Our Big Canine Masters

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Rubakor

Rubakor #1 · Sep 25th, 2017 · · 5 ·

Not bad but not rape-y and brutalizing enough.

Unfortunately Perverse

Unfortunately Perverse #2 · Oct 11th, 2017 · · ·

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I agree with you entirely, I found myself having to correct the story into my own words to fix some grammatical errors. I did like the story tho as I do not see these characters much.

B345tie

B345tie #3 · Oct 14th, 2017 · · ·

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I wrote this story on Grammarly editing as I wrote it. No system is perfect, but it shows it to be free of errors, except for the one about 'base ball' which I'm not sure how I missed. In my search for grammatical perfection, I've found that everyone has a different idea about what is perfect grammar. I'm confident that if Unfortunately Perverse and you compare your own grammatically perfect version of the story you would find what you consider to be errors in the other's version.
Perhaps I'm wrong, and there is a greater consensus then I've been led to believe, and I'm uniquely dysfunctional in the way I write, such that it can not be corrected by a system such as Grammarly. Either way, I feel I have put an appropriate amount of time into editing for it to be constructive to the piece.

Zeraligator

Zeraligator #4 · Oct 26th, 2017 · · ·

The writing is pretty good but you could use a proofreader.

SWEETOLEBOB18

SWEETOLEBOB18 #5 · Dec 15th, 2017 · · ·

"Whiny mule should have never come back; we know how to deal with your (you) now. Now you make better noises!" Rover rasped in delight as he lay under Rarity his paws gripping her shoulder blades and pulling her down, along his stomach as he thrust up into her batter teardrop cunt with his long cock. His knot was beating painfully against the thick pink lips of Rarity's cunt. They had worked her so hard that she didn't have the energy to clench against him and her pussy accepting the assault without protest.

either lose the "and" or it should be "accepted"

Fido ignored his brothers' fighting.....and........ re-secured his grip around Rarity's flanks, covering several long red scratches left by his claws, and hammered his knot against Rarity's pink pucker. While Rover and Spot had enjoyed tormenting their new work mule, Fido had had to work to gain access to her tight anus. They had been humping the mule for over twenty minutes by the time he'd gotten her ass licked thoroughly enough to enjoy himself, and now after almost a half hour of humping his knot was finally pounding against her pink donut.

Rover could have fun listening to Rarity's cries of pain as he popped his know (knot?) in and out of her mule cunt. Once Fido was base ball sized know in Rarity's ass she'd be too stretched to take Fido's again. The truth was, Fido had swollen too big to try and knot a female, but that was a curiously (curtesy) he might extend only to a proper diamond dog bitch, not a whining mule like Rarity.

Spell checkers tell you if the word is spelled right, NOT if it's the right word.

Rarity tried to cry out in protest, but it was drowned out as all three diamond dogs let out long howls and flooded each of their mule's respective holes with their watery cum. Rarity gulped Spot's cum down furiously to keep from drowning. But.. it ....more always came, the mule could feel Spot's balls against her chin frantically contracting with each spurt of cum. Rover held his knot tight against the mule's cunt not letting any escape. The pressure built until it forced its way past her cervix and filled her womb. Fido's cum had no chance of escaping past his massive knot and the mule's tight anus that clung to it feverishly. His cum washed deeper into Rarity's bowls; (bowels) they cramped as the watery cum enema filled her completely.

SWEETOLEBOB18

SWEETOLEBOB18 #6 · Jun 21st, 2019 · · ·

Rover could have fun listening to Rarity's cries of pain as he popped his know (knot) in and out of her mule cunt. Once Fido was base ball sized know in Rarity's ass she'd be too stretched to take Fido's again. The truth was, Fido had swollen too big to try and knot a female, but that was a curiously (courtesy) he might extend only to a proper diamond dog bitch, not a whining mule like Rarity.

"Once Fido's baseball sized knot was..."

He pulled back three inches this time and rammed himself back in. The mule's squeak was definitely for him this time as he stretched Rarity maybe an eighth of the way around his knot that time. It was hard to tell exactly since Fido's know (knot) was still swelling larger.

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