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Only by studying the past can we win the present.

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Ever since she arrived in the human world, Sunset bullied and blackmailed her way to the top of the high school food chain. After her defeat at the Fall Formal, she was ready to be insulted and mistreated. She's stunned to find her classmates are actually being nice to her instead.

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Comment posted by OP Omni God-Emperor Doom deleted Nov 9th, 2023

This FEELS like the animated show. I'm just fine with that!

But, something still feels off...

Now, for the big test: what will the CMCs do when the girls start spending time with Sunset?

Ok, we like a good change of place.
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Oooh, two good points.

I like this a lot, but your stories have taught me to be cautious... is there another shoe that is gonna drop... or is this story really as it seems?

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Honestly, I like that. In my opinion, there are way too few stories where Sunset is given the proper love and care she deserves to become redeemed.

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Same, I decided to do something different than what I normally do and see on this site regarding sunset

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Honestly, aside from the killing thing, which I have a theory on anyways, she really did seem like a normal bully in the first movie.

As for my theory, I think the corrupted magic from the element basically broke her mind and filled her with raw anger, making her attempt to kill the girls.

Even pre-redemption, Sunset does not seem like the type that would go as far as killing.

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That's what I always thought too. She never wanted to kill anyone

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I can already tell this will be another great story!

If it goes all the way to Rainbow Rocks, Pony Twi will be VERY happy to see how everyone treated Sunset, lol.

That is for the future though!

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Mhmmm. Plus I figured a nice chill story would help bring attention to all my other ones in general.

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Or well, that's the hope at least lol

“Rainbow Dash came up to me a day or so after the Fall Formal. She and the others reached out to their respective groups. The athletes, the baking clubs, the tech kids, the floral clubs, the fashionistas. She had me help spread the word to the rest of the teams around the school. Spitfire, Mystery Mint the like.”

Ahh.

Now see, this is a good way Sunset and her story should have been handled. People actually making good on thier promise to be nice and help her learn about friendship.

Looking forward to seeing how long they can keep this up.

I am really liking this story a lot!

I also like how you touched on that fact that, just because they are trying to be friendly, doesn't mean they forgot what happened.

Controvertial ship? OOH

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Mhm. I hate that I actually thought this one lmao but once I get an idea, I can't help but run with it.

This is a fresh twist on post-demon encore Sunset. Lots of realism and nuances to be explored. Snice story by far!

Ok I like this

I'm gonna be honest, I don't care if Lyra and Bon Bon are dating.

Heck, I like to imagine an AU where they're more of a found family type of situation.

As for the actual chapter, I like that Sunset doesn't understand the note pass.

“Rose’s are red, violets are blue, I’m secretly in love with you,” Rarity read out loud as she and the others grinned at me. “Someone’s got a secret admirer.”

lying about Lyra and Bon Bon dating

Did Sunset lie and say they weren't dating?

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buddy, finish reading what there is for your answer.

Hmm, I have a suspicious about the pairing now...

Reformed Sunset is one day in and already got a girl's number--wonder where that'll lead. Nice to see everyone work together to keep on eye on her... which could go either way at the moment, given the vagueness and questions surrounding the night of Fall Formal.
And excellent Trixie gag.

Oohhhhh, mystery guest arrival!
I feel like Iron Will is one of those gruff, intimidating people but actually a nice, quiet person when you get to know them. I feel like they're a character to be explored, considering they were name-dropped.
I like how to the point this story is.

Pinkie mused as she built a robot out of her spare forks.[/quote
I'm afraid to even ask...

And Tennis Match feels an apt candidate for her admirer of whom we know so far, though I bet she isn't it in the end. Though, maybe as a rival.
Nice to Shimmer experience actual highschool life, fresh from reformation.

If SD stands for what I think it does, I am correct on my theory of who this person is!

As for the missing home part, a nice, but sad, touch.

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Kind of with engineer here. There's only one person I know of with the initials SD. I'm not saying who

While I've never considered it, I love the idea of Sunset being a mechanic. Makes sense for her character.

“I know. You really think I should? She’d probably hate me.”

I rolled my eyes and Octavia made a choking sound. Vinyl slammed her hand onto her back and Octavia nodded.

:rainbowlaugh:

Using her powers for good, I like it!

Duh to me.....now I know who SD is.

Call it. I mean seriously. Everyone keeps on forgetting that bon bon is just a nickname

So are you! Do you think she knows it was me who threw that paper at her in the lunchroom and broke into her locker to put the chocolates I made in there?” I asked nervously as I looked back at Rainbow and the others.

What......OH, Sweetie Drops! I probably should've figured that out :facehoof:

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If I remember correctly, both are her names

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Oh that's right Sweetie Drops was her name when she was working for S.M.l.L.E the name bonbon was just an alias

Chapter 4 comment.

I am also a fan of Lyra and bonbon, but I honestly know them from luck of the lyrics better. Hilarious fan project

I smiled internally as I continued followed Rarity. Sibling approval was important. Let’s just hope Rarity didn’t kill me with fashion.

So it sounds like the CMC are on much better terms with Sunset already!

Okay, we may have dodged a big emotional bullet here.

Maybe.

Possibly.

Wow.

Unexpected to have Bon Bon reference the Transformers movie. Nice twist!

“Hey Sunset!” A voice called from behind me. I turned around as a fist connected with my jaw and I tumbled back, slamming my head into the wall as I fell. “Oh fuck, I didn’t mean to hit you that hard!”

And then everything went dark.

Uh-oh.

“Hey Sunset!” A voice called from behind me. I turned around as a fist connected with my jaw and I tumbled back, slamming my head into the wall as I fell. “Oh fuck, I didn’t mean to hit you that hard!”

Hmm... Interesting...

“Fuck, you’re right. Damn Minions movie. Always stealing my ideas. Fuck disney.”

Despicable Me was made by Illumination, not Disney

The enigma of the crush continues! And of course Shimmer, the villain, would watch SpongeBob. Love the irony.

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