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TheKing2001


Only by studying the past can we win the present.

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Lyra and Bon Bon always talked about adopting a filly or a colt but never had the chance. When Lyra finds a homeless filly, she gives her a home. She and Bon Bon quickly fall in love with the filly and work to keep her.

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Chapters (10)
Comments ( 63 )

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Interesting idea. I always imagine tootsie flute as Lyra's daughter

I'm curious as to where this one's gonna go. Can't wait to see more!

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Very nice and good joking

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I have plans for Liza. You'll see

Man... I don't know how to Say It, but this story it's identical to another One
Named: wings, a horn, and hooves
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/183308/wings-a-horn-and-hooves

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Never read it. Mine is guaranteed better though. Who cares if it's similar?

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What I don't get is why do you care if they start the same? His is objectively better. And besides, why would you even try to limit him from writing what he wants? This is a free country after all.

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Maybe the author, if It decides to show up, but mine was Just a warning, not saying that you can't write It, Maybe It will be Better than the original

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Didn't Say anything about stop writing, Just alerted that there was a similar story

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I will admit that there is some similarities now that I've sat down and read it. Unfortunately it takes away a lot of idea I had as well so I'll think of something else to have in. Maybe a Diamond Tiara scene

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Just don't give up... I love scootaloo stories...

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Dw I have zero intention of giving up. Hopefully you don't give up on Out In The Cold😉

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Actually i'm writing the new chapter, but i had to stop for now because i had to remove my PC from my room due to some renovation, and when i'm not at home, i'm at work, like now

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I can relate dude. When I'm not home, I'm at work. Shit is stressful

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P.s. i like the thing that you are putting your stories in a connected universe, both of my stories are in the same universe

nice mention of Dinky and nickname of lyra

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Very intresting, i like where it's going
(I Hope scootaloo get a new family in lyra and bon-bon, and also a sister)

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Sorry some of your ideas won't work after reading my story now.

All the best moving ahead, though.

I'll be curious where you go now

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I'm the writer of the other fic where Lyra and Bon Bon adopt Scootaloo

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Ooh. Any plans to update it recently?

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Hopefully some time before November, October at the earliest, but that's provided things work out well

That was quite amusing

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That got intense towards the end of that chapter

Oh boy of all the things for children to find that has got to be the worst. That's going to be in for some very awkward conversations later on down the line

“Don’t make me regret this. One more time and I will not let you back in here,” she warned as she let the folder go.

I am confused, what happened before now?

“Yeah well when ponies come into my orphanage and jerk my fillies and colts around into giving them false hope they’ll be adopted, I tend to get annoyed. You’re playing with that filly like a plaything and it’s wrong.”

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Reference to her opinions here

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No no, I get that, but when did Lyra and Bon Bon ever do that?

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Wasn't wrote in the story. Happened before Scootaloo was found.

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Hmm, kinda seems like important context is missing then...

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I suppose. It's a minor grudge between the two, nothing serious. Lyra and Bon Bon aren't actually fucking her over for context

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I had a feeling they weren't

All I am saying is, a simple line like:

"Despite her feeling the anger was too strong, Lyra did understand the mare's frustration. This was not the first time they had been unable to visit for a few days in a row."

Would let the audience know the needed context

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True that woulda been better.

Interesting how you made dinky responsible about having treats.

And nice touch with liza, though for me, tootsie was easier on the memory and writing

The more you know i suppose

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Wow. Looks like heat wave's not going to be so pissy with Lyra and bon bon now is she

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“No. Politicians are liars and thieves. No offense to the mayor of course but she’s a politician. They all want a win to push themselves up the food chain.”

Sad but true that is why I don't do politics and would never in a billion years ever get into it

Hit publish by accident?

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