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Silver Letter


I am a student of writing and I hope someday to be able to become an actual writer of fiction.

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Please put the Sad tag on this, I went in expecting a happy ending.

I got a very bitter-sweet one.:fluttercry:

But, it was good. 9/10, have a like from me.

I have to say, a very interesting story this is. :heart:

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Thanks for the suggestion. I wasn't sure as to what category would be best so I suppose I'll add it.

Quite well-written, if I do say so.
Would you have happened to have read a story between Cheerilee and Sweetie Belle? It has similar elements to this one, but is expanded upon more being a multi chapter fic and all.

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I actually have not seen such a story. Perhaps it's good.
And thanks for enjoying what I wrote.
I am only getting better with each new story.

I loved that story! I always wanted Button to end up with Cheerliee. Jail that sucks but what can you do?

Please continue the story with another after the jail time! And if you do keep it as a narrative but add dialogue maybe! :twilightsmile:

Interesting concept for a story. It gives a good background as to how someone might be attracted to a younger person not for sexual reasons, but because of emotional ones.

That being said, I think the message could've been pushed with a different issue. This just feels like a pedophile acceptance story. If it was something different but similar, this would've been better. It just is a bit creepy for me to be able to sympathize with her. Maybe instead of having the sex and the relationship, she could've just had a secret forbidden love she was willing to wait for until he was grown.

But that is just my two cents, so take it with a grain of salt, if you will.

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