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This story is a sequel to Oversaturation


Famous sex idol.

Local community leader.

Strangely supportive ex-girlfriend.

Professor of biology and social sciences.

And with the Saturation, a deity in a suddenly magical world.

Part of The Oversaturated World. Coverart is a clodgework of an image by Vertizontal, an online desktop image, and a few minutes in GIMP. Rated Teen for lots of foul language and frank discussions of sex.

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 118 )

It's funny because swearing.

I bet FoME will be happy to see this.

With the arrival of magic on Earth, some people have found themselves with new powers... and new responsibilities.

Well lah-dee-FUCKING-dah.

Pretty cool. Thinking of your Crystal Empire fic, you really have a thing for atypical sexual practices ...? :trixieshiftright:

Not that I'm complaining. Tracking most curiously.

Goddaaaaaaaamn! I want more!^^

Atyipical social practices, actually. Sexual practices are just an extension of that.

I've said it before, but thank you. I had no idea what to do with Chrysalis until you introduced the Wholesome. Definitely looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Also, that Post-it is literally perfect. :rainbowlaugh:

Tremendously. It's hugely gratifying to see other people play in a sandbox I've created.

Totally awesome how she applies logic while she's raging to figure out why she's on fire! Twilight would approve? :twilightsmile:

Strangely supportive ex-girlfriend.

This sentence confuses me because I have never seen a single supportive ex-girlfriend.

Either I'm surrounded by toxic relationships that are doomed to explode in the most volatile of manners, or Chrysalis is a saint.

I'm not sure what worries me more. :unsuresweetie:

7576951 Must be you, I've seen some examples, usually when good friends decide to take it a step further, but then find out that they really don't have those kinds of feelings for each other and decide to go back to being just good friends.

Interesting, might need to read the original fic, though I think I get the gist of it. And Chryssie is taking it well, all things considered.

Having just read the original fic, this looks like an absolutely amazing sequel already.

So… You find the idea of a supportive ex-girlfriend strange? If you've never encountered such a thing, surely any ex-girlfriend being supportive would be strangely supportive. I'm not seeing the source of confusion, unless your argument is that the adverb is implied by the combination of adjective and noun and therefore superfluous.

This proves to be most enjoyable, tracking.

Interesting, though sadly I didn't get to see her being a strangely supportive ex-girlfriend yet.


Read "Oversaturation", she shows up a few times, including one where she's a strangely supportive ex-girlfriend.

I'll become the tyrant that drove me to form the Wholesome in the first place.

Now there's an intriguing sentence...

In any case, the wisdom of the Pink One is great indeed. Sorry, Chryssy, but as far as I'm concerned, she seems like the superior object of worship.

What am I, chopped alfalfa?

A. You don't want to be worshipped.
B. I created this iteration of you, so that'd just be weird.
C. This is the Albinocorn's shtick.

You also created this iteration of Pinkie.

Eh. Call it transformative reinterpretation.

Sorry, I got sidetracked there. In any case, very nice continuation. I look forward to seeing how Chrysalis implements this advice.

$75.99 for a sundae?!?! PREPOSTEROUS!!!

It's a fondue-style sundae. Those are difficult to make.

Intriguing. I wonder how her dealing with spontaneous combustion is going and if she knows that she can shapeshift.

Will Chrissy get a one-on-one with Sunset within the next chapter or two (or at all)? Because I'm very much looking forward to that, should it be a thing.

Woah! Chrysalis is smart! Well, she's got a doctorate and she's a professor as mentioned on the story page... How old is she, exactly? No one's acting like she's significantly older than them... From Group Precipitation, she's a contemporary of Luna and Celestia... Did she go to Camp Everfree too??

Is she a teacher somewhere? Don't you have to do research and/or teach, right?

Chrysalis could have avoided the long chatter if she just went "I'm just offering to restore your Chromelain, no strings attached." ... Or is being a member a spell requirement? Doesn't seem to be.

Hmm... Which member of the EQG Crew next? We've got Sunset, Pinkie Pie, and Applejack down. I wonder what Chrysalis has to say to Rainbow Dash?? Rarity, I can see as talking about color schemes with the new coloring, or something, Fluttershy for empathy and emotion-stuff... Twilight about the magic stuff in general... But what does Rainbow Dash have to relate to Chrysalis??

Talk with Discord? ... Deities Anonymous scene is gonna be here as well, I assume...

Nice psychoanalysis on the go.

I wonder when is she going to discover that she can change shape.

Yeah, I could see some friction between Applejack and Sugarcoat, assuming that's who Chrysalis had in mind. Nothing rankles quite like someone almost, but not quite like you. And AJ could definitely stand to open her mind more often.

That said, I do wonder why Chryssy's even here, scouting out Sunset's friends. Curious. Most curious.


And once more, I feel justified thinking of Applejack as worst pony. Go Chrysalis!

I like this chapter lots. Also.

Zephyr is really bad at hiding his porn

That is so very much in character for Zephyr. I shouldn't approve because Zephyr Breeze is terrible, but that made me laugh.

"You don't want to get lost in your magic," Fluttershy advised. "That leads to getting punched in the the throat."

This literally made me laugh until my ribs hurt. The girl knows what she's talking about, Chryssy.

In any case, it's very good to see Chrysalis keeping a close eye on herself. She understands how dark she can get and is policing herself admirably.

Also, fabric-corrosive limbs are definitely the best way to implement the holey limbs effect.


Ditto. That was funny! Upvote.

And sort of sad for Fluttershy, 'cause that must be uncomfortable to see / keep seeing.

Fluttershy is smart in investigation or something, being able to figure out Chrysalis's intentions!

"You don't want to get lost in your magic," Fluttershy advised. "That leads to getting punched in the the throat."

Lol at the non-sequitur from Fluttershy's perspective! :pinkiehappy:

7647934 ... And I just got Ninja'd :pinkiehappy:

She coughed. "I can't wear pants."

Fluttershy blinked. "What?"

"Pants. Or shirts. Anything with sleeves or legs..." She gestured at the holes in her gloves and stockings. "Nylon's resistant enough not to deteriorate completely, but I still get holes in there. I don't know why."

Lol again at non-sequitur.

So, it's Chrysalis's idea for Deities Anonymous! Nice!

Rarity for clothing. I bet that's a yes. ... Now...

"Public spectacles change minds; private talks change hearts."

Nice quote-thing! I guess you made it?

I forgot and then remembered who Gladmane is... ... How far does her reach expand??? Being able to affect foreign nations...

Cool Subject

A+ bland name product trope here

Cool Subject, Hah.

Nice, Chryssie is policing herself and is aware how easy it'd be to abuse her abilities.

I can't wait to see the reactions when it turns out that she can shapeshift.

Whoops, forgot to add this: Now... what's Chrysalis going to Rainbow Dash for? ... Or is the meeting with Discord gonna be right after this one? 'Cause a Aspect Analysis seems to be a thing that should be done ASAP...

Hot Topic, Cool Subject. You sly devil.

Also, sorry to criticize, but links in the words kinda ruin the immersion. Might wanna put it in the A/N rather than the actual story.

hmm...just found this, does she have shapeshifting?

Damn this is interesting, and I have to say this is a very fascinating portrayal of Chrysalis. She's entertaining, but doesn't have the evil streak her counterpart in Equestria seems to have.

"Please, o gracious and beautiful Lady of Generosity, bequeath unto me a boon."
"You can call me whatever you like, darling, but the price of that blouse is non-negotiable."
I can see how that would get obnoxious.

I get the feeling there's a reference to a Hangover-style story I'm not getting here.

And yeah, the sad fact of the matter is that magic doesn't make the world a perfect place, nor can Sunset be expected to bring utopia on Earth. Granted, there are ways for her to address this particular issue, but getting involved in affairs of state is a slippery slope that could very well end in theocracy.

I don't understand why this isn't more popular.

7657313 A Stop-Worshipping-Me theocracy... That sure would look interesting...

Wow, okay, I should probably really read the original fic.

Hmm, I wonder if Chryssie's children will ever be able to shapeshift.

Politics... Heavy. Rarity pays attention to the news... What are the Crystal Crusaders... I guess an aid group? ... How did Rarity know that Chrysalis and Luna used to date?

Can-say scale, Kinsey scale... Interesting name? Why's it named that?

Chapter title also refers to Generosity... How would Loyalty and Chrysalis relate? Well, Loyalty to the Wholesome...

Nice explanation for holes! Metal clothing isn't an option I suppose...

7657287 (observational) I think that's the shortest comment I've ever seen you leave.

7659469 (very nice of you to make sure your meaning is clear, minimizing the chance of accidental offense) Yes indeed. Pretty sure I usually go no shorter than a four-letter word.

I only just noticed the taint joke.

Even if Chrysalis isn't biologically their mother, Tirek is about to learn why angry moms are the most dangerous beings in the universe.

This is some pure awesomeness.

I imagine this as a film, and all I can do is- ahem.. :rainbowkiss; SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Ooooh! This is very very cool! :rainbowkiss:

I guess I can believe that the meeting was coincidence or fate. Chrysalis hasn't met Twilight yet... ... Wait... Twilight could make a magic sucking device like her compact from Friendship Games... Is that how they're gonna meet up??

What is Chrysalis's plan?? CQC (Close-quarters-combat) is unadvised... Long-range environmental manipulation attacks might be the best?

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