Chaos is Displaced. The Tale of Loki!

by Mega NewWays97

Sequel is Up

Loki's Tale continues!

Comments

[OmegaRuby]

First!

[Phobos]

Ha burrito

[Mega NewWays97]

6352732 Nice to know, Though I am hoping to remake it with a updated formatting and editing. Yes the story was a bit fast paced that I realized was hurting it.

[NoLongerSober]

6353928 If you decide to remake it, I will gladly give it another go.

[Kit-San]

6390596 Right I'm no good with names...

[Mega NewWays97]

6476078 He does get more character later on A total inability to find one person despite searching the whole planet, is impulsive not thinking things though, and withholding information/manipulation

[Mega NewWays97]

6482494 yeah we guessed that after reading it over, of course we hand waved it as some kinda magical babble with him not truly understanding because he has only chaos magic, the story sequel well try to make it fit more.

[Lycanthromancer]

I like the different setup in the beginning (with having a second Discord), but you reeeeeally need a proofreader. Following grammar rules is important, and that's not happening here.

[Mega NewWays97]

6605566 sorry.... I just don't have an editor

[Starlight Nova]

Co-written with Thunderclap and our second story together.

What's the first, and where can I read it?

[Marsara]

This is now,
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[Cozybro]

This writing is atrocious. But the concept. Its just to entertaining to dislike. Take a like my boy, you earned it.

[Mega NewWays97]

7597349
She's from the Burning Crusader by Elementbrigade

[Galaxy of Equestria]

7902219 boo.

[Hekate Sketch]

7902224
Trixie is pretty cool. It's just that kinda reminded me of my D&D sessions.

[Galaxy of Equestria]

7902360 more like

[Takovsky]

9379199
It wasn't an insult. The fic was exactly what it was made to be. Chaotic.

In fact I applaud you.

[midnight arrow]

onto the next one this was great