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MythrilMoth


LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!

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Big Brother Best Friend Forever Fucking His Wife In My Castle? :pinkiehappy:

Okay, that was hilarious.

Don't see why it hasn't been approved...

5476645 Meeester failed it for being all colored text and having no quotation marks or dialogue tagging.

Which is stupid, because that in no way violates any story submission rules for this site.

This was some funny stuff. :pinkiesmile:

I'm gonna guess that Twilight having to pee so suddenly meant she was turned on by watching Cadence and Shining wreck her home make her nephew/niece (the whole mares going into/already in heat pee a lot, among other things) and she either wants to bang her brother, have her own foal, or both?:applejackunsure:

5476832 Pretty much, yeah.

I see it got approved now.

5480287 Yeah, but I had to sacrifice the nifty little color thing to do it.

5480291
Aww...why'd that have to go?

5480309 Because that's why it failed moderation in the first place. :ajsleepy:

I am no expert, but I do not think that you can have a foal
by doing it up the butt, you have to use another hole.
The thought of Cadance shaking her ass back and forth and to and fro
gave me warmth in certain places and made my member grow.

Oh my god, this is hard, holy shit, what the hell?
Why would you do this to yourself? You really do write very well.

You have earned an up vote and a favorite, well done and bravo.
Now to end my comment with my trademark KBO.:twilightsmile:

5480388 Glad you enjoyed it!

Writing lyrics/verse comes naturally to me. I won't pretend it's easy, but I don't have as much of a problem with it as others seem to.

:rainbowlaugh:
Awesome. I want to see this as animation. Or better on Bridleway. With music.

5480338
Do edits have to pass moderation?

5480585 If the reason for the edit is that the story failed moderation, then yes.

Spike the Dragon tossed down his mop, Seeing this messy couple, He rather be at Raritys doing a seamstress shuffle . .:duck::moustache::twilightoops:

This is the most beautiful musical I've ever seen written.

If they let High School Musical to be made, why not this!?

This is silly and I liked it. Another one would be wonderful.

Encore! Encore! This was marvelous! I'm keeping this story.

This is way too much to sum up into on reaction. overall i liked it but some of these rhymes.

"There you are, you silly boy! What are you doing this far south?
I need you back at home to stick your big cock in my mouth!"

not even 2 verses later

"Oh hi there, Twilight, didn't see you, could you leave us two alone?
My fanny's burning up for Shining Armor's meaty bone."

Make me moan and make me scream!
Fill my fanny with your cream!"

just wow, these things actually made me cringe, which i think mins what you were going for. well you suceeded and never the less, have my like.

-HWB


"keep you feet on the ground, and your hands towards the sky"

-casey casem.

Reminds me of this lovely little musical...

I read that in James Earl Jones' voice. Don't know why

5480338 It's so annoying how that works. That happened to me, before. I was putting multiple character's thoughts in a chapter, and I wanted to get rid of any confusion, and just colored their thoughts to show which character was thinking. Then, it didn't get accepted. I sent it, again, and it was finally accepted by someone else, but still it's annoying. What's the point of adding a colored text feature if you don't want people to use any colored text?

Is it normal for me to sing this in Epic Rap Battle style?

Oh dear god, this is just brilliant. Sheer brilliance I say!
Oh you have grace my eyes on this glorious day. :twilightsmile:

The hilarity has run rampant, as Cadance burns with need
Though poor Twily had to witness Shiny filling her with seed. :rainbowlaugh:

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My favorite part with this dear snippet

This table here's a classy piece!
I think it's where we'll make your niece!
Oooooooor neeeeeeepheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew..."

"EWWW!"

This is...possibly one of the most hilarious things i've ever read on this site. That takes some skill sir.

I was singing and laughing my heart out while reading this. You win the internet good sir!

What did I just read?

Pure genius?

No, not that, but eh, sure why not.

What does BBBFFFHWIMC stand for?

5557814 Big Brother Best Friend Forever Fucked His Wife In My Castle

I FELL OVER LAUGHING!!:rainbowlaugh:THIS WAS PURE GOLD!!

Oh my God it's 4am and I am dying.

That was magnificent, but I fear the neighbours are going to murder me for keeping them awake.

. Hate. You. Faves 4 eternity.:facehoof::moustache:

Oh gods the epicness!!! :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by Lavender_Raindrops deleted Jul 7th, 2016

Before Reading: I haven’t read any comments or seen the description yet so im gonna guess what those letters mean. Does the acronym stand for “Big Brother Best Friend Forever Fucks Her Wife In My Castle?”

After Reading: Nailed It!!!

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