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The Blue EM2


Glad to be here at last.

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We all know what happened at Sugarcube Corner. The girls forgave Sunset, the CMC confessed, and all ended happily.

But what if things weren't as they seemed? The answer may surprise you!

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Comments ( 50 )

9327594
Why are you giving me that face? Words would be more helpful.

9327631
What's with all the faces? Is there a joke I'm missing?

9327633
What are you trying to say?

9327632
Center Stage comments with faces on your story, so I reply to those messages using the same thing.

9327642
Faces again? Good grief...

I have to admit, this was more entertaining that I thought it would be. Good job!

Which Star Wars film were they talking about?

9327730
Thanks! What did you like about it?

9327752
The infamous 1978 Holiday Special.

9327821
The ending. And the criticisms they had for the cut version.

9327835
I will admit, I hadn't seen this idea done before. And at points the comic did feel like something obvious was missing.

Were they going out of their way to make Scoots seem like a jerk?

9328054
Oh, not MORE faces!

kinda like the Text support short in Equestria Girls. The girls are using emojis and Twilight doesn't understand why Timber Spruce is using emojis, so Rarity, Sunset Shimmer, and Fluttershy help Sci-Twi with her Emoji translation. Sunset shimmer uses the direct approach (call Timber and ask what he meant in his text).

9328392
That's what I'm trying to do!

The ending made this worth it, and probably why this is getting so many downvotes. Besides this being on the bandwagon of that comic.

9328401
Thanks. Don't know why a twist ending would hurt it so...

9328455
What did the chorus say?

9328467
'Don't judge a book by its cover!'

9328402
Because so many people are a bunch of sticks in the mud who wouldn't know a good thing if they're life depended on it. And far too many people prefer the clusterfuck that was the comic as it is.

Period, and hate it when people try to fix it.

9328489
I have attempted a fix before this one. I think you'll be interested: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/420582/anon-a-miss

9327823
Oh, yes that was a horrible film

So the whole thing was staged? That is the only way this story could've worked with the way it turned out.

Just goes to show studios should listen to the directors more often. Reminds me of the drastic cuts and edits made to Fant4stic and we all know how that turned out.

9328847
Indeed. Otherwise, it makes no sense.

9329071
Probably should never have been published, that comic.

9329993
Nice to hear from you again. I seem to have struck a home run...

9330039
I got more comments yesterday than in the previous 3 days combined.

9330238
What do you think of my other stories?

9330265
Any particularly jump out at you?

This was a neat idea, I guess. Your mechanics definitely need a lot of work. The pacing also felt quite fast.

“AJ, you said us and your family-”

“Your family and we,” Rainbow Dash corrected.

I threw my phone. This was... egregiously bad. :unsuresweetie:

9533426
This was an early project of mine, but I'll try to improve things.

You wouldn't mind explaining what the issue is here?

10709277
Really? I find it hard to believe that smartphones in 2014 had no form of password of user verification.

10709340
Ah. According to my research, the first Samsung device to use Android was released in 2008, with the first iPhone a year before that.

Rainbow checked the account on her phone. “Wow,” she said. “We really were fools for falling for that.”

Yep. :twilightangry2:

“How I was able to download the pictures. I don’t know Sunset’s code, and I can’t access files on a phone without signing in. Do they really expect the viewer to believe I sat there entering codes at random?”

Ikr? :duck:

Scootaloo got down to the DVD bookcase, and took something out. “We need some brain bleach after that. Who wants to watch The Polar Express? "

Raises hand Don't judge, it's my favorite Christmas movie.

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