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Foals Errand


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Dusk Light is the middle child of Twilight and Luna, and their only son. When he hears a rumor at school that his Mommies really didn't want him, he doesn't know what to think. When your Mommies are stressed and angry what is a four year old colt to do?

Commissioned by Dyslexic Foal

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You have no idea how much I wanted to hug Dusk Light by the end of this one.

Twilight looked up, her eyebrows furrowed and her mane stuck up in places “Shimmer? Would you please go get your brother? It seems we need to have another talk about household rules. This time about running…”

Just noticed that I missed a period. :facehoof:

I had tears in my eyes the whole time reading thus, mainly cause I can relate.

Aaaaaww Dusk why you gotta be so cuuuuuuuuuutee :rainbowkiss:

also Tuna

Yep. This is just the dose of sweet and cute I needed to make this day better. Middle children really do have it rough sometimes.

Aside from the obvious question of how two mares managed to have foals, I liked it. It's a cute family piece and it gave me the warm fuzzies at the end.

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They probably used magic in some way.

When your Mommies are stressed and angry what is a four year old colt to do?

I would shut myself away from the world and never come back out until my skin turned pale from lack of sunlight.

Or just...talk with Mommy.

Cute.

Art by Silfoe

7848572 parthenogenesis?

Kinda wanna see a full multi-chapter series made out of this. This was amazing and made me feel fuzzy.:scootangel:

A TwiLuna fic after 2013-ish?

Decent fic.

7850113 Not a fic, but the artist who the cover image is sourced from draws a ton of it.

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I fell for Duskie writing him. So who knows!

How the hell does a filly even know the concept of a mistake? What the fuck?

7852064 this is why i don't ask for commissions. I write my own stories.:twistnerd:

7852073 no, its because i dont like having to pay someone else to do something you should do yourself

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How the hell does a filly even know the concept of a mistake? What the fuck?

We are dealing with Twilight's son here. You can be sure he knows far more than most foals do, just by her explaining everything to them.

More Tuna is better than less Tuna - nature's laws are pretty simple at times. :rainbowlaugh:
This was a sweet tale, though I do see the next generation of redeemable bullies start to grow.
Thank you. :twilightsmile:

I looked at the Chapter Title, and was I the only one who thought of; Alexander and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day? The Movie, that is. Since I only just discovered that there is a book.

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