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ChAoS pOnY

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Comments ( 21 )

Huh. I'm assuming, based on that first line, that things went south.

Yes. Yes they did.

I know this is a one-shot but I wouldn't mind seeing the aftermath from this

*Heath Ledger's Joker blows up CHS before Sunset even arrives*

The Batman (2004-2008) this joker was very acrobatic and actually had some fighting skill.

Though seriously, I get that Heath Ledger's Joker was crazy, but why of all things did he have a carrot peeler? Also, the Brachiosaurus is a magical creature from another land.

Wait after this is sunset gonna get beat up or is it actually rainbow

The first line of the story says it all.

Minor suggestion, but the images laced throughout the story are rather unneeded and tend to distract from the text.

Any plans for a follow-up up on what actually happened to Sunset, if she even still alive as even with the first line it doesn't necessarily mean she's dead, just unconscious and unable to cancel it. As well as the aftermath of that video getting out and everyone's reaction to it.

Not right now because I am going through my unpublished stuff and tossing some up and throwing away others, but if you want to take a shot at it be my guest.

With that she reached out and turned of the camera.

I think you mean "With that she reached out and turned off the camera."

Don't mail things to the U.N.

Interesting... Sunset's corpse found branded, beaten and mutilated... With a video of the deceased pointing a finger at Rainbow Dash.

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