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Hallowedsoul


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Twilight had found love in a man from another world, but after a terrible encounter he was taken from her. However, she has found a way to bring him back... or so she thinks, but to ease the ache in her heart she is willing to do whatever it takes.

Leon lives each day as a lie; though on the surface he is calm, with a tendency to make light of nearly any situation, on the inside he seethes with hatred towards his world for a terrible injustice committed against someone he had cared for many years prior.

Fate will bring these two together, and through their shared heart-ache, will create an everlasting bond. This is just the beginning of their story.


Human/Brony in Equestria, Anthro-ponies, Some modern technology, Twi x OC, Crossover (don't ask what, many things make an appearance).

Warning: Story name subject to change if I happen to think of a better one.

Chapters (32)
Comments ( 186 )

Here's "Cheers" to the second in a long line of ambitious projects!

What a great start XD. I'mma read it later since i got work. Can't wait to read it when i get home XD.

Mahalo

Okay I haven't read this yet, but why are there two twilight tags? :rainbowderp:

2810512 Because she appears in both forms. Give it a read, you'll see ;-)

One question...
What stage are you on in PXZ?

2839032 Hmm... I just finished the stage where you gotta beat two Skeiths, Vile and his ride armor, Skeith Zero and rescue Zero from his PTSD (I love that they used MMX4 X and Zero for this, it's awesome, though nothing can beat the face time I'm getting with Kite and BlackRose:twilightsmile:), Chapter 30, I think it was.

:ajbemused:It's getting a bit tiresome, though, having to fight so many bad guys that take several turns to beat, but it's so much fun to bring Disgaea-level devastation upon them. Some of those combos are way over the top, particularly the Multi-hits!

Last thing I'll say about it; everyone's reactions to Kaguya Nanbu was absolutely priceless. Plus, the Haken/Kaguya pairing is easily one of the best units I've got, with their amazing zoning ability. It made them a logical choice for Juri, who tends to move the target around when she finishes them which can make the other units miss it.

*EDIT: Apologies for bad grammar!

2840180
Nice!
I'm about 4 chapters ahead of that.
by the way... The game is starting to get really hard now isn't it?
Or is that just me? And for saying BlackRose is awesome...:moustache: have a stache.

2843404 Mmm I wouldn't say hard, more tedious than anything. It's just a little exhausting to start a match, play a turn or two, and then have about fifty more baddies with ten more bosses appear (exaggerated of course) and also have to go rescue someone on the other side of the map. Much as I love playing this game, I'm just a tad ready for it to be over. And you said you were four chapters ahead of me? Mother of pearl...

Thanks for the stache, by the way. ;-)

Comment posted by Hallowedsoul deleted Jul 8th, 2013

2843800
yeah, the stage where you have to destroy the statues to not get stuck in the gain ground system, I only killed about ten enemies... and Raptor.
So I'm underleveled.
And I thought that the pattern of the game was that after the chapter title had appeared, no more people would come for either side... I was wrong.
Have faith though, It only goes to stage 40, then an epilouge, then the game is over.
Also Bosses, so many Bosses:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

2844644

Also Bosses, so many Bosses:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

Story of my life...

Hi everyone, sorry if it seems like I'm posting a lot today, it's just that with the craziness that's been the last couple of weeks, I've fallen behind in my updates so I'm busting my chops to catch up.

Anyway, I'll be uploading one last chapter today and that'll be it until tomorrow. Unfortunately, I might end up falling behind again pretty quick because of other stuff coming up *sigh*

Alright, time to stop my belly-achin', enjoy the new chapters I've posted :raritywink:

... Was that Blueblood he scared out of the club?

Mmm, on one hand I wanna say 'yes', but if I did... I'd be lying:ajbemused:. He was just your standard elitist douche. You know, one of those guys who walks around like they own the place or some junk like that.

Hello, everyone.

I'm unpublishing the current chapter in order to consolidate it with the following chapter, since this one is fairly small. The new chapter will be back up momentarily.

*Edit: I apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused doing this, but please enjoy the longer chapter.

Love that game, only one problem........I CAN'T FUCKING FIND X AND ZERO. I made it to stage 12(I think) and I still can't find them. I fond Tron, I mine really TRON, of all the people in the game and I find her?! Oh and I fond one of my favs, Morrgin(two words, 'Big boobs')

2877767 1st: You are still a long, long way from seeing X and Zero, they won't appear until closer to Ch. 30 in that game as they are the last Pair Unit you get.

2nd: Don't dis Tron, she's one of the best solos in the game for cross-hitting.

3rd: If you're saying that about Morrigan, you have obviously forgotten all about Kaguya Nanbu (no offense to Morrigan, who's smokin' hot and has one of my favorite personalities).

2843404 Wait, PXZ going on for about 30 CHAPTERS!?!?!:applejackconfused: I'm doomed.:twilightoops:

2877831
actually, I believe you get X and Zero in chapter 20

Comment posted by dragotron24 deleted Jul 16th, 2013

I look forward to reading it when its ready. Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

2883555 It means a lot to hear that you think I'm good. I'll try not to disappoint.:rainbowdetermined2:

Yes, we're getting to the meat of my story. The remaining chapters probably won't be nearly as long as this one or some of the previous ones, but they are all important (to me anyway).

And so the fight anfolds and the dogs of war are set loose:flutterrage:.... or somthing like that in my mind. Cant wait for the next chapter

I absolutely love this story keep up the good work. I cant wait for the next chapter.:pinkiehappy:

2901270 Thank you kindly, friend, it raises my spirits to hear such comments.:twilightsmile:

Twilight town from kingdom hearts is my best guess. Excellent story though, five mustaches:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

2906585 That was a good guess, but no. Thanks for the 'staches, Pinkie says you get a cupcake anyway.:pinkiehappy:

When I first started reading this chapter. I thought you where going to give Leon a keyblade that had twilight's coloring and had her cutie mark symbol on the chain instead of the mickey mouse symbol.

2910414 I'm trying to avoid giving him a keyblade because this isn't a Kingdom Hearts cross-over, despite the fact he has a Nobody residing in his head and all the references I made.

The way I've got it set up he would have to physically go to the Kingdom Hearts universe in order to get a keyblade.

2910414 But to be honest, I have entertained the idea of giving him a keyblade called "Protector of Harmony" which can change it's attributes and appearance depending on which Element he wishes to channel.

In case you are wondering why I haven't changed this story's status to "Complete" yet, I'm not going to until tomorrow.

Unless there's a rule that says I have to change it now... is there?:rainbowderp:

two things to say on that game: KOS-MOS and T-elos

This was an amazing story I cant wait for the sequel.:pinkiehappy:

2913165 I'm glad you think that and I will try not to disappoint. I'm gonna try to drop in some more characters with the next one. No idea who, save for one group which I wanna try and squeeze in.

Y.R.P.

:raritywink:

2914364 Thank you kindly, I'm glad you enjoyed it.:twilightsmile:

But this one isn't complete just yet.:raritywink:

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