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Crimson Prose


I've got Shining Armor tied up in my basement for molestation purposes.

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This will be two chapters at first, but may be more chapters if I get enough interest in more chapters, so feel free to comment if that is a thing for you.

Where you'd find the cover art?

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Crap, I forgot to say in the description! It's #725751 on Derpibooru and explicit. It's not necessarily related to this story since the Dash in the full image is female, but it's still sexy to see Gilda spreading her best bits.

Finding a guy to knock her up is just what Gilda needs

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I'm sure motherhood would make a dent in her personality, but whether it's a good dent or bad would have to be seen. I'm not sure it's safe to pump that much genetic egotism into a single offspring. :rainbowderp:

This appears relevant to my interests, and I didn't even realise that until now. Liked and tracked.

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Griffon banging should be relevant to all interests.

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More Please also im dieing to know is Scoots will see male Griffon Dash

Oh hell yeah. Lemme get those gdrive links, I haven't properly preread something in a while, I'm getting bored.

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lol Scoots will have the biggest reaction being Rainbow's biggest fan/sister/lost foal

i hope impreg remains a constant theme.

This is funny, Is it bad I so want Spike to greed grow with GIlda and just ruin that bird, show her who owns the skys. It would also be a huge shock to Twi and Dash to see a teenage so sized Spike just going pure animal right infront of them. Also even more so when he turn his eyes to them when he finish with Gilda lol. They better fear the twin dragon. DRAGONLAND FOREVA!!!!!!

Fun fact, griffon is a type of dog, they quite cute. It's griffin that Gilda and Gabby are, it a common mistake that I keep seeing around but until then all I will see is...

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I actually prefer gryphon, but I use griffon because Hasbro spells it that way in episode titles.

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Or maybe he doesn't have to go greed to totally 'fuck her up'. There's still a chapter two cumming :moustache:

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I do love characters making babies, but those that read my stories probably noticed that.

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How 'big' of a reaction will Dash have for her in return?

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Do you still go to the 'editing' room on my fan Discord server? I posted a link there before I published it, so if you want to preread you should probably find it there.

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LOL I barely sign in to my other Discord account, I should probably do that xD

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Lol true he is STILL a dragon, with alot of lust built up in him. And it is clear he has been going around banging out all of their friends and Twi so he is best chance really experienced by this point. If he is packing to well equipped dragon swords on top of some very strong dragon lust than I get the feeling Gilda will get her due and Twilight might get a helping as well. I mean Spike not like seeing what is 'his' being used by another 'male tool' lol.

Story sounded good right up til the (almost obligatory at this point) futa. From the tags thought both Twilight and Rainbow would be turned into gryphons and Spike got to fuck all 3.:applecry::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair:

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Depends on what you make Scoots to Rainbow. Also great story please keep it up, whelp Dinner time

Well, points for actually knowing how a knot works, though your bonus gets halved for putting it on a gryphon. :coolphoto: Scattering "dom" and "sub" here and there didn't add much to the scene. I think it might be better if you described the physical act of thrusting more, instead of barely referring to it at all, but if you're only into the act of j-j-j-jamming it in, that's fine long as you're aware of it.

Anyway, fun overall. Loved Gilda's outright deceptive egg craziness. You're really good at portraying that sort of aggressive, antagonistic sex in a way that's actually sexy.

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Thanks for giving good feedback, I'll keep that in mind in my next story.

Loving this so far. Also, the title made me think of this and I laughed. Hope you do too. :rainbowlaugh:
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This was interesting for sure. I want Twilight to be more Spikes mate than Dash to be honest. I can see him putting in work on a constant bases to make that the case. He cant do shit about the kid in her now but he can mold her to be his. Hell he is a dragon they tend to be greedy by nature lol. And he will only grow more greedy and protective of Twi once it hits she is carrying his child. Even Gilda for all her cockiness best chance doesn't want to try her luck against a instinct driven protective dragon lol

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I'm inclined to share this sentiment, along with the notion of Spike eventually impregnating both pony-Dash and Gilda in a brief fit of greed.

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As much as I would love to see him get a slice of Dash and knock them both up. I honestly think he would HATE to have Gilda as mother to his child. She honestly comes off as she would be a horrible mother. Dash might straighten up a bit when she has a child but this Gilda seem like she would be a monsterous bitch with a kid or not and she would be a bitch to the kid as well. I can't see Spike wanting that for his hatchlings. Hell i get the feeling he and twilight will be raising her kids more than Dash will be apart of her child's life. She and let's be fair here just doesn't come off as responsible enough to handle one kid let alone two. So I can see him wanting to fuck them both but knocking them up seem like a very bad call for him. Hell I wouldn't be shocked if Twi regret getting knocked up by Dash once she is thinking straight. At least she know Spike can dragon up and be a father to his child.

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You base this on the assumption that Spike would put up with her shit if he gets her pregnant?

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Well she's not an Equestrian citizen, so it's not like she can sue him for child support.
Though the whole topic makes me wonder how griffons have survived as a species if they all hate each other and we've only met one that would enjoy taking care of children. And even Gabby would probably accidentally drop them on their head several times a day in her excitement.

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True but that would be if Spike was more dominate. We see he DOES have some Alpha in him but I just can't picture anyone outside of Dash who would want to be tied to a bitch like that. Hell even her being around all the time and her not learning how to interact with others seem it would do nothing but cause tension on the group. Idk I just can't think of anyone outside of Dash who would want to be tied to her long term lol

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And Spike is a pony-raised dragon. He could make the argument of prevention of a multi-national incident.
Instinct and memedic conditioning would reach an equilibrium and he would effectively present Gilda with an ultimatum of 'get your shit together and look after the kid, or I'll MAKE you.'
Nothing argues wth the pissed off fire-breathing parent, whose hide can take more than what most can dish outl

Very nice. Only thing missing is Spike taking a griffon dong.

Somehow my mind wondered into this and I am sorry.
Spike: I wonder if I could impregnate Gilda and Dash?
Twilight: What was that Spike?
Dash: I heard that Spike!
Spike: Oh boy, I shoulda kept my maw shut.
Dash: Will do it but it will also mean that you will, in turn, carry our kits or in this case hatchlings!
Gilda: Say what!? what did I miss?
Spike: I'll do it.
Twilight: Are you sure?
Spike: I will also carry yours if you want to? We are mates.

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And then Spike takes Gilda's cock up the ass (she grew one spontaneously because reasons) and will bear her children. Another masterpiece of suspense and plot by me! :rainbowdetermined2:

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That statement is very subjective. Better than what?
A threesome with supermodels? Being stung in the balls by a thousand angry hornets? Tits? :rainbowderp:
Oh wait I forgot, nothing is better than tits. :rainbowkiss:

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Actually, it would mean that Twilight would have to do a gender transformation magic. Sorry again, forgot about adding that part.

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You get a cock! And YOU get a cock! Cocks (and babies) for everyone! :twilightsmile:

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Being stung in the balls by a thousand angry hornets?

I cringed SO hard when I read that!

“If you don't want it, you can give it to me,” shrugged Gilda. “I don't mind raising two with Dash and having to care for a foal my mate made with somepony else is hot as fuck.”

“You sound like Mister Cake,” Twilight said. “N-not that there's anything wrong with that if that's your thing.”

I still fucking love the implications of Mr. Cake not being the father, after all these years.

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Swinger milfs are best milfs.

Here, have some minor corrections.

Given looked to be drooling at a specific part, so Rainbow looked beneath herself.

I think you meant "Gilda".

Gilda coiled her tongue around it to stroked, coating every ridge and barb with glistening saliva.

Consider either removing the words "to stroked", or editing this sentence in some way so those words can make a bit more sense. Perhaps you could say something "[...]around it, stroking it, coating every ridge[...]".

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I've put some thought into it, but I don't know if it will ever manifest as many things as I want to do.

The aroma of Gilda’s fertility filed Rainbow’s lungs, almost hypnotizing her.

Filled*

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Ow. Thank goodness we got that fixed; that sounds like it would hurt!

“No problem!” Rainbow agreed. “I got at least ten plates at home!”

😂 :rainbowlaugh:

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