape alone as my stories title.

4418488 You can say that, I'm the only one to burn through a oven mitt and how was I suppose to know that olive oil explodes at high temperatures!

4418509 don't tell me you poured water on hot oil.....:facehoof:

4418529 Maybe a little, I have the cooking capacity of my parents. My mom burnt peas and all my dad can make is a can of spaghetti-o's when they were my ages.

Now I have the Battlefield theme stuck in my head...

4418551 i swear that would of gone way worst....... mythbusters taught me never to leave oil on heat. that is a 25ft fireball

4418558 I know right, imagine my surprise when it was on fire and my dorm supervisor asking what the hell was I doing.

4418575 thats all bad, i would of been scared crapless.....

4418587 Thank the almighty Luna I don't get scared, but you know what I light my oven on fire like a boss!:moustache:

PLz sir, may I have some moar? :fluttercry:

Clever. Very very clever. I called it, but nonetheless it was still awesome.

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