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An Intricate Disguise
Selling out has never felt so dirty.
An Intricate Disguise
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For your first story, that was awesome.
Pretty good work man. Welcome to Fimfiction.
needs a sequel.
Not bad. Not bad at all
~Skeeter The Lurker
It seems you're doing well drawing in the fetish crowd.
downvoted
Good stuff, and right on time for twiggywiggy's birthday too
8586949
>implying that this isn't a respectable author's less-respectable clop account
8587329
Seemed pretty obvious to me too.
Any guesses whom it might be?
8587393
Eh, it seems unfair to the author to clog up the comments section with meta-discussion rather than comments on the story itself. We should take it to PM.
8587329
Ah, I see. XD
Yeah, I'm curious as to who it is as well.
8587090
You being here within the first two hours of the account being created and story being posted gives me a hint of who the author could be.
A little disappointed it wasn't a Appledash fic, but I guess that would have been too obvious. ;) The account offline times match, too.
Or I could be wrong.
8587514
Actually, you got me at a loss, mate. I had no idea this was an alt of someone's.
But now that I do know that, and with the comments above, it makes me wonder if I know the main's account by some chance.
~Skeeter The Lurker
8587329
8587393
Can't deny that I'm not curious. Can I ask for some info on this?
PM, here, or "not on your life". Your choice.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Very well done for your first published clopfic. Welcome to the folders of the High Quality Mature Fiction group.
Now a sequel were
actually finds the guts to fly through the window and pin 
down 😏
A clopfic that mysteriously garners success from a brand new author?
Hm, let's see, judging by the walls of text and intricate wordplay and certain phrasings...
Heh, nice one
8586969
We'll see how it goes. You might just get one.
8587419
Very thoughtful. Thanks!
8587134
Yes. You have been.
🔥🔥🔥
🔥🔥🔥
8588424
downvoted
8587329
The name is "An Intricate Disguise" what else would this be? :\
In any case, well done to Disguise. Short and sweet. Definitely needs a sequel, especially because of this:
Definitely sent a few shivers down my spine...
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Delete the comma
attention, and sure enough, her
with that, she wore
on the bed, Rainbow had to
*come or *cum or whatever
she snuck into Twilight's room as she rolled around (otherwise the "her room" sounds like it's Rainbow's room)
looks of things, Twilight did the
8588639
Thank you very much, there's some good catches there! I'll be sure to implement them straight away. Very glad you enjoyed it.
Sequel! Please.
Oh my...
That was pretty good. Nice job.
Short answer, yes Rainbow. She knows.
Very good, definitely needs a sequel either from Twilight’s perspective or where Rainbow gets the guts to join.
DEMANDING SEQUEL WHERE SHE GETS BUSTED
SSSEEEEEQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUEEEEEEELLLLLLLL!
This was a very nice story. Certainly quite hawt in my view. Though we can tell that Twi is performing for a certain pegasus. I was hoping throughout that Twi would look at her after finishing and say did ya enjoy the show? But that is for a future story....right?
Excellent prose for someone new.
Please let there be a sequel.
Sequel, please.
Sequel where Twilight watches Rainbow Dash. Then cap it off with one where there together after realizing that they have been watching each other.
8590034
Oooooooh you.
Twilight.... tardy!!!?
Now I know it's fiction!
Unless stuck in magic kindergarten... Not likely.
Can someone clue me in at whose disguise it is? I wanna see other stories...
Unf! This is so good! <3
8587419
Consider my curiosity piqued
Holy Celestia was this hot. Thanks for this story. Had a great time streaking it.