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the unsubstantiated rape claims still don't work for me. It's not the supposedly raped mare bringing the charge and she can't speak in the stallions defense. So I'm guessing this is part of the whole Equestria defines sexual harrassment as rape thing. But that makes no sense when you live in a world with changelings that can perfectly mimic a pony. Want to weaken the guard shapeshift into a mare an accuse them of rape.
I find it hard to believe anyone could think Celestia would have someone executed over an unsubstantiated claim. And that claim should have really pissed Twilight off. Also a blue wall of silence is a bad thing, but the guard must have REALLY bad relations between ponies to constantly be reporting on each other
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Actually, now that you mentioned it, the Changeling Invasion probably didn't help any. Because now any "aggressive" suitor could be a love-sucking parasite in disguise, or so some ponies may think, and while it turns out they're not actually Changelings they can still get in trouble for whatever did or didn't happen.
Quick note:
There's either a word missing there, or a "t" in place of a "s".
I... think I mentioned this before. At least in passing. Fluttershy is a mare often crippled with fear. But even more debilitating than her fear of dangerous predators she can't use her Wild Empathy on is her fear of social shame. Like many bullying victims, she's deathly afraid of making a fool of herself, of offending anypony, of being rejected and humiliated and ridiculed for things she usually feels are her fault even if they're not. Just remembering how she used to be taunted for her weak flying skills was enough to shatter her like she was made from weak glass. I'm more and more thinking that's what she was offered: To be rid of her social fears. Think about it. She can still be humiliated and shamed, but that's alright now, the stallions like to see her like that. It's sexy and hot. Maybe she still deserves it, but it's no longer a bad thing—she no longer has to feel guilty.
I still say twilight should make her own queendom with a third better policy then team creepy and team prude.
It's still annoying for them to go on about how bad the Equestrian laws are to males because it's a fantasy setting so you can't actually refute anything.
This story... it makes me feel weird... but I can't help but keep reading it... I want to know what happens, and I want there to be a positive resolution to all of this.
I think the thing I'm dealing with is I'm not sure who's side I'm on. Being more knowledgeably about sex then Twilight, I know that there is some validity in Shining Armor's words, but on the other hand I feel like he's taking this WAY TOO FAR.
I need a break, a nap, and sex, not necessarily in that order...
Oh god that is some eyes wide shut shit.
Also Shining has apparently turned into an MRA on double crack.
This chapter decided to make me continue reading. I was thinking of dropping it if some things didn't become crystal clear soon. Good job.
I might have bought into Team Creepy's spiel, but they're taking it too far in the other direction from how things are now. That combined with the bites and mutilations(disabled horns and wings), just shouts that this isn't some kind of cultural revolution like they claim it is. If they were REALLY on the level, they wouldn't need to use bat pony bites to advance their cause. The system may be messed up, but that doesn't justify many of the actions they're taking here.
Christ, should I continue? Or should I run? I have no idea. I was rather enjoying the mystery to this point, and the thing is, I'd like to learn more about these vampires, and I want to see Shining get his own dick handed to him, but, agh, I'm not sure I can continue.
It's nothing of the writer's fault, I think the pacing is spot on and the writing is very good, my only issue being the vampire things, that seems a bit nuts, and I find it a bit too crazy, but I'm willing to roll with it.
But I'm finding it hard to continue, I fucking despise people who try to justify rape, because that's just fucked. So I was ready to punch something while reading the chapter, which actually shows good writing, because I got pissed at the characters rather then the story or writer, but what ever. I find that whole "oh poor males" thing fucking annoying, guys have it way better than girls, payed more, respected more, and have had a much more privileged history.
But here's my issue with the story, I feel that "Team Creepy" (or as I shall call them, Team Rape Supporting Cunts) hasn't been properly defined as the "bad guys", so I'm terrified that if I keep reading, they'll win or something, and therefor I'll get pissed. So yeah.
A good start gone completly OOC in almost all of the characters and even in a bullshit way, realy sad...
You are such a good writer! I want to punch Shining in the balls, that dickface!
Cadence just stepped up to a whole other level of creepy as shit!
...Am I the only one who is rooting for shiny and Candy and actually views both sides of the argument as possibly valid? I mean I can still see that there is something in the works that is altering them a bit, but I can also see how this is valid.
Also Shiny is an idiot. If he had gone with the option of convincing Pinkie to Dom Twi and Flutters to sub for her and let her make her own bloody discoveries he actually might have had a chance, becouse AJ and Dash might actually stand nuetral in that case. AJ becouse she's interesting and can see both sides, Dash becouse from what I've seen so far she's asexual and tends to ride things out to a point.
Funny thing is, this is the first part of the story I actually thought was in any way disturbing or horrifying. Not because of the sexual elements, not even because of how fucked-up their society is, but because some people actually believe the real world works like that. From the ludicrous idea that slapping someone's ass is treated as rape to the complete miscomprehension of how hormones work. It's utterly depressing that some people can keep up a functioning lifestyle and at the same time have no actual idea whatsover what real life or people are actually like.
Second Viewing
Listen and believe
*sniff sniff* Twilight, RUN! It's a trap made of straw you've been lured into!
Regarding a previous comment made by me, this is either a change, or more likely I forgot about this part, so yeah, Trick Question, I'm coming for your tables and desks!
While I certainly value consent far above what they want I can see where they're coming from at least. They believe it to genuinely be in everyponys best interest. You wouldn't call forcing a child to go to the dentist child abuse after all. It's for the kids own good.
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And I'm fairly certain the term would be 'sexist much' just from every other time I've heard such a thing said.
Hmm, here's a thought, what's gonna go on if The Order meets Our Town? Will an all out war break out or would they form an alliance?
Wow, this is a hideously puritanical Equestria, though you get points for doing it from a matriarchal POV and some good society-building as to how that would look different from patriarchal puritanism. You've actually made one considerably more puritanical than the one I write, which I model mostly on 1900's - 1910's sexual morals.
Ok, I'm done. This went from interesting creepy mystery to vomit inducing creepy and so far OOC that its in a whole new fucked up plane of existence.
All my NOPE, NOPE.COM, NOPE.JPEG *flips table* Lady Sugar Violet is outta here
Suddenly, politics!
Scuse me please imma just take my stuff and leave f**k this s**t I'm out
well then. Thats is.... disturbing on a whole other level. I am all for free and radical thinking mind you, but this forceful conversion bullshit?! Whats next, the Gestapo?!
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I noticed in that whole dinner discussion, mares being with other mares was mentioned, but nothing about stallions with stallions.
....that doesn't mean finding a gay stallion later on in this story is out of the question, is it?
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It's certainly not out of the question.
fucking snoozefest
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What? Shut up