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Octavias Melody
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Octavias Melody
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This a very interesting chapter to read sweetie belle and rainbow dash pairing this will be interesting. I wounder what rarity will think .this is very interesting to read keep up a good work update more on this story soon.
Normally I don't go for these sort of stories, but this looks sort of cute.
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I'll try! I noticed this is an almost non-existant pairing, and the two as a couple are too cute to pass up as an opportunity.
This is great. Your doing luna's work.Goddess bless.
Hmmmm, I'm curious now...
This is a very good story indeed I can't wait to see the rest of it.
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Too freakin cute!!!!!
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HOT OUT OF TEN
I love out there pairings but it is when they are showing is not so out there that they are very fun to read great job
I have a feeling I need thin in my life!
Its a surprising ship to see, but you wrote a lovely little story for this thus far. For this being your first fic I commend you for it and I hope to see more added more chapters for this soon
Also since you seem like a fan of Foalcon, maybe you'd like to join our group set up for stories just like this?
Nicely written~ Ima track dis
Tracking
Never seen this duo, I like it, you have blessed this url. Tracking
Never read anything of this pairing before but I like it :P Please continue!!!
Uhhh...
Yuck
Just not my cup of tea...
Honestly don't like this second chapter but that is just because i don't personally find this, ehh, pee thing, watersports, was it? Anyway i just don't like it but i find nothing wrong with it either. Just don't think of it as "arousing" as some might think of it.
But not a bad chapter though, even if i didn't like the watersports stuff.
Still a good chappie though.
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It's a risk, I know, but part of growing as a writer is writing about a wide range of topics (plus, I did at least include a spoiler). 'sides, this at least has the two open up to each other; one of most important parts of any intimate relationship is opening yourself to another, to be vulnerable and to trust the other to not abuse that vulnerability.
7357977 true.
But a spoiler...
Huh... didn't see it since i jumped straight to the new chapter from my feed list.
Maybe place a warning in the start of ch 2?
Not necessary but might help if there is a warning in the chapter start if someone jumps straight into the chapter without looking at the spoilers.
Just a suggestion.
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Suggestion implemented, warning now displayed at the top of the chapter.
I mean, I like watersports and all, but why does Sweetie go from watching someone pee, to instantly loving the taste of urine?
Another great chapter from you. I hope a later chapter has them eating out each other's butts.
Can I skip chapter 2? I'm not really into watersports...
7358077 We definitely need some butt eating in this Story!
7358254 Sorry. It's one of my fetishes.
7358303 No need to be sorry, I didn't wanted to be sarcastic or anything. I hope they are going down on each other like
7358370 Didn't they already do that in chapter one?
7358384 There can never be to much
in a story like that! Especially when cute little white butts are involved. 
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I ceased to read. It's just not my cup of tea...
Absolutely Awesome story <3
That escalated quickly. A warning at the beginning would be useful but honestly it's my fault for not expecting festishes in a foalcon story. Watersports is not my cup of tea but it's nicely written, good work.
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There was a warning. At the top, per a suggestion from a comment below.
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I was so excited to read I missed it completely. Again well done and thanks for contributing to the clop community
The build-up to the clop feels a little rushed, needs a bit more character development, but overall I'm impressed, and can't wait to read more. Keep it up, good sir. Care for some tea and crumpets while you're at it?
(the irony, kek)
Perfect reaction to this story:
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Would love some, thanks!
So what's next on the agenda? Shower fucks? Whatever you do, I'm looking forward to it!
Great story! I felt this pairing worked well in the end, write more!
i hope to high heavens that this isn't going to end up like RD seems to think it will
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As it turns out, Spitfire is just inviting Rainbow Dash over for some Pizza at Cosmo's.
It continues!
I forgot this story was a thing. I'm glad it's continuing.
Not all ponies have last names, yanno.
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Fixed!
Loving the direction this is taking, and am also really happy it's continuing. Excellent work keep it up!
Speaking of pissing....
While this isn't one of my fetishes, the two of them are adorable enough that it manages to work.
This hits that sweet spot where it's both strange enough and adorable enough that I had to start tracking it.
Well, i can safely say this wasn't what i was expecting the next chapter to be... But then again, i have no idea WHAT i was expecting.
I'm curious if RD and SB will just go to sleep so the potion wears off before they have any more fun, or if SB would want to do something else first... I'm leaning towards the latter, but it IS your story.
I'm still not quite at the point of faving this yet, but it's getting close.
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Oh, I think you'll like where this ends up going. Watch this space.