• Member Since 28th Dec, 2017
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TwiPON3


Just a few more steps...

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This story is a sequel to If You Want To Go, I Won't Stop You. (2)


Sunset's funeral was four days ago. Seth jumped three days ago. School started two days ago. Almost 400 Missing Persons have been reported, and all fingers are pointed at Equestria, and World War 3 breaks out.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 43 )

......................I'm done....I'm seriously done! :facehoof:

the first was decently good the second was.....bad hated how Dash was in denail still and seems the others are as well stupid stupid stupid but respected the story still.

this one.........WTF?!!!! Luna a Vampire World war 3 Who fighting who what is going on?!

you know forget it, this story is waste of time to read, and wash my hands of this whole thing!

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I guess it's a good thing that I plan on giving up writing soon. At least now I know how bad it is.

I'm not God, but I'm still sorry I couldn't do it right.

9151139
Listen i'm sorry i was bunt. but think you got carried away and wrote some stuff that didn't make sense.
The first was very good, you cleared things up the second however....i didn't care for, only reinforced the characters to be in denial particularly dash.
Stillw as ....ok.

this one....you took the idea or rants of a critic shouting how ti started world war 3 and blah blah blah blah rant rant rants he gave.
Ok, but Luna a vampire and the confusion and such....Seriously no idea what is going on, you seem to be taking stuff and throwing it on paper as fast as possible.

It's a story not fast food. Take you're time.

9151146
No, it's okay. You had something on your mind to say, and you said it. You never did anything wrong. I was the idiot who took a guy's comment from the second story and went crazy.

9151146
đź–• you jackass I was making a point not ranting. If you actually think how our governments would try to actually help each other a war on Equestria would actually make sense in this.

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That was something I've needed to say for years. I don't know if it constitutes depression, a rut, or what.

It wasn't directed at anything here, or anything in specific, really.

9151384
That's not what I was getting at.

you know Donald Trump raised a good point

I can't believe I just said that

"Oh! I get it," President Trump replied, "In your country, if someone steps out of line, it's automatically a life sentence! You- you're one step away from North Korea!" Trump turned to Kim, "I'm sorry, no offense."

Best line of the fucking day!🤣🤣🤣

Thank god Brachy was not alive to experience this.

9151513
Me neither.


9151660
Here's the humor we need nowadays.

Okay it's another libtard bashing Trump with no logical reason other than being a whiner.

Out, I'm out,

Omfg it gets worse each chapter and I love it

This is just so fucking bad but it’s also good at the same time. It’s like The Room and that’s just awesome

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I don't follow you.

9316225
Ok your story is one of those “it’s so bad it’s good” stories

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Oh. Okay. Thanks.

I can't wait to read more of this.

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Yeah, it's a fairly good story for what it is. The grammar is well written enough to where it doesn't bug me and the story is attention-grabbing enough to where I want to see where it goes. In other words I find this story interesting regardless of how many downvotes you have I hope you finish this.

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Either you had this ready to go after I made my comments or you had one hell of an inspiration hit. Lol

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Definitely some form of the latter. I had to get it up quick because some idiot put the wrong software on my laptop, so it freezes.

Glad to see this didn't die young. Merry Christmas

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You, too. The first one I ever posted on this site, it had no way in hell to die with any-damn-kind of dignity. At least I think.

Well, it seems like this has gone off the rails and fell into a erupting volcano.

Seriously, this is getting more and more outlandish, yet staying grounded (in a way). What I'm saying is good job.

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Nah, just a pissed off 1000 year old Vampire Lord :rainbowderp:

"No, Mr Jong-un," Celestia said as Twilight put four papers on the table, each with Equestrian legal procedure for ponies who have passed, "The five girls who were supposed to be helping her are the ones who drove my daughter to commit suicide in the first place! That alone is a life sentence, not yet accounting for the fact that she was also of Royal Status!"

If we wanna talk about laws, sunset hummer broke multiple in the human world.

Where are the guns coming from?

Interesting video

Is the vampire thing permanent?

I have twilight dies.

That was a lot.

This is so confusing yet for some reason I can’t stop reading.

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