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Was decent. Silly, short, and decent!
Not a fan of the idea, but not bad. It's pretty well executed and written.
Heh. Cadance and Shiny are swingers. I want one where they either have an orgy or Shiny screws the female (or male, I don't care) guards and Cadance gets off to it. Haha.
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Could have been worse, sure, but some of the language used is rather bland and unattractive. Barely anyone uses "member" in a sentence, unless they're trying to keep things pg-13. Otherwise, the setting and idea is nice.
This is my headcanon.
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Yeah I was trying to build it up to be more and more "vulgar" as it went on. Feel that's how someone in that position may be. But I'm glad you liked the idea, even if my writing and the story needs work
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Hmm might try for a second chapter at some point then! Introduce that idea into the mix from Shining's point of view
See? This is the kind of cuckolding I can get behind. Not trying to shame anybody, but I, personally, hate the ones where the wife belittles the husband. The cheating taboo being hot I can totally get, it's the putting down I don't like.
But this, this is good stuff.
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Although I'm not a huge fan of cheating fetishes and/or cuckolding fetishes in general, I quite agree with you.
This is going into the "technically consensual cheating" folder in the FanFiction library in my brain.
nice
Good work! Keep it up!!!!
More pretty please
Please tell me more of this is coming. I keep coming back to this one, the way cadence handles shining in this is both strangely sweet yet wicked in its down way without coming off as mean.