• Member Since 29th Sep, 2016
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Arkanus


Farewell.

Comments ( 24 )

Is there going to be more? Really like it:)

7810074 Of course! I'm glad you enjoyed :rainbowkiss:

"Okay, pop quiz: name the fundamentals of a good and successful friendship!"


You stare blankly for a moment. "Uh... Dank memes?"
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Its a great story man keep up the good work.

7815552 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed :pinkiesmile:

Very nice story! Please keep them coming. I must know what happens next.:pinkiehappy:

Only when Dank Memes are in every household will the world achieve true harmony.

Nicely written story, is it going to be a one-shot or will there be a continuation?

7860932 there will probably be at least two one-shot follow-ups :raritywink:

This was very fun to read, really liked it :)

I don't like the ending that well

great the ending makes me want a sequel

Okay, the story as a whole was good, getting that out of the way first. The characters were believable and the grammar was pleasing on TTS, so kudos. The setup was vaguely cliche and I wondered why Twilight wasn't better informed about the gem and its enchantment.

Holy shit that ending. Suddenly you explained the questions I had and went from "paragraph of exposition > predictable conflict > resolution we expected from line 1 > boring denouement" to "the whole damn story was exposition for something that sounds great." Totally came out of left field and usually that's bad. This fic, however, was framed and presented as a mild bit of cloppy fluff and then you introduced an actual story arc where nobody expected it. Not many writers pull that off, or even try, and you did it well.

I see you haven't been around for a while, but I'm following you in case you ever make a return.

So thanks for that.

Ok I hate cliff hangers but that was a good one, please do a sequel.

You stare blankly for a moment. "Uh... Dank memes?" You suggest nervously.

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"Oh, shit... this is like the most intense heat I've ever felt..."

is it like 7 inches from the mid-day sun

Chrysalis seems to have improved on her acting skills.

This needs a sequel!

This story deserves a sequel

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Kyle, Billi, you're both witnesses.

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