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doomie-22
Just a guy who likes writing and reading some pony fanfiction.
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Quite good man keep it up. :)
8087767 Thanks for the comment.
As to quote Daveed Diggs, "My God..."
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Uh . . . is that a good thing or a bad thing? 
Oh my
8089342 Again I must ask, is that a good thing or a bad thing?
8089489 A little of both, but mostly leaning towards good
8089510 Um . . . okay.
moar !?
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Fear not, there will be. A friend has requested that I do another story like this, except with Rumble in Winona's place, and the setting will be the CMC clubhouse, not the Everfree Forest, thankfully.
Some part of me can't help but question why Scootaloo wasn't in this. I get the feeling she would be more into these kinds of activities than Sweetie Belle or Apple Bloom, but I don't know that for sure.
Anyway, I agree with TheFanworkReviewer and Lotus Moon: Wow. Just wow. But in a good way.
8139367 Perhaps there needs to be a sequel where Sweetie and Apple Bloom tell Scootaloo about it and she decides she wants to try it for herself. As for where she was in this, my theory is that she was hanging out with Rainbow Dash.
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Hmm... I wonder what they might have been doing. Sexy times, perhaps?
8139422 Maybe.
The foreplay is as bad as any foreplay in porn. And plus do you know the difference between eating pussy and eating butt? Because when you say they want to eat butt it sounds just plain retarded.
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Um . . . okay. Thanks for the constructive criticism. What was bad about the foreplay?
8234048 Foreplay in porn is like: man makes coffee and catches girl masturbating, they fuck and you get off. That's pretty much all it is in the story, Applebloom and Sweetie Belle meet up and fuck, no real plot to it.
8235069 Hmm, yeah, that's true. They do seem to jump right into the sex, don't they? But this is clop. It isn't really meant to have much of a plot. Granted, there are clop stories out there centered around a plot that you can find if that is indeed your sort of thing. Sweetie Belle's New Ability and Sweetie Belle's "Small" Problem are two such examples. Again, thanks for the constructive criticism.
Nice one! That'll get me through the rest of the day without harassment from the Discord servers!