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An Intricate Disguise


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Joyous Statement: MORE CLOP FOR THE SELECTION!

His name is Buck, and he likes to fuck.

Good start, nice buildup, interesting premise. Now, when’s the next chapter?

P.S. Would love to read the next chapter of Photo Shoot while you’re at it.

Not interested in the story, but that title. Tiss a masterpiece, true art.

Honestly, she couldn’t differentiate the two. Maybe teaching made her just as horny as sex did.

Is that a unicorn pun? )

The whole age thing was really offputting. The way you have Dash complaining about the others ages is like you think they are in their thirties or forties. Twenty five or even twenties is certainly not even remotely close to being considered old in anyway. Other than that it was pretty decent how things played out. Not really fond of the old “Dash is possibly a lesbian” trope, but whatever. Interested in seeing what comes next. Or who for that matter.

I love educational sex. I'm excited to see more of this.

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I swear you're faster detecting sparklecest than NORAD picking up a north Korean missile launch!

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Yeah, he has a search bot that texts him alerts as soon as the stuff is posted.

You have my interest good sir, lets see where this goes now.

Awesome! Can't wait to read more!

Better to have those updates comin'.

Else I'll find out where you live and handle that information to Shakespearicles over here.

Then Shakespearicles will know where you live...

“That’s… that’s not even the right term. ‘No sapphic’ would make more sense, and—”

Hmm why it shouldn't be the correct term?
Homo means same so it is perfectly fine to indicate any same sex relationship regardless of gender involved.

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Hmm Nah, It's just RD being oversensitive on her supposed youth with AJ picking that up and harping on it... At nineteen comparing to a twenty four years old can be daunting, and going by the story it's something like ZERO experience vs something like ten years... in an environment that looks like being quite more open than Earth. So... not that strange.

This is off to a great start! I can't wait to read more.

tbh im kinda tired of this rgre trend, equestria is already like this, basicly, and i dont see a need to state it in the destription, let people come to their own conclusions by the content of the story, not having pre-assumptions based on an rgre tag

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i think of as RGRE as kind of like its own tag some people dont like that stuff so stating that it does contain it will usually prevent people from clicking on it i say usually because some people just cant help themselves to click on something they KNOW they dont like just to leave a negative comment or something along those lines

what the bloody hell is RGRE!? i keep seeing it pop up on this site like I'm just suposed to know what the balls that means and it's starting to urk me, i have been urked it's 1:27 am here and I had a bad day at work sorry for the outburst but love the story so far

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Reverse Gender Role Equestria

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TBH, I agree to an extent that the entire concept of the labeling fanfiction the acronyms RGRE is by itself a bit absurd considering how there are many ways one can interpret the show in the first place. Some may reasonably argue if it's RGRE, or perhaps someone else could also reasonably say that gender roles don't work the same way in Equestria like in our world, just as George R.R martin can change the rules of morality in his books through circumstance or God-like intervention

But think about the context. Many people came here from a life of unfulfillment. Perhaps they feel sexual frustration of their unfortunate circumstances and fetishize RGRE for whatever reason, perhaps some of them are femboys or tomboyish girls feel that Society's courtship is unfair and can only feel sexually confident while feeling accepted at the same time if they acted out the opposite gender roles, or for the heck of it, why not just go for the groin and say that some writers get a kick off of trying to act against the grain and rebelling against many fics that assume that the gender norms are similar or the exact same in Equestria, which I find to be most fanfics actually.

For whatever reason, having the RGRE tag is a good way for all of those stories to gather into one place, the RGRE group, and signal to the us, the swarm, that fans of this work are into. It's less of label to organize into logical groups and more of a Marketing tactic that makes it more convenient for both the writers and the consumers. More or less like how many other groups are formed in general.

(PS, the way you post it made it seem you're shaming them, which is why people are disliking your comment. Just pointing it out)

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Yeah, i can understand that, i guess i didnt really think about it in my comment, it wasnt intended to shame im just bad at conveying my opinions through text

A very interesting approach. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

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ah. thank you, that makes sense now.

This is one I’ll be keeping an eye on.

you have my attention

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:twilightsmile:That's okay, can't know everything by quick judgment calls, analyzing, and critiquing alone, sometimes what we can and need to do the most is to learn a few things about other's situation and a change in perspective from time to time. About improving social skills, what we really need is to learn Empathetic listening and how to Respect others along with developing Critical thinking skills. Luckily, the internet can provide this knowledge for anybody learn how Empathetic Listening works :yay:


9410695 :derpyderp1: Well, that's a funny way to put it. Saying a that the tag RGRE's purpose is to deter people who dislike reading is like saying that a corporate logo's purpose is to deter people who dislike the product :rainbowlaugh: Every tag's purpose is the same: 1) Writer tells a key aspect of a story to the reader that will appeal to them 2) Readers who likes it to read and expects this kind of stuff, read it. 3) People who dislike this kind of story for having the premise the tag explicitly says is in the fanfic, didn't say I warn you

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But do they have you at attention?

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Twilight Sparkle is the type of Pony who strikes me as pedantic.

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when the good stuff starts i will be at attention :ajsmug: till then this story has my attention

Excellent writing great setup i shall be back

I've been seeing the RGRE taggy for a few weeks now. Somebody, please tell me what it is?!

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I looked it up. Reverse gender role equestria.

"I know, I know you are..." Twilight giggled, much to Rainbow's growing chagrin. "It's just... this is so—"
"I swear to Celestia, if you call me cute, I'm marching right out of here."
Twilight caught herself at the last second, muzzle scrunching, words forcing their way past her lips regardless of any futile attempt at mitigation. "...adorable?"

Later:
:twilightsmile:: "And that's how I ended up in the hospital."
:moustache:: "...Really?"

“And the way I did learn was through practical, applicable experience. There’s no better solution to grasping physical situations involving multiple ponies than to, well, physically grasp multiple ponies.” They shared a giggle.

Makes sense!

That was the one that involved her bringing a certain ‘teaching aid’ to the bedroom, one that was twice her size, white as snow, and definitely experienced when it came to matters of sex.

:trollestia:: "Sounds good to me!"
:facehoof:: "You did read the no-homo part, right?"
:trollestia:: "...I believe there was some kind of spell to solve that problem."
:facehoof:: *facepalm*

Strong start.

I'd like to see where this ends up going...

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You meant facehoof right?

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Well, this is the most dirty tease I've read on this site. So much potential and not even a droplet of smut spilled in a year.

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