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James Light
Former writer / owner of Family Jewels.
James Light
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.....wait......what!?
Who's the real Twilight Sparkle!?
You must continue
*Glances at story and at the like-dislike bar*
Is there something I missing? This looks like a promising story.
Would the real Twilight Sparkle please stand up?
Oh dear. This ain't about to turn out well at all
7129471 Twilight Sparkle is the real Twilight Sparkle, obviously...
7129489 Just need to finish editing Chapter Two!
7129507 I'm just going to assume that I didn't do a good enough job showing that the strip club's "theme" is mares dressing up to look like high-profile ponies, leading to some confusion over the end (where the mare who kinda-sorta looks like Twilight comes out to perform), hence a comment like 7129471. My bad!
7129586 Well, I don't speak for others, but I think this might have potential.
Well, I, personally, taking this story in stride, (unlike some people,) despite the concept, it worked really, really well. He took a Concept and rolled with it. I can appreciate that.
Keep on writing, James. Don't pay attention to idiots who can't go to a story and forgive shrewd language in a story whose concept is shrewd.
7129586 You don't have to worry about Nothing is Constant. He's a troll. As I've seen him leave comments like this and worse for no reason on multiple stories.
Now this is an interesting story. Dealing with lookalikes and body doubles who do, rather provocative things, causing a great deal of confusion and scandal. Not surprised that they have women who look like celebrities, if people can't get the real thing, a good looking substitute will work just as fine. Just be thankful that this is a strip club Sparkles, you could have just as easily entered a brothel or even the filming of porn. Now that would be awkward. Anyway don't let the naysayers get you down. This is a good story with a hilarious premise.
Don't know what the dislikes are for. This is actually pretty decent. I wanna know what happens next.
7129586 it's probably because of the cliffhanger and lack of clop even if it's got a good taste for the plot.
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Might also have something to do with the fact that Twilight spends the majority of the chapter completely lost inside her own head, while stumbling about like a drunk in the outside world. Not only is that not the type of neurotic behaviour that Twilight typically displays, the repetition also gets annoying. Combine this with a lack of any payoff for the built-up tension, and I can see why some readers might be put off.
If I didn't know James Light's other stories and thus knew I can trust him to deliver a good (and hot) story, I'd probably have put away this story after the first chapter and never checked the second one.Ā Luckily, I do know his other stories, so that won't be a problem.
Hahahahaha this is awesome, I cant wait for chapter two
I expect at least one of the fakes will turn out to be the real deal in disguise.Ā Err, so to speak.
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And watch the "real" Celestia be pretending to be a fake. Imagine that: the teacher giving the student a lap dance.
Is Twilight going to sue for copyright, go crazy or just sit and watch?
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There is option 4, run away as it would be too embarrassing for the girl to admit she even found a look alike do those things. Just a thought.
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Personally I wouldn't be surprised if at least half the downvotes are some combination of "Anthro! Eww!", "Clop! Eww!", "Anthro Clop! Double Eww!" and then they downvote without looking at it.
Sadly there are far too many people on here that seem to downvote things solely on their premise.
As for the story itself. An interesting if somewhat disturbing premise (A strip club featuring strippers that look like famous people.
) Seems to be well written so far. (Of course I didn't see the original so I can't compare it to that.) And I look forward with intrest to see where this goes.
is this dead?
7399054 Nope! Both Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 are all written up, I'm just holding them until the story is finished. Until then, you can check out my progress on my user page!
7399065 Are the next chapters going to be posted soon? Sorry if my question seems redundant.
7406923 Well, Chapter 4 has ~6000 words written already, so that should hopefully be finished in a day or two (Both Chapters 2 and 3 are already complete and are around the same size). Chapter 5 is basically pure clop, and I tend to write the ol' sexy-times much quicker than the non-sexy parts so... soon-ish? The only reason I'm not posting them as I finish them is that all the real cloppy-bits happen in Chapter 5 and I don't want there to be too big of a wait for it once I start posting more chapters. But, I guess I could start posting something like one chapter a week... I'll think about it.
7407468 Post them when you feel like it, you shouldn't feel pressured. I'm just happy you are continuing it at all.
lol, twilight is going to die of embarrassment by the end of the night
does this establishment realise what it's doing is highly illegal if there found out?
yeah freedom of speech doesn't cover identity theft, in the case of royalty that's treason to the crown and impersonating a royal, not too mention the situation she just put twilight in, she better hope twilight enjoys herself or else she is looking at having grandkids in prison.
What would Twilight do to Shining Star and that whole establishment afterwards?
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Honestly, if Les Majeste was a thing in Equestria, half of Manehattan would be behind bars.
Seems like Twilight discovered her naughty side.
7462123 Equestria seems to be an Enlightened Monarchy, with a heavier amount of focus apparently being on the well being and equality of the subjects than on the princesses themzelves. The princesses seem to serve the ponies, not vice versa.
IRL, Monarchy and Free Speech have never been mutual exclusives besides the most extreme examples.
Man, Sunny really got lucky and Twilight discovered that she can be one kinky lover besides being a surprisingly good strip dancer. Congratulations on making the clop scene realistic by showing that Sunny needs a refractory period to recharge after cumming and having to pause/interrupt his rhythm as it makes the sex far more realistic compared to other clop scenes where the stallion is experienced. Hope to see the epilogue soon because this chapter was worth the wait.
= here
Wow, Twilight really had a nice time secretly working at The Perfect Plot. Hope that one day she gets confident enough to to go after Sunny for some fun outside the club. Anyway, thanks for this awesome story. It was worth the read.
7528211 Well, thanks for reading it!
Strewth mate. That was quite an entertaining read.
Twilight's initial awkwardness, following terror and eventual embracement of the situation was truly palpable the whole way through.
Bravo.
I know, Twilight. I'm not a big fan either, but it's better than rooting for the Yankees.
...
What?
First off, I enjoyed the hell out of that. I just have one niggling question, though. I can buy her getting away with it on stage, but in a more *ehem* intimate setting what's preventing her clients from noticing her horn and wings are both real, putting two and two together, and coming up with 'Holy fuck, I just banged royalty in the back of a strip club!'?
Hmm, not bad. It's not everyday that you find a story of this kind that contains both clop and plot (
) Nice work, hope we see some extra chapters in the future showing Twilight's new 'friendship sessions' 
7444211 Only just found this story, and yeah, I am picturing Twilight walking out onto the stage with the doppleganger floating above her head and giving everyone a 'friendship' lesson, at maximum volume and with full Canterlot Speech power until Celestia and Luna come down to see what the fuss is about, and then ...
Strip-Club on the moon if they're lucky. The sun if they're not.
I'm sincerely hoping there's a hefty amount of ass-kicking at the end of this story. This is just .... aaaargh, Star's attitude pisses me off immensely, especially when the Mare she is impersonating has asked nicely for her to stop, and kept on coming up with stupid reasons why she shouldn't.
That said, can't wait for the freak-out in the next chapter when the horn-dogs realize they've got the REAL Princess before them.
...melons?
Wait, what cup sizes do Twilight and Star even have then? I know Twi thinks herself a lot smaller than Star, so I assumed her to be B/C cup, but if you say Twi has melons...
I'm confused.
you messed up a little near the end of this chapter, should have used 'hands' instead of 'hooves' if this is an anthro fic, other than that awesome chapter.
7573584 Bender anyone for the moon part?
I can think of a good sequel to this involving the Mane 5 stumbling onto Twilight's little secret and getting themselves addicted to it themselves.
Ok,this was a fun little read and id like to see more of this with the other girls or secondary characters. It can be a sequal or standalone i dont mind, it was just really good.
Only one chapter in, I'm not sure how far this fic likes to dip its toe into comedy, but I kept hoping that any time Twilight thought "Thank Celestia!" a Celestia look-alike with serious assetts would walk past
They seem to have broken that rule.
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I too would love to read a sequel to this, focused on some of the secondary characters.
Could you please learn difference between description and prologue?
Wall of text not related to description really makes you look like poor writer.