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PiMan


Dec
17th
2017

Spoilers (no spoilers here) · 4:56pm Dec 17th, 2017

It should go without saying but any links to unreleased content is a permanently bannable offence. Anything that has not official aired should also be considered spoilers. Be considerate about them.

This confuses me a little. We've had leaks before; sometimes episodes appear online well before airing anywhere. Obviously spoilers should be tagged and signposted, but this is the first time I've seen spoilers be a permanently bannable offence. EqD is treating it equally harshly.

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Your right. I was too passive. I'll forget trying to be tasteful and I'll make it hotter.

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Honestly, the only thing I didn't like before I read the comment speculating there may have been AI involvement, was there was so much nothing and so little lewdness.

The idea of Twilight and Shining agreeing to some somnophilia, is hot. The idea of Shining being caught and the parents having the wrong idea, is interesting.
If you just want a porn story, expand on the porn and stop it the moment he gets caught. If you want something deeper, split it into chapters and maybe make the first and last chapters have the porn.
If you don't want to have it considered a porn story at all, then I don't know what advice I could give. Family love stories don't often work without the porn factor if you want the love story to be a happy ending.

Given the criticism it received, I have revoked the submission of Lines We Cross. Since everyone seems to think it was AI written, I will rewrite it better than it was the first time.

Comment posted by 24 KM To Nerdiness deleted Jun 3rd, 2022

Thanks for adding A Star Among Wizards to your library!

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