Update 1 done · 6:51am Jul 23rd, 2020
I updated part one of my clopfic. I added quite a bit. I hope it makes it a little better for everybody who had notes. I hope your wieners enjoy the extra smut, and your uneasy conscience enjoys some of the re wording. I'll update the next part later.
I dont see why, I rather like your story Swept Up by Glimmeesteponme and thought it was rather good.
People forget that writing is an art, just like oil painting or playing a guitar. No one puts out a masterpiece when they first start out. It takes practice to improve. A lot of wasted paper, a lot of wasted canvas, a lot of wasted guitar pics. You don't improve unless you practice. Don't let negative feedback o0r fear of criticism get you down. Write more and often. Don't modify your work so you can see your improvement. By deleting your old work, you have nothing to compare your new work to. This is bad when you think your writing sucks because without your older work to compare it to, you cant see the improvement for yourself.
Just a few things I thought I would share.
The Monk
“To say that Twilight Sparkle went bugfuck would be like saying the Incredible Hulk had some mild anger management issues.” -DustTraveller
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Grammarly was supposed to correct that. I'm too proud to do it myself, I'm owning it. "I before e except after c." Fight the corruption in the English language. They just want us to roll over and accept it when they break thier own laws. Yea I spelled their wrong there, and Grammarly corrected it, I went back and UNcorrected it. Suck a dick English.
"'m a pony loving wierdo"
Typo: it's "weirdo". As in, the word starts with "we" - at least, that's how I remember the spelling!
2910798 Ah. Well, I only hope I don't disappoint
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No worries, and no particular reason, you said you wanted to be friends so I figured I'd follow you.