A being in a heavy cloak looked out into the void of space. On the asteroid that they where standing on. The star it orbited was newborn in this universe. It raised its arm up. As a pendant was seen. With a toss it was sent up.
The hand that caught it was not a hand but Talons. With a touch it opened up to show a Lavender Alicorn, and a Black Alicorn filly. "Twilight, Nyx...." The unknown being said. "I will find my way home.
The pendant was closed and pocketed into the cloak. With a jump the cloaked being took off jumping from Asteroid and flying around it, a signal fang and goatee popping out. A voice was hard next to him. "You really think you can even find them? You know how impossible that is right?" The voice asked.
Another one cut it off. "Of course he can after all." A portal soon opened up and a all around seemed to be lights yet not in a void of something and nothing.
"He is Loki." The cloaked being face was seen. It was the once displaced Eric Smith, now know as Loki.
God of Balance.
FIN
Nice hurry with the sequel tho your story is awesome
I can't wait for the sequel
any date for the sequel?
So Evil Twilight wants to end suffering in the multiverse by killing everyone in the multiiverse? This Twilight's a Final Fantasy villain isn't she?
6337622 Kind of, just without the incredibly ridiculous hair of a character like Meister Seymour.
Well done my friend. Well done!
I think you meant single
Just as I thought. You can't kill Chaos, you can only hold it at bay for a small time. Then my fall to Chaos was truly inevitable. So now, without further ado:
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE.
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6338018 I don't want to break it but seeing how the story is over
Loki only survives because of his love for Twilight keeps him going, that and he refuses to follow his nature, in fact the second survival shows he has Transcended who he was as a Entity of Chaos into something more. Sorry.
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He is starting to sound like an Ork. If they belive something will happen, it will happen. The more orks there are, the more likely it will happen. Their weapons work because they believe they will work.
6338234 He already a Reality wrapper... who absorbed thousands of himself across timelines
Well done my friend any way do you have a date for the sequel?
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you magnificent bastard
Good end
excellent ending. I can not wait for the sequel
Overall, I thought it was a good story. Hope you do a sequel so that we know if Loki ever returns to Twilight.
Nice ending. You know, after reading all of this I realized something. My displacer Marx would get along well with Loki. Like, REALLY well. Anyways, can't wait for the sequel!
6347641 Well they could meet up you know
6347689 yeah, probably in the void.
In the immortal words of Best Pony.... That. Was. So. Awesome. This story was amazing. A little fast with the pacing and there's quite a few typos/grammatical errors, but that's not a big deal. Thank you for writing this and I look forward to reading the sequel. The only complaint I have Best Pony didn't have much of a role. Every story should have lots of Best Pony. Rainbow Dash Is Best Pony Ever
This is beautifully chaotic, imma cry