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Pimapifi


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This has most of my fetishes in it :)

Sweet spanking Mother of Fetishism...
That was great :yay:
This goes straight to my favorites :pinkiehappy:

What if Fluttershy's mom came in and saw this

Hmmm...interesting. I'll keep reading.

Well...that was unexpected...I liked it:pinkiehappy:.

I was expecting someone to walk in on them, this might have been a bad idea to read.

Holy shit that was super HOT! Very well done :) hope to see more stories like this ^^

Fluttershy's mom says... "What the fuck..."

The spanking made me more uncomfortable than the watersports.
I gain pretty much zero arousal from rough play and bdsm related topics.

Is it weird that I find the pee drinking itself sexy but licking up floor residue along with it disgusting? Gotta drink it straight from the tap so it's sure to be clean :twilightblush:

All in all, great story. Very sweet of Sunset to offer herself this way :twilightsmile: And Fluttershy's obvious desire to watch Sunset drink pee provides some nice conflict for a potential sequel :raritywink:

You would think shy would have a dom fetish. Sub fetish for her is so... Expected. Nontheless, it was a very steamy read, the piss drinking isn't for me though.

Good story are you going to make another

This is going into my folder.... For um. Personal use.

Sunset was staring straight at her, face devoid of all emotion.

That is some bloody good acting.

“...Uh-huh.” Sunset looked away. “Well, I did star as Tree #4 in a school musical once.”

....Brilliant.

Um... wow. That was really hot actually. I'm not into water sport so I will not be reading the other version, but I can honestly say that this was a really hot read.

Now I'm kind of wondering what Sunset's fetishes are in this universe. They were never mentioned. XD

Comment posted by Mono the Cat deleted Oct 23rd, 2015

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Well, I have written two other fics about her... :raritywink:

At least, she tried to unlock the door. SheHer hands were shaking and her body was trembling,

I like this story. :twilightsmile:

Awesome. Sunset confirmed for best Tree.

I like this version better. But then again, I have my own fetishes now dont I ;-)

Why do I just see what's featured in the stories as black rectangles

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They're in spoiler tags. If you're on a computer, scroll over them with your mouse. If you're on mobile, highlight the box, then copy/paste it somewhere else.

I love how chapter 3 has more views than chapter 2. In for a penny, in for a pound!

You have defiently got my intrest:ajsmug:

Well. that was something unexpected........ I like it :pinkiehappy:, I was also half expecting Fluttershy's mom to stand in the doorway and confirm she saw most of it. Also, I'm not into water sport but I think I will give it a try but you can trust that this story will go straight to favorite :pinkiehappy:

Poor Fluttershy, she needs a fetlife account so she can find a mommy Domme.

I love spanking. I also love watersport.

And maybe later you could, y'know, tuck me into bed, and you could read me a bedtime story and force me to eat you out—“

IT TOOK ME FIVE READS TO CATCH THAT

Brilliant idea for a Sequel...Sunset finds out about another Fetish Fluttershy has...One that involves a role reversal with Fluttershy being the mean girl bully and Sunset Shimmer being the meek shy girl...to which Sunset actually shares such a Fetish still having some feelings of guilt over what she'd put poor Fluttershy through

Well, won't deny that it was enjoyable.
I'm glad that there was nothing too... mean-spirited in this. That earned it a like.
Nice to see someone living out a fetish.
Sunset is one damn good friend.
So a sequel would be Fluttershy helping Sunset with her fetish, which would probably involve stallions. Two sequels with one story.
Do you have any ideas on a sequel?

I, like Sunset, am not into watersports myself, but I will admit, it wasn't as bad as I thought it'd be. Also like Sunset, however, I don't know if I'll go seeking it out in the near future, but it was an enjoyable time to be had. Also, I like to imagine that chapters 2 and 3 aren't parallel, but sequential: the first time with Fluttershy went so well, Flutters felt a bit more comfortable with sharing her other fetish. :pinkiecrazy:

MY NIPS ARE HARD AS DIAMONDS RIGHT NOW:yay:

6855818 I DIDN'T NOTICE IT TILL YOU POINTED IT OUT

I'm not a fan of the more explicit content, but good story
I first came across this on another site that left out Chapter 1 and the ending, so until I read it here I had no idea Sunset was doing exactly what Fluttershy wanted her to, and that it was all Fluttershy's fetish
Also, about the description, is Fluttershy really a massive pervert just for having a fetish? Sunset even said everyone has them. (I just got over a brief bout of insecurity over mine)
So the only way a writer can actually bring themselves to have Fluttershy wet herself is for her to have a fetish for it? Well, despite my preferences, I don't really care whether it's accidental or intentional (in fiction/fanfiction, of course)

What's omorashi? Hmm... guess I'll read on and find out myself :3

Clop Version three:
Sunstet yelled "Dammit Fluttershy! You are f*cking sick!!" *Blams the door behind her"

END!

I could see the title and title of the first chapter being sung to the tune of "I shot the sherrif"

This was interesting and a bit new for me. The level of watersports mostly was new, especially with these characters. I don't become disgusted by watersports, but it also doesn't really get my engine running so to speak. Though it fascinated me, I cringed a bit at the thought of drinking that much urine, and off the floor nonetheless. Though this was more intended for the people who are more into that than I am.

The writing was good overall, descriptive, and well constructed. It was an interesting read that had a little something different than what I usually see. It was creative and cute, and I like the way Fluttershy and Sunset were portrayed.

Rainbow, you can insult Pinkie about being into futas all you want, but don't you think insulting your childhood friend with accusations of bestiality is taking it a bit far?

A very good fic written quite well! Not often you see watersports and humiliation stories like this written with a good story. I was quite impressed :D Being the horny little fimfic reader I am, I would have liked to see more from this, like actual public humiliation, but it was still good without :raritywink: Hope to see more by you soon

Ooh... Interesting. Can't wait to see what Shy's fetish is. Whatever it is, I'm sure it'll be very sexy and good for clopping to nonetheless. :yay:

I liked it. All of my kinks jammed into one package.

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