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Pimapifi


your body is a collection of beautifully complex systems and processes. are you really gonna use it to type something mean to a stranger?

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Cheerilee was no stranger to sex—in college, she had made a point of getting knocked up as much as possible, usually with guys she didn’t even know

Getting "knocked up" means to get pregnant. If you're just talking about having sex, the phrase you want is "getting laid".

The smell was deafening.

The smell was so intense that it made her unable to hear? I would suggest phrasing this differently.

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Both have been edited--thanks.

I must admit, I didn't know the first one. I've always just heard the phrase used in reference to sex.

This is honestly the first time a story had ever left me unable to think for a minute after reaching the end. I truly am amazed at what I have read here.

Excellent story my friend! Have a like and a fave! :twilightsmile:

Was well cheeky hot! Thumbs up!

I'm surprised at how much I enjoyed this.

So, will you be working on a series about the fantasies of the teachers/hopefully-also-students of CHS, or was this a one-time thing?

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You know, that isn't something that I had ever considered. Hm. Right now, I have two other fics planned out--one Equestria Girls, one pony--so I suppose we'll see.

Glad you enjoyed.

Shade #9 · Jun 4th, 2015 · · 1 ·

Aw... Now why did you go and bring piss into this? Ew, I was lured in by the idea of hot teacher on student exhibitionism, only for my hopes to be shot down. Don't get me wrong, I am not going to dislike, as you did give fair warning and I understand some people are into that, but I will complain about it very harshly!
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What can I say? In my writing, I try to follow the age old advice of legendary fic writer Kits:

"Write what makes your penis happy."

Can't please everyone, I suppose! :twilightsmile:

she had gotten so caught up in her fantasy that she had forgotten that she needed to be.

be?

6054456 Fair enough. Like I said, I won't be giving you a dislike or anything like that, as you did give a fair warning in your description, and it is your right to fap and/or make whatever sick fetishy shit you are into. I know I am certainly no saint in that regard.

But that doesn't mean I need to like it! Now I have to find other weird fetishy shit to fap to!
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Is there going to be a sequel/second chapter? Just wondering.
This was really good.

I never thought something about piss could make me so aroused

Sexy in all the right places. Good job! :yay:

Finally! Decent water sports and everything!

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Glad you liked it! Be aware that I have a new watersports fic coming out in only a few days. I hope you'll read that, too!

6547368 thanks for the heads up!

I'm sorry, but I giggled way too hard at the description :rainbowlaugh:
Exhibitionism :pinkiecrazy:
Humiliation :twilightblush:
Watersports :twilightoops: :rainbowlaugh:
Omorashi? :rainbowhuh: :rainbowlaugh:
Just feel like your writing style already deserves a Comedy tag, but I'll judge that for realises once I've actually tried reading the darn thing

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So that's what watersports is..... :pinkiesick:
Sorry, not a fan, but at least I learned something

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This is one of my favorite comments ever

That was Cherry Scandalous. That just came completely out of left field. That was omg-worthy.

I highly enjoyed it. Most excellent.

6800044 This is why you use Urban Dictionary before you read :raritywink:

6800353 Glad to have made someone happy by reading this :twilightsmile::facehoof:
Thank you for introducing me to a further fraction of the Internet :rainbowwild:

Lol.pretty good

6800044 The watersports is exactly why I haven't read this, because all but the oromashi (because I still don't know what that is) are all big fetishes of mine. Unfortunately, Watersports, scat, and diapers are my three biggest turn-offs. For those who enjoy it good on 'ya, but I'll be avoiding it...

...no one would be coming.
Well, that may have not been entirely true.

That line, my friend, is absolute genius! :rainbowlaugh:

Her sizable tits burst from the top, which was just too small to fit them, no matter how many times she tried to stuff them back in. And the thong may as well have not been there; from her spot, squatting there on the sidewalk, the crowd had a clear view of her spread asscheeks. The sun’s rays seemed to be focusing exclusively on her, lighting up her tiny, puckered anus for everyone to see.

I want suck her big round titties and shove my hard cock up her asshole🍑🍆

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