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James Light


Former writer / owner of Family Jewels.

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A clopfic that focuses on Cadence's sexual swinging adventures and/or Cadence and Shining getting it on? I'm in! :pinkiecrazy:

So whom exactly will she be conducting 'diplomatic' relations with? The zebras? The Griffons? . . . the Changelings?

6701774 Brings to mind some of kanashii's rather excellent comics. I can definitely say I wouldn't mind events like those transpiring.

6701774 You forgot about option D, "All of the above (and more!)"

Ugh. First real chapter and it has to be lesbian:applecry::fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair:, May we please get chapters tagged so those of us not into this can just skip them?

What a nice start! I had the same idea for a story a while back, much too busy to actually write it though :( Good to see someone taking up the charge!

Hmm, I wonder if Shining will be okay with his wife effectively cheating on him? I assume they have some kind of arrangement or Cadence wouldn't have just dived right in like that, right?

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I think it's called swinging. I'm sure Shining will get some from time to time like he always does because he's a handsome dork. :trixieshiftleft:

6703815 Surely you wouldn't want to skip over such a rich story containing amazing amounts of lore?

Just kidding, added chapter tags to the story description :pinkiehappy:

Dan

Might read, but if she ends up with a Yak, I'm out.

Hate to spergy, but Cadance's magic is blue.

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I believe Shining Armor does frequently go to the barracks to "raise morale" and teach the guards to "accept whatever life gives."

6704192 6704321 Oh, Shining is okay with it. Trust me, he's gonna get in on the diplomatic action in the very near future :raritywink:

6704516 For now, I have no plans to have any Yaks in the story. Wouldn't make sense seeing as they would just throw a fit and yell "this not yak sex!" over and over again while smashing anything they can find. Not a very good clopfic if you ask me.

6706819 Grrr.... How could I miss such a small detail!? Thanks for pointing that out!

6706912 Should be a spinoff series. Maybe if I run out of ideas for this I can start on a Shining Armor version. "Shining and the Defense of the Empire" or something like that. Hmm....

I also have some ideas for bonus chapters to go with each of the main chapters, but I'm not sure if I'll get to them any time soon. Any writers out there want to collaborate on an idea for a short side story to this? :derpytongue2:

Bet many Crystal hippogiffs were born in the future

I kinda wanna see thestrals in this. Like, the Alpha Thestral/Thestral King or whatever. Get dat bat dick!

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Yes. If Griffins settle in the Empire then interbreeding is inevitable.

Another excellent chapter mon! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for that changelings chapter! :heart:

Judging by how practically dismissive Shining was of Cadance telling him she was gonna fuck the 5 gryphons, I'm guessing she's probably fucked her way through most of the Crystal Guard and wouldn't be surprised if the foal wasn't his.

Man, you are good at painting carnal, fleshy, slick, slimy imagery! That was fantastic!

The Quality is as good as always. Just keep it coming.:pinkiehappy:

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There's an occasional typo, but certainly not to a point where it's distracting. What I'm most amazed at is how you can keep churning out 10k word chapters within a week, along with such unique and sensible ways to incorporate new species into the crystal empire... ways beyond the sex I mean. The sweet, gooey, passionate sex :3 I would've suggested something via PM, but you kind'a got my favorites covered with the second and third chapters. Perhaps you could have a finale chapter where Cadance invites everyone she got to know for a massive orgy~ Also, I lied. what I'm actually most amazed at is how this hasn't broken 100 likes yet D:

WTF is a ball job? im scared to google that!
someone explain!

6736600 :heart:

6737442 6723690 Thanks for the compliment! I'm going to blame those masturbation fics that keep coming out for the lack of likes. It's like every time I upload a new chapter it gets buried by a couple of them. Curse you masturbation! :derpytongue2: Really, I'm ecstatic over how many views / likes this story has, I think I had maybe 5 followers before (and 2 or 3 of those were probably just people who follow people who follow them) so I wasn't expecting a large turn-out for this.

6738676 Think of a hand job (or hoof job), and replace the hand with a pair of balls. Ball Job. In this case, Shining's.

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ah yeah now i can read it without worry now
but still a wTF XD

“Hey, hon. How was your day?”
“Shining, I’m borrowing the bed so I can get plowed by a team of hunk griffon fliers. So all in all, I’d say today is gonna be great in just a few moments.”
“Alright. Try to keep the noise down, I’m drafting up some drills for the guards to do tomorrow

I call bullshit

Great galloping gumdrops! Who are you? Why are you so good at this? That was amazing! You're awesome at body worship! That entire experience was fantastically erotic. And all while being so passionate and warm. I was really hoping that Shining would end up impregnating Chrsyalis given how heated their rutting was.

6764418 Well there's always more to come in the future... :raritywink:

Just kidding, I don't plan ahead at all. I have no idea what's going to happen in the next chapter. :derpytongue2: Chrysalis could very well have offspring coming down the line, or she might not. Who knows? After the bonus for chapter 3 I'll have an announcement for the future of this story, but you'll have to wait 'till then to hear about it.

Also, thanks again for the compliment :heart:

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I think this is the first clopfic chapter involving Changelings on Cadence action that are kinky yet consensual in nature. And I love it! :heart:

While all of this was hot...

Shining x Gryphon was best.

101 likes?!! Fallout 5 confirmed

I honestly had some issues with the chapter. Mostly in terms of Shining Armor being shouted down after the being who essentially raped and mindwiped him and tried to kill his little sister was let back into their home. I know the stories are mostly lighthearted, but I still felt like there'd be more resistance, or that Chrysalis was acting against her nature when she so quickly gave in to working with the Empire. All for reasons I'm not entirely sure of... beyond possibly falling in love with Shining for some reason.

I guess things just went a bit too fast for my tastes. I know, it's porn, we don't really have time for longer stories, but still.

The sex itself though was great, top notch stuff on both married partners.

And also this is by far the hottest chapter! Shining/Chrysalis? Check! Changelings banging Cadence? Check! All the sweaty, sweet, sticky sexy stuff? CHECK! :pinkiecrazy:

Again, keep up the good work my friend! :twilightsmile:

Best chapter by far (even though all have been good). I was really hoping there would be a changeling chapter and I wasn't dissapointed. So hot.

Time to catch up on these comments!

6765656 :rainbowwild: to you too.

6765930 Sounds like you want more M/M. You can always submit an idea here if you do. I'm sure Cadance wouldn't mind if Shining handled diplomacy for a day. :raritywink:

6768142 Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

6768179 Chapter 1 and Chapter 3 have some. Plus, a certain bonus chapter coming up might just have a good amount as well...

6768338 Yeah, that is definitely my greatest weakness. A lot of the time I'll have the clop written up first and then once I see how large the chapter already is I probably rush through the beginning talking parts without even thinking about it. I'll make sure to work on it for the future. Thanks for the feedback!

6769364 Thanks, once again! Hopefully I can continue cranking up the heat in future chapters! :twilightsheepish:

6778039 Well hopefully the bonus changeling chapter can live up to the first one! Thanks for the compliment!

6814449 I'm sorry! I've lost control! :pinkiecrazy:

6814635 No problem! I'm super glad you made the chapter in any case, and hey, the clop's a super great idea in and of itself :) You've tons more talent than I have in writing this stuff, that's for sure.

It's good. Why don't you have a Discord chapter tho?

6817938 A Discord chapter has been requested by another user and is in the list of ideas for the story, which you can find here. If you really want to see some Discord 'diplomacy' action, be sure to vote for it with a comment on that blog post!

Comment posted by CarnifexLunaris deleted Jan 31st, 2016

Another excellent chapter. Keep up the good work. :heart:

Well done mate, and will Flurry be getting involved at some point?

7062876 Thanks!

7063320 Maybe, maybe not. From here on out it's basically all up to the readers.

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