Page generated in 0.03 seconds
Total duration
1,130 users online
1,804,631 hits today, 1,872,792 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Yay, I've been reminded of the, very accurately named, "fucking lobotomy box."
As always, I'm not sure if I enjoy this or not, but I shall continue reading.
you are being lied to Oh fuck
Really loving the intrigue here :) keep up the great work!
6324105 Who's telling who? Is Twilight telling us? Is someone telling Twilight? Ahh! I either love or hate this!
damn. I hate losing a story. I may continue this for a while, but I am very disappointed that Luna's part of the Order.
Twilight is well aware there re restricted portions of the Canterlot Archives and she only has a problem with it if they get in her way, see the ep where she tried to stop time.
Also not a fan of the Pegacorn thing
Overall, I think I'd rather read a Fall of Equestria story where no one pretends the mare's being enslaved is anything more than for the males benefit rather than some idea what's happening is good for everyone in the end. I'd rather Twilight have just tried to blast Luna when she claimed there were no sides.
Also, a drunk person can rape someone. They most likely don't mean t do harm. They still do it, so the argument it's not rape is BS. "Am I facing an enemy that would make ponies okay with raping their children? Even if it's only their adult children? BEcause if I am, they are my enemy"
6324217
webtoon.phinf.naver.net/20141215_7/1418623632687HHncE_JPEG/1418623632635199528.jpg?type=q90
6324311
Yeah, it's hard to write something like this knowing some avid readers will pull out here or there. If you look at the comments over the past few chapters you'll notice that at least a third of the people reading and commenting now will have to ragebail just because my readers' varied expectations are completely incompatible.
But the story bravely soldiers on.
6324311
That Luna was part of that has been foreshadowed for a long, long while now. It's not really a surprise. And I think we can't take what Twilight thinks now about what happened as something Twilight would under normal circumstances. She's had several doses of the poison; even if she's mostly sane, it is still twisting her little by little. And whenever somepony manages to waste her time for longer than her protection works it get worse.
In fact, Luna is the perfect victim for the Order. She wanted freedom—freedom from her crushing feelings of guilt. The Tantabus was an expression of Luna's masochistic need to punish herself. That's something she shares with Twilight Sparkle, who can drive herself insane with worry that she might have disappointed somepony close to her. If what I think is correct, it goes something like this:
The vampony infection creates an overwhelming fetish in mares to submit to another pony; and from what we've seen so far, it's always or nearly always directed towards a stallion. They want the stallion to take control of them.
At the same time, infected stallions develop a need to control mares, to become their masters and put them in their places. However, it doesn't seem to work with every stallion. Some end up as submissives, and the other vamponies are aware of that. They categorise them as mares (or mare-cunts).
Perhaps it's a matter of sexual orientation? We have not seen the infection's effects on a gay pony yet. Our entire sample is straight or at least possibly bi.
Either way, the need to submit/be submitted to is planted, along with a sexual overdrive bordering on torture when it goes unfulfilled for long. The Order uses it as leverage on those ponies it wishes to induct who are not yet vulnerable enough to guilt. In the cases of Luna and, I believe, also Fluttershy, they were desperate to have someone take their guilt away; Fluttershy blaming herself for Discord's disappearance, Luna for... well. You know the drill.
The stone(s) do exactly that. They take away a pony's ability to feel such guilt, to feel this kind of shame. Perhaps they can still feel a little bad about something, but it's nothing compared to what a sane and healthy individual would.
Together with the need to submit, this creates slaves who want nothing more than to be treated like slaves and taken control (and care) of, who feel little to no guilt for any order their masters give them. And masters who are comfortable with abusing their slaves in ways they would've baulked at before.
I think Luna was truthful here. Even the part where she said that the goal isn't to transform everypony into monsters. You just need to do that to the most important members of Equestria; the ones who could throw a wrench in your plans.
However... that last line is really troubling.
6324751 the Luna part was so obviously foreshadowed I was hoping it was a red herring. Of course Luna suggesting that Twilight could trust Celestia completely and yet also suggesting Celestia isn't trustworthy is confusing.
6324751
I believe there was talk of stallions being effected as mares are.
6325655
I think what Luna meant was "It's crazy to trust somepony else above even your own judgement, but if you do, Celestia isn't a bad choice." And that Celestia acts according to what she believes is her little ponies' best interest—Luna simply doesn't agree with her choices.
6325740
Yup, and I noted that. Plus Pinkie said Rarity likes to be dominant towards other infected mares. We really need a bigger sample size. Perhaps Rainbow Dash? That is, if she really is gay.
6324666 I can't click on the link, so I'm going to assjme that it's something humorous and relevant
6324734 I went through a similar thing with my story. By the end of it a lot of people had bailed, but that's ok because the people who did stay made it known how much they loved the story which helped me out so much. So I say to you, keep up the fantastic work. This story is filled to the brim with intrigue and mystery and I just can't get enough of it! Trust me when I say that I'll probably make it to the end of this story!
6325777
Try entering http://webtoon.phinf.naver.net/20141215_7/1418623632687HHncE_JPEG/1418623632635199528.jpg?type=q90 into your address bar.
6326198
i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/447/814/0ac.png
6324105 That was my first thought. This, after WHOEVER YOU ARE, STOP READING THIS JOURNAL a few chapters ago.
YOU ARE BEING LIED TO!?!? Fuck. What is going on here?!? it is obviosly linked to the other message. Who is writing this? I don't even know anymore. DAYUM, you're a writer!!!
orig01.deviantart.net/8baf/f/2010/085/4/a/epic_plot_twist_motivational_by_draconichero18.jpg
You're an adult, they're adults. You're allowed to want these things Twilight.
Yup, lobotomies confirmed. Sorry Luna but...
ummmmmm
Hmm so meany veiws as I see it there is the spring orders veiw twilights veiw then a veiw I see it from: not to stop the spring from there moral of freedom but stop the way they are going about it I mean infecting ponys with a vampire viuris seems a bit EXTREAM for a political issue
8228060
Oh my God, get a spellchecker man.
Can barely read that horrible Grammer.