Dan never thought that he would ever see his favorite villain in video-game history. Next thing he knows, he's the very being he admires! But life may not be that easy as he appears in an unfamiliar land. What adventures will he begin in this new land? Only time will tell. But Dan knows one thing for sure. He is Alduin, terror of the skies!
Hey everyone Prince_Zodiac here. I keep seeing these displaced stories all over the place and decided I would try my hand at it. Hope you like it!
OMFG WE GOT FEATURED! 6/28/15
Oh, and this story is now
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Because Alduiin. If you don't have good grammar or spelling, I'll move this to my read later list.
Well, aside from a small mishap with your enter key, this is good so far.
I do it's just I thought Alduiin only had 1 i. I'll fix it soon on the other chapters
Thanks but I kind of had to make it that way because the admins said otherwise they couldn't distinguish who was speaking from who.
Scootaloo is how you spell her name. It's "The princesses and I" as well.
Not finding too many mistakes, but the chapters could be longer. I'm not complaining as what's here is already good, but it would be better if you got the chapters longer than a thousand words each.
Here's a good web site for help on writing if you need it.
5984143
Only if you want to be polite.
So first he changed the Season 4 ending, and now season 3 beginning? I am confused. Confused over pineapples.
I... you did that on purpose, didn't you?
Solarkness it's not the start of season 3, Sombra just came back again and Flutters is Shy, I don't get what you mean by I did that on purpose
Sorry if this is all a bit confusing. Like I said before I have done some wrighting, just not to much
I wonder if you would be up for a crossover?
5985028 longer chaps plzzz
Sorry for the short chapters. It's just that at the beging of my books I use short chapters to get the people with short attention spans (no offence to anyone who does) hooked in and to get the feeling of the story across. I'll try to make them longer soon.
And NewUnitedEmpire I am willing to do a crossover
I'm sorry, but the writing is terrible. Its paced way too fast, I'm sure there's a good few grammar errors, and there's no conflict at all! Just pointless Mary Sue banishing! This needs a complete rewrite, NOW!
One, this is the begning of the story so I'm making it fast paced to get the point across. Two, this is my first story, so I'm not that good yet. Three, the next chapter will introduce the conflict but my editor is looking it over so please be pacient. Four, there are some grammar errors because Fimfiction doesn't have spell check and I've been kinda busy with other things so I kinda of rush them. And finally five, if you don't have any pleasent comments then please refrain from commenting. If you have a problem about my stories and it's not one that I asks my readers about to improve my stories, then just PM me. I didn,t have an editor before any of these chapters were released so yes there will be some grammar problems.
Dude.... There's a translator for the Dragon language.
5985292 He said yes in case you didn't get a PM.
5985466 With me as his editor (for now), I'll be pushing for him to make them longer.
5984306 .... Why didn't I get a notification about this?
Moon_Fire
5986031 Um, I'm using that translator
5986043 .... Really? Those sentences in the chapter didn't translate properly though.
5986107 yea I was confused when that happened too. I guess it's like google translate. Translates well one way, but not the other
The dovakin murders innocent ponies
Rip him to shreds Dan!!!!!! 
5986598 Don't worry I'll make sure the Dovakiin gets what he deserves, but it might take awhile
Dan: WHAT! I'MA KILL HIM NOW!
Dan if you killed him right now then their would be no story.
Dan: Fine! Whatever!
5986039 Because I'm sneaky like that.
5986941 Again I didn't get a notification.
.... *facepalms* I had thought you would change that without my prompting.... Right now you have two chapters labeled as chapter four. I think you need to change the one I edited to chapter five, unless you'd rather stay stuck on chapter four for the rest of the fic
5987266 What did I just say? I'm sneaky like that. And I am too beautiful to be notified about.
5987623 HA! I got one about that comment.
5987695 Oh no! My beauty showed through this time!
*No lies now*
Pleased to hear about that
5987284 Oh woops I'll change that when I can
5987965 i know this is completely out of the story line but what if alduiin (Dan) gains the power of schrodinger from Hellsing ultimate?
Also if your wondering what schrodinger's power is here's a hint
"everywhere and nowhere"
And
Immortality
5989892 Probably not because Alduiin from skyrim doesn't have that power. Sorry.
5990157 aw well that sucks but hey the story is good. Plus try imagining a dragon that can basically teleport everywhere he wants to be and all he has to do is think he's at that place and Walla he's there
5990227 Well if I could give him the power I would.
Also I do need an answer to this question. Is everyone ok with Twilight being a love intrest for Dan? I wanna be sure now so it doesn't scres up the story later.
https://www.thuum.org/translate.php
^Very Useful
Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo (<throughout the chapter(s) it the same I take it)
And shouldn't his speech be in Bold seeing how he a dragon and therefore have a rather long voice?
Unless he using magic to change his voice
Also use the reply tab to the right of the comment(s) or they won't get your reply
5991243 Yea his voice is normal and my editor should remind me on how to correctly spell the names from now on
FIRST......sorry but i like how this one was long and i love the overall story so far
5993726 Nah it's fine, I'm glad your enjoying my story, really makes my day when someone says that.
5991217 I'm using that
I feel like I've read this part somewhere else without the displacement...
5993958 Really?
Huh... Hooe I didn't steal anyones ideas on accident
5994080 so you did so on purpose
5994095 Oh shit sorry didn't mean to say hooe. I menat hope. Stupid phone has a really small keyboard.
5994095 oh and they're fighting in Ponyvile, not Canterlot which would be the capital
5994115 huh I thought it was canterlot, guess it is different then
Am I the only one who noticed the Words of Power were wrong? The normal speaking is too.
5994680 Yea I'm not actually looking up the words of power. I'm just using a translator