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This is very good so far, keep up the great work!
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Thank you 😀
Derpy has a crush on Sunset... doesn't she?
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Maybeeeee.......
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I hope so, and I hope Sunset feels the same, that would be ADORABLE
I ship it!
What did that poor cup ever do to you Vinyl? How could you? Joking aside, an awesome start to another awesome story. Can't wait to see where it goes. Have a 👍!
Two Lyra's has so much potential, just unsure if they would be really funny or actually destroy the universe. I hope Sunset does get a chance to clear the air with Celestia and Cadence at some point, but of not this trip then maybe a future one. Can't wait to see Sunset work through her list.
Any landing you can walk away from lol. Derpy seriously needs landing lessons before she gets hurt. I have a feeling Lyra won't give up completely with the teasing, but she's awesome like that
The first magic lesson went well other than
Lyra almost becoming a ponycicle lol. Love all the little details you add such as a pegasus being naturally insulated. Being in an empty field a part of me kept wondering if Angel was going to show up. Another awesome chapter by the way!
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Im glad you like it. I actually had the first chapter written up ever since I announced this one was in the works. Seems like forever ago.
Ah yes, the changeling accusation
I wasn't expecting Amethyst to hug Sunset though, I would have guessed Sunset wasn't very friendly back then, but still cute to see :3
And yessss!!! Derpy has a crush on Sunset
So cute to see
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It was originally meant to be Trixie actually believe it or not. Back when she threw her dust in Sunsets eyes. She was supposed to follow her instead of derpy and confess her feelings but it was cut. I'm making the Equestrian Amethyst way more huggy than her human counterpart as her personality.
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Ooh, nice to see a bit of the behind the scenes of your writing! Still, I think changing Trixie to Derpy having the crush works a lot better, since both Trixie's and Sunset's strong personalities would have probably clashed a lot if they were to go out with each other
Also, a bit off topic, but how do you manage to write thousand word chapters daily? Whenever I sit down to write for my fics I get stuck and can't write, so any advice would be appreciated
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I get bored at work easily. Retail is boring so I think often about my stories at work and I instantly write down my thoughts here and post the chapter. I get in trouble often for it lol. Most of my chapters in previous stories have been posted at work. I've also read a story where Sunset and Trixie managed a decent relationship. That's probably my only favorite part of that story because it involved Lyra being an antagonist to Sunset and destroying the statue with a sledge hammer and I personally don't see Lyra ever being mean or evil to someone.
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Ah, that explains it then: I've heard that working retail is extremely gruelling and boring
Glad you can break up the monotony by writing these stories :3
I can't picture Lyra as being mean either, she was just so bubbly whenever she appeared in the show; she hasn't a single mean bone in her body
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Yeah I agree. Here it is if you wanted to read it https://www.fimfiction.net/story/187787/the-shimmer-of-magic
Complicated doesn't even begin to describe the situation with two Derpy's meeting. Really enjoyed that scene and hope for some more in the future, and if not, still a great story and look forward to more. Especially to Sunset helping Twilight with a class as that promises to be very good.
I hope when all is resolved that Cheerilee goes "angry Mama Bear" on Starlight. Seeing her daughter get injured and attacked with magic has got to set off her "protective motherly instincts."
I do come to like Starlight in later seasons but I always felt she should have faced some form of comeuppance for her actions in this situation.
Sunsetting, I really that and it really fits. Was really nice seeing Lyra's peptalk as well as seeing two Lyra's together without the world imploding. Wonder what Starlight wants.
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I agree wholeheartedly, I know Starlight becomes good, but a good tongue lashing from Cheerilee going angry mama bear is very likely. Hopefully the ones left behind can see how much Sunset has changed and work things out.
Twilight: is sucked up by a timey-wimey vortex
Everypony else: this is fine
And I can't wait to see Moon Dancer's face when Twilight just breaks the jar open
Good to see Cheerilee isn't planning on letting this go! I know she promised Sunset but we know...
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When Momma Bear is awoken, even promises can't contain her completely
Equestria has "Twilighting" and earth has "Sunseting" neurotic unicorns create verbs ..
A cute ending to a great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens when Twilight gets back as well as both conversations with Starlight and the ponies.
I'll have to check out You're Okay soon, sounds like a good story. Loved seeing Sunset and Derpy's make out session ruined by Octavia and Vinyl which I'm sure will lead to much teasing as well as congratulations for finally getting together. Or at least I assume they are, but of course they will have to talk first
Ooh, wasn't expecting that to happen!
Looking forward to the next part. Please have Sunset embarrass Spoiled Rich when she calls the CMC 'Blank Flanks.' Always bothered me no one stepped in at seeing an adult insult children to their faces.
Well if that isn't classified as a colossal mind f*** I don't know what is
Not a huge fan of the CMC, but I have to say that after seeing them take the initiative to go check on Diamond was really sweet and gives a few extra points in my book. Who knows, maybe it will help open Diamonds eyes and help set her on a more repentive path.
E-Bon Bon, you are freaking awesome!
Why am I both worried and excited to see where Sunset grew up? Another great chapter and very much looking forward to more.
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Gasp. You don't like the cmc?
It seems like it could be the Alicorn Amulet, but then why would it have a Zebra design... hmm... Plus, the necklace is red, while the Amulet is black/gray
Oh boy, I do not have a good feeling about that "necklace" they gave Sunset.
Hmm, this is interesting...
Still possible it is the Alicorn Amulet I suppose, but the differences I mentioned before are confusing me
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It's not the amulet
What’s the violence tag for?
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Coming in the next few chapters
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Not a lot, they do have their moments though. Your story does add some good points in the likeable column. Who knows, if this keeps up you may actually make me a bit of a fan of them at least.
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Oh good. I love me some cmc lol
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Moody is not a good sign though... is tbe necklace evil?
I hate touching grass, never know where it's been. Bad joke aside, happy for Derpy and Sunset making it official as well as making up with the equestrians though the necklace is a little worrisome. Really funny that it was Lyra that Sunset kissed when drunk.
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Mhm. In a way
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Uh oh... Sunset being influenced by Evil is NOT what she needs when trying to redeem herself...
Sad about the town having to take all that damage and Sunset's childhood home being up for sale. Was really nice seeing Sunset having ponies that cared for her was really sweet though sad Sunset learned about her pony mom that way. Wild chapters? That sounds awesome, I can't wait!
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😉
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I am scared now... unless she beats the evil on her own to prove her redemption
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Depends on what your definition of evil is I should add
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Oh... hmm