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Consensual sex between minors

So... foalcon?

I suppose? I guess I tend to connote 'foalcon' with very young ponies.

6611708 I suppose people all have their own definition for what foalcon is. I really love TwiShine incest, so I think I'll give this one a shot. I don't see this as foalcon, though.

The image of Twilight showering popped into his head, warm rivers of water trailing along her neck, across her stomach, down to her—
He slapped himself with the bar of soap. Snap out of it! That’s stupid and freaky and gross, dude!

Haha, that's where you're wrong, Shining! That's freakin' hawt.

You did a fantastic job on this. Makes me want to write some more TwiShine incest of my own! :twilightblush:

Thanks, friend. Glad you liked it.

Seconding 6611770. I'm always disappointed with the writing on display any time I happen to read clop. I was not disappointed today. You've got an excellent read here, and I'm glad I found it.

They... they were just thoroughly washing all the nooks and crannies, that's all. Perfectly innocent! :twilightblush:

(you used 'hand' in the second-to-last paragraph btw :twilightsmile:)

Oh man, I haven't made that mistake in a long time! :twilightoops:
Thanks for the catch! Fixed.

Following a water shortage, Shining Armor and Twilight find themselves forced to share a bathtime.

Canterlot is in California! I KNEW IT!


~Skeeter The Lurker

Hmm... I'll have to save this for later tonight. This has my two favorite clopfic characters, and when I read the tags, all I could think was 'yes, yes , yes, YES, THIS IS PERFECT' :pinkiehappy:

This looks so good I have to read it!

this was amazing :pinkiecrazy:

He let out a groan and rubbed his aching head.

Which one? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

6611708 Your avatar, brigs back so many memories xD

Dude awesome job on this story man, I love it!
Gotta love that TwiShine~

6611685 not necessarily. any age under 18 in the us is considered minor. other places are different.

6612752 Actually, that varies by state.

SCP-096 #19 · Nov 8th, 2015 · · 1 ·

“C’mon,” she said, drying herself off. “Let’s get out of here before Mom accidentally makes a porno.”


Great, now I wanna do a Sparklecest fic.

Hope there's a followup! There's plenty of breathing room for more.

wow... hot! well written; cute. deserves a sequel too! :pinkiehappy:

Okay, just finished reading. Just one thing I found:

Sparks of magic flickered from Twilight’s born with every lick.


Alrighty, I've read it, and it is pretty fuckin radical. Buuuut unfortunately this was the awesomeness competition, sooo...

Lol joking aside, I could swear I've read every Twicest fic on the site, and while this has been done, it was well written, so I very much enjoyed the new literature. I especially loved the way you described the actual sex, and the approach to and the moment of an orgasm. Thanks for writing this! :rainbowkiss:


6612803 I was referring to Federal law.

Holy wow, a clopfic with a generic premise that was actually very well-written, cute, and hot! I'll probably be reading this one a few more times at some point. >w>
Seriously though, excellent writing! A little broader vocabulary might have been good, but I didn't find any errors in the writing itself (huge grammar Nazi here lol) and the story was cute and funny where it needed to be. 10/10!

“Shiny, please! Goddess, goddess, just get me fucking pregnant!”


6613845 Since it's stated that Twilight is a teenager I'm not sure falcon would apply here per-se. I'd probably define it as underage or as the description suggests 'minors'. This however does not change the fact that if Twilight is not of consenting age (i.e. 13) it is still illegal by federal law.

You know you've written sone really good sex when some jackass starts going through the comment section to use hid daily dislikes to downvote every single piece of praise you got.

My only critisism is that there wasn't cum inflation added to the kink list.

Picture source?
For... Uhm... Research... :twilightblush:

Yeah, I dunno who's downvoting all of the comments.
If whoever it is sees this, could you please stop? I know my bio only talks about saying mean things to strangers, but I think it also extends to doing mean things, too! :raritywink:

I think I described her as 15 in the story, if I'm remembering my own writing correctly.

Thank you, my friend! Yeah, I try to use the Erotic Thesaurus when writing, but this time even I noticed that I tended to fall back on a few standard word choices.

Thanks for reading, sweetie pie.

Don't know why this got three downvotes.
Thanks for reading! Yeah, as I just told someone else over PM, I do actually have a sequel in mind, but it's probably not gonna be out for a while, if I do choose to write it.

Substitute dots where needed.


Yeah, I dunno who's downvoting all of the comments.

Lol, they're just wasting their time doing one of the most pointless things imaginable: downvoting a complete stranger's comment. I truly feel bad for them if this is their way of having fun.

6614041 funny, I'm not sure if federal law pertains to ponies having sex. I mean I know the incest laws don't, considering most track horses are partially inbred for speed.

6614214 6614268 This has been happening to me too. The joke's on them though, it is just increasing the story's viewer traffic and helping its popularity!

You know you've written sone really good sex when some jackass starts going through the comment section to use hid daily dislikes to downvote every single piece of praise you got.

Pretty much this right here.
6613510 6614019 YOU KNOW IT!

Comment posted by DumbDog deleted Nov 10th, 2015


This has some of the best out of context lines I've ever read

-There’s no love in a magic tomato!
-his raging, bubble-coated boner.
-Let’s get out of here before Mom accidentally makes a porno.

Lines like this on top of the actual 'content' (read porn) keeps me reading Pimapifi's work.

6614693 stuff like this...it does take the cake. i agree. :twilightblush:

Regidar #46 · Nov 8th, 2015 · · 1 ·

That was fucking fantastic

10/10, looking forward to the sequel

All these downvotes...

Someone was having a bad day, it seems.

Fairly well done -- they're both in character. Which is not always the case in a story like this.

“And maybe Mom has a point. It’ll be just like old times, right?”

Just like it Twi, just like it...

This was really good! :pinkiehappy:

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