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I was listening to this while reading, why do I some how feel it was inappropriate as it was appropriate?
As always, awesome chapter! No story has me hooked like this one!
I'm ready for them.
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I'm probably not ready for them.
On another note, this whole experience must've been terrifying—for Rainbow Dash.
We see Twilight pontificate about her own psychological state and how her body and mind interact and what mechanism has greater control over her at a given moment...
Well, Twilight wasn't the one who did some weird mating dance against her will.
She's not the one having to deal with a full-blown vampony curse raging in her mind and body, and the sheer temptation of what Twilight offered this chapter is downright cruel. And Rainbow doesn't have Twilight's educated, brilliant mind to help analyse and categorise. She can't cope using Twilight's genius intellect. She's a mare of action trapped in a situation where everything is pushing her into loss of contol, one way or another. She has every reason to be more frightened than Twilight Sparkle is. And I don't think Twilight realises the full extent of Rainbow's turmoil. They nearly tumbled into a total disaster; Twilight going blind for a little while was the good outcome. Yeah, Rainbow Dash's probably kicking herself. A lot.
Also, perhaps Rainbow's supposed dominant streak isn't as complete as many characters seem to think. Could be she was just making a quip, could also be that she's worrying she might develop actual masochistic tendencies. That, coupled with the fact that Rainbow reacted very stongly to Twilight directly telling her what to do... Well, could be coincidence. We should still keep it in mind.
and its back! on that note, how much have the previous chapters been changed, since this site doesn't tell readers things like that? do I have to go back and re-read?
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I haven't made (and shan't make) any major changes without posting a blog tagged with this story regarding the change. So no worries.
Besides, I just make the changes the voices tell me to. I guess it's all a ploy to make it seem like I'm writing a fictional story, or something? No idea why.
I just exploded twice from happiness. I'm now the ghost of a commentator.
What happens in dream vegas stays in dream vegas.
Wow, Twilight, the patronizing is strong with this one.
Yes, yes you are.
To quote Spike from RDP: "Twilight, are you trying to get known as the girl who compares dicks to books?...See? There you go again, you combined books and the male anatomy, it's gotta stop Twilight."
I'm sure you mean 'Dear Celestia, how I could feel it'.
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You're probably reading it as a question, but I'm pretty sure it's okay to write it the way it is. The "how" modifies the "could" specifically. Either way sends the same message, but the latter doesn't feel as natural to me. I could be wrong, though. (And how!)
There's the question of whether the threat being secretly warned about in the journal is an entirely meta threat and the entire story thus far is just the stage for something else, but I'm kind of thinking that's not the case. Twilight has already attempted time-travel jujitsu, and Luna's garbled attempts to explain the Order could still be construed to mean it's some sort of memetic force. Allegedly the Order becomes more or less explained soon, so I guess we'll see if the Journal warnings make more sense in light of another Luna meeting.
Also Twilight finally had consenting sex. That happened. Rainbow Dash definitely wins the infected friend contest for least creepy and rape-y. There's definitely no ideological changes to ponies prior to whatever the hell those stones do to them. That rather obvious wall between believers and non-believers is something Twilight should probably focus on; I'm a little disappointed she decided Shining Armor's arguments made more sense, but I guess her initial position could have been that there was no bias regarding genders at all, which is obviously not true.
It was at this point that the story more than made up for the political crap earlier by having the hottest sex scene ever.
Ehh I doubt that
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powercast: square peg in a round hole
Silly book. I'm one of the few people I know that would be incorruptible. I value my self control and beyond that I would rather die than give up my humanity. I've been known to become dangerous when those boundaries are pushed. You can become as corrupt as you want and I'll only grumble... But you try and force me to cross my own boundaries? Son, there are epics written about people like me pushed to their limits.
This story is sick and twisted and I think I've only gotten like 2 erections but it's still interesting. I'm certainly reading it for the intrigue rather than the sex.
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To be fair, the disclaimer says, "This story features extremely disturbing and graphic content," not, "This story will give you at least three erections."