A Displaced Dragon

by Prince_Zodiac

Chapter Two: The Truth (Rewritten)

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Chapter Two: The Truth

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Third Person View

Celestia and Luna just stared at Alduin, terrified by his presence. As they continued to stare, Twilight's friends and Discord came running. "Twilight!" cried Apple Jack. "Ya did it! Ya beat that horrible Tirek!"

"Um, I appreciate the thanks girls, but I did'n't beat Tirek." Twilight said.

"But if you didn't," said Rainbowdash, "then who did?"

"He did." At Twilights words, the five ponies and the draconequus then looked to who Twilight was pointing at, and they all gasped.

"That's ah mighty big dragon." said Apple Jack.

Fluttershy was about to say something when she noticed Discord was shaking with fear. "Discord, are you okay?"

"Im-Impossible." Discord said shakely "He can't be free." Discord just watched the dragon as it landed on the ground and looked at first the princesses, then him.

"Ah, Discord, it has been awhile." The dragon said "You seem, afraid. But, that is to be expected, as our last meeting was, destructive."

"How did you break out Alduin?" Celestia asked having regained her composer and took a fighting stance.

"My my Celestia," the dragon chuckled, "if anypony were to know that answer, I thought it would be you. You knew very well that the elements wouldn't stay stronger than me forever. I would have eventually gained enough energy to break out of my stone imprisonment." Alduin smirked.

"Celestia, what is he talking about?" Twilight asked curious, and slightly worried.

"Twilight, do you remember the legend of the terror of the skies?" Celestia asked.

"Yea, why?" Twilight responded.

"Well, that wasn't just a legend. It was a moment in Equestria's history."

"WHAT? B-BUT THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE! THAT WAS JUST A TALE! WASN'T IT?"

"I'm afraid not. This is Alduin, terror of the skies."

Dan's POV

I looked at the terrified ponies. So they all knew the story huh? Well that made this a whole lot more simple. I looked to Celestia as she began to speak.

"What do you want Alduiin?" I chuckled. Still didn't take the time to learn my tongue I take it? Well I suspected as much.

"I want what I wanted those many years ago." I said. Celestia looked as if she was preparing to hear me say something bad. "Peace." I simply stated.

"What?" Celestia asked surprised.

"Peace. That's all I ever wanted. Of course, I couldn't exactly ask because I didn't know your tongue. I tried to avoid conflict, but you seemed to believe I wanted destruction which, I don't understand how you came up with that considering when you first attacked I was minding my own business. Back in those days, I only ever attacked in self defense.

"But, thou caused so much chaos."

"Again, I only attacked in self defense."

"How do we know you're not just lying?"

"If I was lying, do you think that I would rush to Ponyville, and defend the ponies by attacking that demon, when I just broke out?" Celestia contemplated that statement in her head. After a little while, Celestia's face went from deep thought, to sudden realization. She smiled and nodded.

"I suppose that does make sense. Very well Alduin. If it is peace that you truly want, then I guess we can try this out."

"Thank you Celestia. Perhaps now I can live in this land in peace. Farewell for now." And with that, I flew off towards the mountains to find myself a new place to live.

Author's Note:

Edit: Okay so this chapter not only did I fix the grammar but I also made Celestia question Alduin a little more when he said he wanted peace. Hope this fixing makes the story more enjoyable!

Comments

[Moon_Fire]

Because Alduiin. If you don't have good grammar or spelling, I'll move this to my read later list.

[Prince_Zodiac]

I do it's just I thought Alduiin only had 1 i. I'll fix it soon on the other chapters

[Mr Good Guy]

not bad, but so short and rushed...

[Hoppa_21]

Well... that was easier than expected. I thought they would be more stubborn.

[Bronzer]

But, you seemed so sure for our destruction.

Correct Response: Then you shouldn't have attacked me, stupid bitch. Every death I caused is on your head and is directly your fault. Just as surely as if you had killed them yourself.

Now, may I have this chance at peace?

Correct Continuation: Or do I have to eat you?

I suppose we could give this a chance.

Considering the alternative is Equestria becoming a sea of fire, ice, and lightning...

[Dragonlover553]

How did you break out Alduiin?

All of Celestia's foes break out eventually. She should know this by now.

[Dragonlover553]

B-BUT THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE! THAT WAS JUST A TALE! WASN'T IT?

Says the one who believed the NNM story.

[Kevin Lee]

6191185 As well as all those life-altering/world-destroying/soul-devouring/must-never-see-the-light-of-day-ever-again artifacts that somehow keep getting stolen....seriously, you should consider arresting that Daring Do bitch and her accomplices, Aruizotl and Dr. Caballeron!....

Oh, and here's a thought: you have that blindingly bright ultimate weapon of mass destruction that you gleefully toss above the world every hour on the hour--why not take those life-altering/world-destroying/soul-devouring/must-never-see-the-light-of-day-ever-again artifacts AND SHOW THEM THE LIGHT OF DAY? Hide them THERE where no pony will ever be able to get their hooves/claws/tails/hands/tentacles/horns/talons/shit/or-any-other-manipulative-appendages on them again? Yeah, you know what I'm talking about: THROW THEM IN THE FUCKING SU----

oh, wait, I made that post before

sorry, nevermind

[GameHunter]

This chapter:

You wanted peace?
yes

ok bye

[Not_a_Brit]

6322151
Maybe the princesses will ask Alduin if he can come around for tea and biscuits.

[Dark_Night]

6322151 yep. that pretty much sums it up.

[Cozybro]

6322151 The end. Wow, what an incredible story.

[Scarlet Scales]

Hmm, i don't know if it's my weakness for tolkeinesk stories, but this seems to be, Severely lacking in descriptions of any kind other than alduin, discord, and cherilee. What about the environment they reside in, what time of day is it, the weather, the wind rustling manes from alduins landing, a description of the SHOUTS? I see potential here, and i'll keep reading in hopes it gets better, but it doesn't look good for now.

[Der Kaiser]

two chapters in and you have him one-shot one of the most powerful Villains in the Series.

[aicosh101]

8127530
Don't you mean one shout haha I'll show myself out

[KVFFour]

8274903
One Shout Man.

[Italian Sniper]

8127530
Alduin can literally consume entire worlds, I don't think a magic stealing centaur would be a very big problem. Also, marked for death is op.