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Note: Spike's age has been retconned to eleven to match with canon (Twi has been in Ponyville for a little longer than a year at this time).
Just made a few minor edits to fix errors and remove some repetitive speech, nothing content-related.
I'm really not sure what to say lately. To much guessing, lack of info.
Twilight overlooks the possibility that dragon's mature differently from ponies.
Seems vamponies are anthro? If so, Twilight should still have a better word for fingers when you've got dragons, minotaurs, and Discord around.
I feel like Twilight ought to let Pinkie change her so she could learn first hand the difference between a vampony and a member of the order of Spring. "I CONsented to allow Pinkie to convert me, and I have to say that I think your little Order gives vamponies a bad name!"
If bloodhorn's can regrow their horns then cutting them off isn't a big deal. Which makes it kind of minor as a sign of submission, and since thestrels don't need feathers it's the same for pegasi losing their flight feathers.
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Hmm, was that supposed to be Twilight just exclaiming a bit in the journal, or a message someone else inserted that she apparently missed (since she continued normally afterwards).
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Oh Celestia. There are no "fingers" in this story, let me be very clear about that. I don't want to run afoul of the rules.
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that's where this chapter stops
Delicious! Glad to see you back and raring to go :D
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I was starting to thing anthro, but sge mentioned four knuckles, as well as the form of the 'feet', and that theory was out the window.
Also, trixie's description of what she saw with braeburn wouldn't have matched either.
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I'm still wondering, too. With Unicorns and Pegasi we have a baseline of what their transformation will look like. I'm trying to work out what or even if Earth vamponies look like anything we've seen before, but nothing comes to mind.
I'm also pondering why the effects are as they are. Why are the female vamponies so intensely submissive? Or are most ponies submissive and the Order plans to turn the males who are into females? They already cut off some stallions' horns, after all. So many question...
Well, there's still one Pinkie chapter to go. Fingers crossed we won't have to wait long for it.
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I can't see any gender changws happening, considering the females are submitting to the stallions. Perhaps the stallions themselves will be submitting to the darkhoof... Thingy.... That trixie saw...
Of course there could be more of them going around, likely is, which would mean there isn't some rogue darkhoof... Thingy.... Going around and the stallions would be submitting to them as a whole.
Am i wrong to recall the one trixie saw being female?
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Trixie never mentioned a darkhoof. They saw a "pegasus-like creature bearing wings like a bat and a feral hissing voice" which would be a nightwing.
I base the theory of gender-switching on the discussion between Shining Armor and the Bat Ponies Twilight overheard in the castle.
This story actually scares me. The tension (in more than one definition) is building rapidly, and I REALLY hope for a good outcome. Knowing these stories, I won't get one.
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Perhaps you know "these stories", but you don't know me, now do you?
Nothing I do is gratuitous or patterned. Everything is possible, good or bad.
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You made me even more unsure.
But what's that? A glimmer of hope in the distance?
Nonetheless, what I said still holds true. This story terrifies me in how it spirals out of control, the intensity constantly builds, and (scariest of all for me) Twilight can't trust anypony.
Not even herself.
The idea of "traitors among us," has always been an interesting idea for me, but when it goes from "traitor(s) among us," to "trust no one," the story tends to go from interesting to scary for me. The idea that even your closest friends could have the worst intentions (or what they THINK is best, but is really the worst) towards you is terrifying. When it's a group looking for one traitor, it's fun. When it's one searching futilely for a trusted friend amongst traitors, it becomes terrifying.
You've made me terrified.
Bravo.
I really enjoy this story...it's quite intereting to see what has come from this. I really enjoy Vampinkie, probably because she hasn't hit by the Lobotomy Stone (every time that stone comes up I think of lobotomies...except instead of trying to cure irrational behaviors and psychosis it is removing inhibitions and a bit of ones moral compass). The only thing that bothers me is that it all seems to be leading to the conclusion that :
A) they all end up vamponies that somewho keep their sanity while losing some morality and ending up in a Master/Thrall related herd or
B) twilight saves the day by restoring morality but is unable to cure the vampirism
Idfk thats just my take on it.
Good job!
I just read this whole story all the way through, all one hundred thousand words of it.
Madame, you are a fantastic writer. The content is unremittingly horrific all the way through - sexual violence, physical assault, psychological torture, magical violation of the mind, and grotesque physical and mental mutilation. At this point I would put the odds of Twilight's story ending in suicide at better than one in three. Reading this made me feel disgust, loathing and fear.
And yet I still read the whole thing. No matter how gut-wrenching the experience, I still wanted to know what happened next.
That is the mark of both true skill and talent. I salute you.
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Aww! Thanks for the kind words. I will be picking up writing more once I am no longer in pain from becoming a cyborg (just got home today after surgery yesterday discussed in my blog).
Although, I should point out one pony's "horrifying" is another pony's... something else entirely. (I'm not doing my job if you don't end up questioning your sanity along the way, I think.)
And now I really hope Celestia blasts them all to bits. Not even Twilight has my vote anymore.
Waitaminute... When Twilight starts to succumb to Cheerilee, it involved direct, close eye contact. And again here, there is close eye-contact before Twilight wonders if she's falling in love. In fact, the eye-contact -> Twilight wants it pattern occurs multiple times with Pinkie Pie. Very suspicious.
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Eh, no shame in that.
Again, no shame in that. Sometimes the hyper in control need to let go, need to let someone else take the wheels.
Hmm darkhooves look like King sombra ok... WAIT HOLD ON A SECOND[This is probably nothing but this whole mess (presumably) started in the crystal empire and what did king sombra rule before he was taken out THE CRYSTLE EMPIRE dose anyone else see an connection here
Shut the fuck up Twilight. There's nothing wrong with wanting a gay slut of a gryphon to dominate a gay slut of a stallion.
I do t want Twi to become submissive. No more than temporarily, it just isn’t right
BRO EVEN PEDOPHILE IS A HORSE PUN