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Flutterpriest


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You are a fierce, merciless warrior that seeks only one thing: Revenge. When you are mysteriously transported to a world of horses, they must take you to their leader for instructions on where to continue your quest.


This story is contained in my book "Dash Tries to Win Your Heart and Other Short Pony Stories"

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Comments ( 21 )

Having now finished this, I must axe you where you got such an idea. It mayor may not be one of my favorites from you.

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Fixed. Thanks!! Always on my butt :)

"Oh. Well. Hello. I see you finally woke up. Thanks for watching over him, Rarity," Twilight says.

"Dawnbringer," everypony but the unicorn responds.

Dawnbringer groans in anger and looks away.

"Uh, what?" Twilight asks.

"Don't question it. It's her life now," PInkie says

I don't know why, but that got me

Lmao, okay this a different change of pace from what im used to from you but nonetheless i loved it.

Dat cover... Huge ass muscle horse, too bad you not show up.

It's a shame this warrior isn't bringing freedom to these horses.

why is fluttershy always so alone!? she just needs a cuddle :fluttercry:

Wow this is good and easy to read.

love this story. Please make a sequel.

I loved this one. His revulsion to Flutterbutter was just great. "A couple teensy weensy war crimes. TTYLKTHXBYE.

Awesome, now all it needs a series of sequels!

The humor in this one was a bit more savage than your usual. Not to sound like a warrior-wart, but I hope that you don't intend to include such Krull characters in your stories from now on.

Goddammit I tried.

Bloody beautiful.....GO FORTH DAWNBRINGER SPEAR THEM WITH YOUR MAGNIFICENT HORN AND BATHE IN THEIR BLOOD!!!!!!

Rarity: "Just keep the ear scratches coming and ill ram Canterlot's gates darling."

AHAHAHAHHAHA! dawnbringer!:rainbowlaugh:
onwards DAWNBRINGER!:facehoof:
:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

She will require breaking in and training.

I tried not to giggle, but I'm a miserable failure.

Hahahahaa, this was glorious.
Nicely done, though I must axe you if you're doing any more to this :rainbowkiss:

And once again, Fluttershy has some rare acquired tastes.

This story became better with each new title involved.

"O-oh. Uhm. I-it's okay, Rarity. I-I knew this would happen some day. S-some animal wouldn't try holding it in anymore and would... well. Uhm. I just hoped it wouldn't be so... public," she replies.

So. Umm, Fluttershy thinks about this a lot, then? No judgment, but still, probably not the kind of thing you just mention in public.

This was very good. To bad you didn’t want to write more on it. This would have been extremely funny to read :rainbowlaugh:.

Wow. This could have gone so many odd places...well, more than it already did. I'm sad to see it end so quickly, but glad also of what I received.

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