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Synesisbassist
A washed up old writer who still tries to live in a heyday that has long since passed...
Synesisbassist
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I love this
This story made my day
There's not a lot of stories featuring Twilight Velvet
But cudoes dude
You're missing the Anon character tag, the Second Person tag, and you should probably put the Human tag in there too.
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Right you are! All are done, not used to uploading something with Anon, also my first try with a second person style writing.
This ticked all the right boxes for me, a solid upvote and a fave from me.
If you're judging whether to write another chapter or two, I'd say write them because you want to. While some, including myself, would like to see this continued, I'd only advise doing so if you think you can write a compelling succession of entries.
Holy crap this is hot. 15/10/ from me!
Needs a sequel now
DID SOMEONE SAY SPARKLECEST!?
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Second person, huh? Then what's THIS bullshit??
For shame, sir!
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There was bound to be errors, its the first time I've written in the second person. Guess I never caught it in my editing, but it's now fixed! Thanks for pointing it out!
And here, I thought it was just the weather was getting me hot.
Well written. This is my fav incest ship besides Celestia and Luna. 
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oh no, no no, NO! NO!
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I'm considering going into the editing "business". Feel free to call me whenever you write something.
More
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SEINFELD BASS INTENSIFIES
I demand More! Also make night light gay. Like big gay al gay. Or not I'd still read it.
Yes, a continuation is most required, good sir!
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More!
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More is always good, I could see this becoming a good story actually
Edit: A full on story would be awesome :D
Ah, fuck. My dick asploded.
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And again thank you all!
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I have plans to continue at least a little bit, more info in my recent blog post!
There's always time for cuddles!
Should be Sparkle?
Should be your.
Pretty hot, always down for Sparklecest. Felt like Nightlight could have been handled better than just "he is/became a huge asshole for no discernible reason." Everything else was on point, though.
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Speckles is somewhat of a "nickname" For Twilight Sparkle. As for Nightlight, that'll be explained in the followup chapter/story. Depending on where I feel it belongs.
Thanks for pointing out the wrong place of that "you're."
This is good, was not expecting an actual story to be honest. The fact one HAPPEND just makes me want to read more... well done. This is amazing, in other words.
this was a a very good read, I enjoyed all aspects from the story, to the clop, and the fluff at the end. I'd even love to see this continued in a series of sorts? But that's for you, the author, to decide. I just think it's be interesting to see where the relationship between the three of them would go, how they would live together, Should Velvet move in completely, and how Shining and Twi's Father would handle the situation, if he would learn anything or if he would blow a gasket.
Id love to see this be continued, and this is going to be liked and favorited for sure. Great job!
*<>* 10/10 best double twilight Snu Snu fic
so hot I blew my radiator cap clean through my hood
vroom vroom for sequel
I wouldn't mind seeing this get a sequel or something similar along the lines.
Wow, this story was... why am I trying to think of "appropriate" words, this is a damn clopfic. It was hot as fuck. There much easier.
Yeah im in agreement with many of the others here, I'd love to see this continued or to see you do something similar again. One of the best stories I've read in a couple months.
By the way I love the "fuck it" when Velvet decides to get more involved at the end. When the thought of Twiggles being her daughter just doesn't matter anymore because horny.
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I concur
I hate when good story’s die
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Not to fear! I am still working on it. Just took time to work on my Christmas story. This will be updated with a few more chapters, probably around 3 or so.
Ooooohhhh knockout. Anon wins! Flawless victory.
Axing story where he wins honest a lot of story’s just him suffering
Great work keep up the good work
Uh huh...
Awwwww....
Honestly, your version of Night Light is so far off and over the top that it's completely hilarious and in no way can be taken seriously. Then when I realize that you made Night Light as unlikable as possible just so you could put no real effort into "Anon" while still making him the irrefutable good guy, what was first funny begins to infuriate me.
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That's just the way it happened. I'm not done with him yet either, theres more to come explaining the reasons why he became who he is in this story.
Honestly there was not supposed to be any "character" in this story, but when people wanted more I complied. The story isn't over yet, and I do agree I did a lackluster job with this chapter. I'm always trying to improve and get better at writing stuff other then strictly "clop". But thanks for the comment none the less, any criticism is welcomed if its constructive.
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When writing a story it's always important to remember the point of it. If the point of this story is to have a human have sex with Twilight and her mom than the focus of your writing should be there, everything else is secondary. All you need is simple but believable characters and scenarios.
Making things too over-dramatic can end up having the opposite desired effect. A lot of clop fics have ruined the enjoyment of it's sex scenes by taking themselves too seriously. Fall of Equestria is probably the most extreme example, or Twilight's Secret Journal.
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It is mostly my own fault for trying to put story where it didn't belong.
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It's not about having story or not, nothing that absolute. It's about understanding the level of complexity that best complements the story you're trying to tell.
PLEASE I BEG OF YOU MORE!
Give me more daddi~
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Moar!
Oh my fucking god!
I loved this story but I keep losing track of it. This is my third time managing to track it down. I've favorite-ed it so i can actually keep a hold of it.