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TheKing2001


Only by studying the past can we win the present.

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The arrival of Wild Card, a boastful pony with magical skills and gambling problems from Trixie's past, arrives in Ponyville during Trixie's magic to make Trixie's life miserable after blaming her for his misfortune, angering Trixie's friends. Trixie's friends try to get her to stand up for herself while Trixie resists her friends' requests to challenge Wild Card.

Part of the https://www.fimfiction.net/group/217456/sunsetverse

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 29 )
Comment posted by Latonyadodson deleted March 11th

Derpy seems a little too harsh on her daughter's love life in this particular story....should we be concerned? :rainbowhuh:

Ok I was anticipating Twilight Sparkle but this is a fun little spin on the story.

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About how harsh Derpy seems about not letting her daughter have a partner, unless there is a reason for her behaviour.

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Oh that's all parents with kids. You should have seen mine

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Mine weren't that bad actually they just told everyone about shit lol but well, family embarrasses family especially in mine lmao

Whoa. Downright emotional first chapter to this latest story and an intriguing spin on "Boast Busters". So, an old rival of Trixie's shows up accusing her of ruining his life and, oddly, Trixie agrees with that. Of course, we're going to have to see how the others are going to help Trixie overcome her guilt in the later chapters.

VERY MUCH looking forward to more of this.

Another well-done effort on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely appreciated Trixie going into a bit more detail concerning her past with Wild Card (along with unintentionally making Roseluck feel bad with that line about - a certain line she didn't cross). And then Roseluck having that additional chat with Raindrops before thinking to go talking to Derpy.

Most definitely looking forward to more of this.

Interesting headcanon about berry

Another really emotional chapter. Definitely appreciated Derpy and Roseluck trying to help Trixie as they noticed how drunk she was. And, yeah, the stuff about Berry was a bad example, but good information. And, yeah, Roseluck bringing up that she is REALLY tempted to shut Wild Card up herself was a great touch.

VERY MUCH looking forward to more of this.

Oh dear. I hope rainbow wont feel jeajous about raindrop's speed ability

Hey there. Yeah, it took a while to get back to this, but it was well worth the wait. The dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all wonderfully done. REALLY appreciated Raindrops' reaction to Wild Card's harassing Trixie and Trixie not doing anything about it yet - as well as the others' attempts to help Trixie overcome her guilt enough to at least get back on with her life.

VERY definitely looking forward to more of this.

Nicely done! Something I noticed, I think you missed a word

“I’m not sleeping on the floor the record.

by the way, wild card is an oc of yours, right?

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Correct. Think I got it from an OC generator or some shit.

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Okay. I just asked as...how should I say, how does one avoid confusion if you unknowningly create an oc with the same name?

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I actually found a story the other day that had the exact the same oc name as one I made. Idk tbh, I just ignore that person's oc existence

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Right, i just want to avoid trouble

Excellent work on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely appreciated Raindrops talking to Trixie while getting her that replacement door, not only about Wild Card, but also about Raindrops's brother and the "Sister Code". And, yeah also liked Bright Idea trying to play peacemaker for Trixie and Raindrops as well as Raindrops and some of Trixie's other friends laying it into Wild Card (verbally in most cases and physically in Raindrops's case).

Definitely looking forward to more of this.

Excellent work on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked the chat between Bright and Trixie as well as Derpy, Raindrops and the others concerning the aforementioned. Then the stuff with Berry and some others planning on getting Wild Card drunk enough to spill everything was darn good too. White Lightning and Sprinkle's scene was also really beautiful. White Lightning's file was another excellent touch.

I am definitely going to be looking forward to more of it.

Nicely done and poor dinky

Absolutely loved the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. the discussion between White Lightning and Sprinkles concerning Trixie wanting them to perform at her magic show was beautiful stuff. I'm also glad that Trixie is in much better spirits now than she was in when Wild Card first showed up. And also adored Wild Card being set on the run by Raindrops. Definitely delicious karma. And the character bio on Sprinkles was more great stuff.

I am most assuredly looking forward to more of this.

Again, you did a really good job on this latest chapter. It took a while but was definitely worth the wait. REALLY liked the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely appreciated Sunset reflecting on the really complicated stuff at the bar with her friends as well as wondering about her family besides Celestia. The discussions of other Ponyville residents makes a great deal of sense too. Unfortunately, Wild Card ended up stumbling into the Ursa, which is going to lead off to the climax next chapter.

Definitely looking forward to more of this.

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