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An Intricate Disguise
Selling out has never felt so dirty.
An Intricate Disguise
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Spork.
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you sonova bitch
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👏🙏🤘
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Blerp.
Also, good stuff.
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Seven of seven.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I hereby officially (and almost belatedly) identify this calendar cycle for FIMFic's historical archives.
2017: The Year Of The Ridiculously Blatant Title
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I absolutely love this.
Good stuff.
This comment section...
Good stuff.
Not too shabby.
All three have been pretty good stuff.
Good stuff.
time for Starlight to intervein and get in on the fun sexy times!
I don't think I've ever seen such a straightforward story title.
Good stuff.
Some pretty good stuff
Good stuff 😂
👌👀 good stuff go౦ԁ sTuff👌 thats ✔ some good👌👌stuff
Apparently this is good stuff. And yeah. It is.
U lil shit
Someone who lives alone lol
I love the way you wrote RD in this. Even though I haven't watched MLP in a while, this seems totally in-character for her.
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Delete comma
as did her shaking legs (???)
So it was then that she(???)
Dude. Holy fucking run on sentence.
I think that deleting "but" would be best. It's a small thing, but if you leave it in, I think that a comma should go somewhere but... something like that. :/ Or y'know. Just ignore me. This one is weird enough anyways.
An extra line between paragraphs
YESSSSSSSSS
Finally
This was an excellent smut of TwiDash, those 2 are meant for each other.... Unless its a Sunlight story
Good Stuffing.
Good story too
Excellent material.
Is that sequel bait? I feel like that’s sequel bait.
Yeah but, loads of other fanfic writers have made them fuck already. As far as I can tell there is no reason to read your fanfic. It's not special.
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"They finally fuck after a series of three stories in which they have yet to fuck." Should I change the title to that? Do you require that level of context and clarity?
...Don't make such a big deal out of a triviality. Yes, there have been other TwiDash stories in the past. Yes, they have included sex, this one has nothing to do with them by virtue of being a series and is clearly marked as such, which should give some indication as to whether 'they' refers to Twilight and Rainbow Dash as characters or my iterations of the pair. They Finally Fuck means "They finally fuck in universe", which seems to have been obvious enough to over eleven hundred other people before you. (And it hasn't confused you, let's be honest. You're being pedantic for the sake of it. )
Or at least, they didn't feel that the story wasn't special enough to read. Real sorry about that by the way. I mean, I have no clue what the fuck it means (I didn't realise that originality was considered a staple of quality right down to the title until now) but in future when I'm trying to make the entire world happy I'll bear that in mind.
Cheers for your comment and Happy New Year.
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With that logic, you'll never read another shipping fanfic because all pairs and groupings have already been done, and you'll never read any other fanfic unless it's completely new and unique, right?
Nope. I don't do happy endings.
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Good sneaking, peeking, tied up and confused stuff.
I know I should have said something on all three, and I apologise. I got so wrapped up in wanting to get to the next one.
Damn, these were great!
Just one curiosity; why split them up? Or did you not intend to write sequels?
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Yeah! That's awesome! Thumbs up to this comment!
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Dude, don't. The best thing to do when you're trying to piss in someone else's wheaties is to pretend you're serious about it. Act upset and shit. The last thing you want to do is let them know you're fucking with them. Make them
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I'm not following you?
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Good on you, mate. ;)
Just a side note, but I think you've got a goon-squad of pathological downvoters running around and spamming your comments as if it really mattered. Don't take them seriously. xD
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Oh really? Good. Let them. Their contempt for me won't spoil my masturbation time later on. If anything their downvotes are what I'll be thinking of when I finally reach climax, jacking off my tiny chode to the sounds of anime busty babes having their anchors dropped off in Poo Bay.
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If your clopfics are as good as your dirty talk, I know what I'll be reading tonight.
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I think my reply may be controversial so I'll PM it to you...
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Oh god I hate these sort of videos. They're not clever, they're just rapists to people's ears. Damn you, dude! We just entered 2018 and I already have another name to add to my Hit List XD
No, I'll let you off this time. XD
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