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I'm totally gonna read this later! TwiDash bondage?
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it's an alright story especially your first one. I like to give this at least 8/10
Hhhnnnnnngggghhh.
That is all.
(Amazing work.)
--CG
That was very well done!
SOOOO BOOOTIFULLLLL!
Mmmmmmmmmmm.... loved it! So very very very good! I love mistress twilight! And subby Dash is best dash! The only thing I can think to make it more better without going into too much detail, a longer more fluffy aftercare scene at the end. I love that!
*sees picture in new stories list*
Yeah, No way in tartarus i'm passing this up, with a cover pic like that.
I wonder what roped you into writing this.
Seems like a gag fic and I'm pretty sure Rainbow likes it that way.
I'd comment further bu I'm kind of tied up right now.
Well, that was entertaining. Its well written and has a good mix of feels and intensity. Good job
Very well written, although I wasn't too happy about the futa-thing. Never understood the facination with that, but I guess that is a matter of taste.
But damn, that Bookworm was a wonderful Dom.
8084220 I agree with you here. The story overall was very well written as a whole, but using "creative uses of magic" to signify futa in the synopsis is far from descriptive. It actually ended up taking away from my enjoyment of the story as a result, since I was not expecting it at all, and I don't particularly see the appeal in the fetish. Despite this, the dom/sub interaction between Twilight and Dash was very enjoyable.
For future reference, I would recommend being a bit more direct with what fetish content appears in your works in the future, Letterhead, so situations like this won't happen in your upcoming writing.
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Sorry, didn't think that'd be an issue. Noted for the future.
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No worries! Keep up the good (and perverted) work!
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My thought process exactly. Hot damn!
After I my jaw off the floor, I was really surprised by a couple things in the story:
When Twilight picked up the letter opener I have to say I didn't know how to feel about that at first. The candle though was awesome! I don't think Ive ever read a pony story that involved that.
Thumbed up. Faved. Watching.
The rapid descent from description into the raw feelings in the heat of the final moments was absolutely intense and wonderfully done. Too often the detailed descriptions remain to the detriment of the moment, and I feel like even in my writing that tends to happen. Not the case here.
Waiting to see what you'll do next.
This is some damn good BDSM. Well written, I totally approve.
Holy...
This is so sensual and erotic
The only regrett I have regarding this story is that it was in my read it later folder for a week. I should have read this asap ><
I really like the idea of them switching roles and trying stuff out.
TwiDash OTP and everything about this fic was just perfect ^^
Extremely erotic. Nicely done!
That ending though, so true! It added a special touch to the story. A cute and hot one, while at that
You just earned a like and a follow. Will be expecting more like this!!
Edit: your portrait is cute enough to give one diabetes. Where did you find it? I want to squeee to more like that!
Well done sir. You captured the joy of switches in an intense moment in a manner that makes lesser artists weep; and the affection that has to go along with such a relationship was expressed with subtly and sincerity to shame a lesser author.
Or to put it another way, hot dayum that's some good clop you got there!
Hot damn, friend. That was some of the best BDSM-style clop I have ever had the pleasure to read! I love how the role-switching happened...and their interactions at the end just sealed the adorable, sexy deal.
Amazing job!
I don't put a lot of clop on my favorites list but damn this earned a place there easily. So damn good.
So many other pr0n writers make it all about the mechanics of the scene and not the feelings, which sort of disengages me even from kinks I'm into. When you write situations that aren't precisely my thing, the love and playfulness of the characters is so engaging that I can't help but enjoy the story. This comment applies to Chalk Dust and several other of your stories as well. Nicely done!